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GunSlash The Dinosaur
March 7th, 2008, 09:31 PM
Name: George Draco
Codenamed: GS(GunSlash)
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Species: Dinosaur(velociraptor)
Height: 6' flat
Dominant hand: Ambidextrous
Known Relatives: Uncle(Name: John Draco, Codenamed: Sin (Assassin))
Allergies: None known
DOB: The late summer of 1989
Birthplace: Long Beach, California

History:
After his father was shot and killed in a gang related attack, GS went over the deep-end. He ended up going to juvenile at the age of 8, and was released at age 10. During his return to school he was picked on by a bully. He eventually struck down the bully and 2 other people when he was being ganged up at age 12. They were all sent to the hospital and GS back to juvenile. This time he go out at age 15 and when he did, he was informed that his mother was killed in a cross fire between two gangs...one of them was an allied gang and was running from the shooters.
He went into the allied gang and wanted them to find every last on of "those mother f***ing sons of b****s and kill them all!!"...he somehow kept his word...
At age 16 he had wiped out the gang that killed his mother down to the last member...Hhe was crowned the co-leader of the group after his successful plan to finish what was left of them, though, he rejected the offer and then started living the gang by what was known as his only moral: "Defend your own..."
He eventually met with his dad's young brother and his uncle at age 18, Sin. He said he had a gift for him. When they met up he gave him a sword and a better gun. "Your father knew of his death, he wanted me to give you these in his memory..." said Sin. Upon this experience he found out his family was a gang itself...He took the both items and wore them both where ever he goes.

Goals: To defend his family and his kind
Likes: Picking fights, Blackmailing people.
Dislikes: K9 Crew(the ones who kill his dad), The fuzz(police)
Fears: The Blast Gang(A very old gang with about 100 members), The death of another relative.
Life and death: "I could care less about my life, all I know I need to do is to kill to stay alive...Fate will decide when I die."
People: "Society makes me sick, my only friends are those and my gang and my uncle."
Work: "Dont make me laugh, i cant work with my record. You can blame that of the f***ing fuzz for that."
Danger: "I would kill whoever wants to try to attack me."
Fighting: "its how I live"
Anger/Forgiveness: "You piss me off, I will kill you without mercy"
Mental condition: Anger issues, very violent, no feelings towards others.

Residence: On some old street apartment.
Occupation: None
Social Class: Gangster
Economic Class: "Im poor as f***!"
Alignment: "Wtf is that?"
Reputation: "Im one hell of a badass"

Powers: self-trained hand to hand combat with help from some of the others in his gang
Combat Abilties: "You want a list of what i can do? Bah, you have no business about knowing what you are up against until you want to fight me."
Ultimate Attacks: Head shot "Instant kill, I've made at least 30 so far"
Basic Fighting Style: "I would say close-ranged cause not everyone can get a gun nowadays, nevertheless, bullets."
Talents: Can use both hands equally
Strengths: Has little fear of death, fast
Weaknesses: Talking about hurting his kind(Really pisses him off), a faint tender point on the side of his head.

Relationships: "I never wanted anyone, I was always in juvey alone..."
Friends: "A real friend? 0, A gang friend? 25(thats about the whole gang)"
Rivals: "Every gang wants a piece of me since I wiped out the Beeatchs gang."
Enemies: "All the other gangs are my enemies"


His logo is in my avatar and in my picture of him(EDIT: sry for the humungo size):
http://b.imagehost.org/0218/GunSlash_copy.jpg

Biohazard
March 7th, 2008, 11:14 PM
uuuhm

The bio is waaaaaay too short. You kinda need things like likes, dislikes, weaknesses, etc. You have his name and bio.......I'd update it in a hurry if I were you. it's that or let a mod come by and close it. Your choice, man.

Look around at the other fancharacter topics to get an idea of how you can improve yours.

Black Knight
March 8th, 2008, 05:13 AM
I applaud you on having a good specie and a pretty orginal story.

Nether the less I'll close this thread if you fail to add more to it.

Deano
March 8th, 2008, 10:01 AM
It's a good bio and a nice design, but like they say, needs more of a bio.

I on the other hand am gonna help =P There's a bio template HERE (http://forum.sonicearth.com/showthread.php?t=716) that's ok to use and gives all required information if completed properly. Just edit your post to use this instead.

GunSlash The Dinosaur
March 8th, 2008, 10:17 AM
Im going to Fix the bio now
Edit: is it okay now?

Black Knight
March 8th, 2008, 11:31 AM
A lot better, keep it up. ^^