Big Improvement.

[Ziggy]

I looked up a few tutorials, and did this comic as best as I could by memory.
As you can see, My comics have changed a lot.
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff207/Ziggy101_bucket/BESTCOMICPROJECT.png

[Day]

.... was there a point to this?

Sure, it looks pretty, but the story is so disjointed I'm having to grab a needle and thread and piece it together with some of the worst cross-stitch known to man.

Get a plot, or get a clue. You need all three elements to make a decent comic.


Plot
Visuals
Tone


Go back, try again. You ARE getting better though.

[Ziggy]

Plot
Visuals
Tone
Go back, try again. You ARE getting better though.

Plot
Visuals
and
Tone.

I understand a little of what you're trying to explain, so could you go deeper in the details?

[Sanic]

Plot: Don't be so all over the place. Tighten what the hell you're doing a bit, and then work it into something Understandable.

Visuals: Try going for something a bit less... 'meh'. Flashier kthxbi.

Tone: ... D:

Also, get rid of the unnessecary Long-ass credits. Seriously. TURN IT DOWN A NOTCH. As in, get rid of Boxes. List the credits.

Hope it helped mang. Also, the tutorials obviously sucked ass.

[Jaícei]

Many panels can be merged- it's boring and poorly managed as it is. Take out what isn't necessary, compress more action/dialog into each panel and then make the panels larger so I mustn't strain my eyes. Plan out what will be going on in each panel (in notepad, for example) before you put it together- it looks like you winged parts of this as you went along. Read some classic American comics and learn the structure and styles.

It's sloppy; the dialog boxes for example.

You have improved, though. So keep moving forward.