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Taizk
February 23rd, 2008, 01:11 PM
Character Image
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Name: Nero Kadgi

Nicknames:

Age: 17

Species: Rabbit

Gender: Male

Height: 4'5

Weight: 64lbs

IQ: 140

Marital Status: Pending

Relationship: Pending

DOB: 15th of October 1990

Birth Place:

Current Residence: Roaming The World

Occupation:

Social Class: Wanderer

Economic Class: Lower Class

Alignment: Good

Top Speed: Jumps more then he runs

Physical Abilites:
Nero is extremly agile, and so can dodge and bend his way around most enemy attacks. He can also jump to massive heights, such as moderately tall buildings, trees and other suchs things. He also can jump off objects, and can kick a person's face in with enough speed, as he has most of his strength in his feet. He is a very good digger, as he can dig holes in a matter of a few minutes.

Abilities & Aptitude:
Can control the elements of the earth, such as fire, wind, water, earth and others.
Has a hover board he can pull out and use to quickly move about, and also to fight.
Has extreme agility, and can jump very far distances, and also maneuver around people and attacks easily. He is also very fast on his feet, and can do devastating attacks with them. When he digs holes, he can hide under them and when he hears a enemy's footsteps, he can get a surprise attack on them.

Elemental Powers: He can use any elemental power at his own will, but at a decreased power. To increase it, he needs to think or act out the emotion of that element. So in the case of fire, if he wanted to have a increased strength in it he would need to be angry or think about anger.

Hobbies & Talents: Nero is a adventurer, who loves to jump about and hardly ever stops. He usually can be seen jumping across trees and other such objects, and training his attacks. He studies in the art of Tae Kwon Do, which is the martial arts mainly involving the feet.

Weaknesses:
Since Nero can choose which elemental attacks he can do, he is also vulnerable to the opposite of the element has has chosen. So for say, if he was using a fire one and got attacked with a water or other such element, it would deal more damage to him than normal. He is also afraid of loved ones getting hurt, enclosed spaces and low vitality, so he cannot take to many hits before getting worn down.

Friends:

Zig Sonar

Rivals:

Enemies:
The Dark Star

Family: All Unkown

Likes/Favourite activities: Exploring, jumping about, being around friends.

Dislikes/Least favourite activities: low sugar foods, seeing a innocent person get hurt, walking.

Gourmet of choice: Anything which isn't bitter, but he mostly prefers apples, carrots and pizza, and also sugary foods.

Beverages of choice: Coca Cola

Favourite colour(s): Blue, Teal, Black

Music: Techno, Rock, Punk Rock

Personality: He is usually calm, and has a good sense of wrong and right. He is very sociable, helping people strangers and friends alike. He can get very protective of his friends at times, and will do anything to protect them or help them out. He loves to move about, jumping from rooftop to rooftop. He hates evil people, and people who use others for there own benefit. He is also a tiny bit naive, but will always observe a person before making his mind up about them. He seems slow witted, but in times of need he can carefully plan out actions and takes the role as a born leader.

Physical Appearance

Colour: A main fur colour of brown, with blueish teal streaks at the end of his hair, aswell as a small tuft of white hair on his chest.

Skin Colour (i.e. muzzle, arms): A tanned muzzle colour. Fur coloured hands/arms.

Eye Colour: He has dark red eyes.

Hair/Quill Style: He has 5 quill like strands of hair that curl downwards from the back of his head, with thin blueish teal streaks running down them.

Nose: Normal rabbit nose.

Ears: He has two long brown rabbit ears, one dropping down the right side of his while while his left one stands up. He has a white marking in the center of them.

Tail: He has a white short bushy tail in the shape of a ball that all rabbits have, but is hidden by his pants.

Other bodily features: He has a small white patch of fuzzy fur on his upper part of his chest. Hidden by his top.

Attire:
A teal, t-shirt, which is sleeveless on both arms.
Baggy blue pants.
Black shoes that has a gray sole and a blue orb at the front.
Gloves: Blueish teal fingerless gloves on both hands, with a square cut out on the top. These gloves boost his elemental powers that his family is known for. Without these, his powers would be deeply weakened.

Items & Weapons:
His gloves which boost his power.
Two elemental daggers that he can summon when he is at full power and focuses on all the elements.

Weapons:
Two summoned daggers that he can use to do more powerful attacks with.

Other Items:
Backpack which he keeps all his clothes and food in
A nearly broken compass
A old mobile phone that hardly works


Theme song:
Quietdrive - Rise From The Ashes
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZFGQQOQCcpI&feature=related


Personal Quote: “I'll get through anything”

Back Story:

Nero was living a happy, good life. He was living happily with his family, in a secluded area in the woods. That was, until his 16th birthday atleast.

When he turned 16, that was when a secret and evil organisation only known as The Dark Star, were in need of a new guinea pig for there experiments. They had decided to search in the exact forest that Nero and his family were living, and had found his house.
They had spared nothing, and captured his family to bring to one of there many bases across the globe. At their mini base, they had carried out horrific experiments on his family, some of the experiments severely hurting his family members. The Dark Star had left there greatest and more painful experiments to use on Nero. These would involve tremendous pain on his part and humility as they rid him of his clothes. One of the experiments had wiped his mind of his family members and past life. Only leaving the memory of his name, age and other bits of info. The Dark Star had intened to create a sort of Super Soldier, by combining different elemental states into one person. They tried this on Nero, and it had worked perfectly, except for the fact that he was very unstable at the time, and had killed several guardsmen and scientists in a explosion of anger and raw power. In the proccess, he had broken the chains to his arms and legs and ran to the exit of the building, killing and harming many other guards on his way in a act of sheer animalistic nature. He had made sure to grab his clothes and ran out of the base, his mind erased of his family and therefore not rescuing them.

After running for hours, he had gotten to a desert where he finally collapsed from fatigue. When he had woken up, his mind had been cleared of his anger, and was getting short glimpses of past memories, such as him having a father and mother, but nothing more. He set out to find the remaining pieces of his life, and to be able to control the immense power inside his body now.

(long bio is long..I hope)

Jaícei
February 23rd, 2008, 02:07 PM
If you want my advice, first and foremost, lose the elemental powers.

They've been beaten to death and then sodomized in the grave. His maneuvering abilities and various weapons should be more than enough to make him formidable.

Taizk
February 23rd, 2008, 02:10 PM
Well, the thing is I had basically revolved Nero around the elemental shit. I tried making it original in it not being just one and all, and him having to have the same emotion to have it actually be useful in a proper fight.

He's had elemental powers for...about 2 years now? So I don't think I'll change it. But I might tweak it I guess, thanks.

Biohazard
February 23rd, 2008, 02:31 PM
I don't mind the elemental powers, as I have an elemental of my own. I just dont understand your logic:

So for say, if he was using a water one and got attacked with a fire or other such element, it would deal more damage to him than normal.

This makes no sense to me, as FIRE is usually seen as weaker to WATER. However, I do like the drawback in the elements he chooses to fight with, as it makes him less God-Moddish and gives the enemy a chance to harm him.

I like the biopgraphy, because it explains how he acquired his abilities, and because it suggests that the character isnt very skilled with controlling them, which I think is a good thing to me because it can be seen as another weakness for the character. He has such immense power, but since he cant control it so wel he may possible do damage to himself.

I can see nothing that needs a great deal of improvement on. (: You've got a great character going here. Keep up the good work, man.

Taizk
February 23rd, 2008, 02:36 PM
Oh god, thanks for pointing that out. I totally missed that, I had accidentally reversed the two. I'll go fix that now.

And yea, I had just redone the backstory. He used to live in a village that got destroyed so he went out for revenge, but that's just retarded so I got rid of it.

And thanks a lot for taking the time to comment.

Edit: Fixed.

Ziggy
February 25th, 2008, 11:25 PM
It's a really interesting character, But I notice some errors that the other's haven't.
You have to many incomplete sentences.

Example:
"Has extreme agility"(including the rest of the sentence)
It has no noun, which makes it an incomplete Sentence.

It should be:
"He has extreme agility"
Which would make it a proper Sentence.
Go fix that along with some other sentences as well.
Really good fan character though, Keep up the good work!

Sonikku
March 2nd, 2008, 04:44 PM
It's a really interesting character, But I notice some errors that the other's haven't.
You have to many incomplete sentences.

Example:
"Has extreme agility"(including the rest of the sentence)
It has no noun, which makes it an incomplete Sentence.

It should be:
"He has extreme agility"
Which would make it a proper Sentence.
Go fix that along with some other sentences as well.
Really good fan character though, Keep up the good work!
Why are you correcting his grammar?

Jaícei
March 2nd, 2008, 05:04 PM
Why are you correcting his grammar?
Because he's not a very skilled critic, apparently.

Deano
March 2nd, 2008, 05:06 PM
It's a really interesting character, But I notice some errors that the other's haven't.
You have to many incomplete sentences.

Example:
"Has extreme agility"(including the rest of the sentence)
It has no noun, which makes it an incomplete Sentence.

It should be:
"He has extreme agility"
Which would make it a proper Sentence.
Go fix that along with some other sentences as well.

It doesnt have to all be in full sentences, it's just a quick profile. Now he's corrected it all, it looks really really bad, looks nothing like a normal profile. Quit the backseat modding, it's starting to piss a lot of people off.

Still, it is a very well detailed and descriptive profile, nice work sire.

Black Knight
March 3rd, 2008, 04:21 PM
It's a really interesting character, But I notice some errors that the other's haven't.
You have to many incomplete sentences.

Example:
"Has extreme agility"(including the rest of the sentence)
It has no noun, which makes it an incomplete Sentence.

It should be:
"He has extreme agility"
Which would make it a proper Sentence.
Go fix that along with some other sentences as well.
Really good fan character though, Keep up the good work!

You know what I've told you of backseat-modding Ziggy...

Do it again and you'll get a spam infraction; thus you have been warned.


Very good Nero! More detailed and better then last time I saw it. ^^

Taizk
March 5th, 2008, 06:53 PM
Because that part of the bio was a list, hence why most of the other sentences in that part mostly have 'Has'. And thanks a lot guys for the support c: