View Full Version : New Signature **NSFW**
Blinding
February 19th, 2008, 08:55 PM
It's not naughty, but it does have nudity [Exposed breasts.] So, yeah.
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7198/venisesig2copyqy6.png
Comments and crits?
Ziggy
February 19th, 2008, 09:31 PM
It's not naughty, but it does have nudity [Exposed breasts.] So, yeah.
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7198/venisesig2copyqy6.png
Comments and crits?
It's nice, but I think that the nudity was unnecessary.
Blinding
February 19th, 2008, 09:33 PM
It's nice, but I think that the nudity was unnecessary.
While it may be unnecessary, it's not like it's harming anybody. Plus, it's not erotic in anyway, so it should be fine.
Jaícei
February 19th, 2008, 09:56 PM
I like it, but I'll try to give some crits anyway 'cause I love you so:
Well, I think you could have used a better stock- I have no problem with the nudity at all and like the potential, but the subject is just meh as it is with the lighting. She stands out so much from the rest of the piece that it's like she's just there for the sake of T!TS instead of a complimenting component. Blend/fade her in more?
Like, I really like the effect to the right; so maybe try to make it continue out a bit more and fade out against the girl while evening out the light effects to create more flow and subtly? I see she is meant more to be a foreground subject, but I think a little blending would be able to bring things together without loosing that element. I do like the intense light coming off the saber.
I hope I made some sense here. I don't know what you like nor want with your work so if none of this may be useful.
Nice design though- I wish I could be more helpful in suggesting filters and whatever but I barely know my way around Photoshop. Keep it up, you're always experimenting and I love seeing new things you're working on. ;>
Get ready for more BAAAAAAAAWWWWW from uptight younger members that clicked anyway. <3
Segan
February 19th, 2008, 10:47 PM
There are boobies in that picture.
Blinding
February 20th, 2008, 08:12 AM
I like it, but I'll try to give some crits anyway 'cause I love you so:
Well, I think you could have used a better stock- I have no problem with the nudity at all and like the potential, but the subject is just meh as it is with the lighting. She stands out so much from the rest of the piece that it's like she's just there for the sake of T!TS instead of a complimenting component. Blend/fade her in more?
Like, I really like the effect to the right; so maybe try to make it continue out a bit more and fade out against the girl while evening out the light effects to create more flow and subtly? I see she is meant more to be a foreground subject, but I think a little blending would be able to bring things together without loosing that element. I do like the intense light coming off the saber.
I hope I made some sense here. I don't know what you like nor want with your work so if none of this may be useful.
Nice design though- I wish I could be more helpful in suggesting filters and whatever but I barely know my way around Photoshop. Keep it up, you're always experimenting and I love seeing new things you're working on. ;>
Get ready for more BAAAAAAAAWWWWW from uptight younger members that clicked anyway. <3
Yeah. I didn't want to blend her though, sense the background is completely black, and it'd just look strange. I'll post it without the "widescreen" border so then you can actually see some of her face, which is what I intended, but I got frustrated half way through and just said "You know what, fuck it."
Thanks for the crits though. ;D <3
T3h Rusteh
February 20th, 2008, 11:26 AM
It's nice, but I think that the nudity was unnecessary.
Puberty is going to hit you like a shovel.
Anyway, its pretty cool. Weirdly enough, her breasts resemble a fucking megadrive controller.
Blinding
February 20th, 2008, 12:16 PM
Puberty is going to hit you like a shovel.
Anyway, its pretty cool. Weirdly enough, her breasts resemble a fucking megadrive controller.
A few of my friends said that too. They were like "Are those boobs, or is it some screwed up game controller?"
BigK
February 20th, 2008, 02:12 PM
It's not naughty, but it does have nudity [Exposed breasts.] So, yeah.
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7198/venisesig2copyqy6.png
Comments and crits?
I have a question, did you draw the chick? If so, then you should lose the nudity, not because it's inappropriate, no no it's fine...but her tit is fucked up. The nipples don't go all the way up there, it's supposed to be much lower. So I suggest you fix her nipple, and if you want to keep the nudity, then move the girl higher so you can show her nipple, otherwise it's up way too high.
Blinding
February 20th, 2008, 02:22 PM
I have a question, did you draw the chick? If so, then you should lose the nudity, not because it's inappropriate, no no it's fine...but her tit is fucked up. The nipples don't go all the way up there, it's supposed to be much lower. So I suggest you fix her nipple, and if you want to keep the nudity, then move the girl higher so you can show her nipple, otherwise it's up way too high.
I didn't draw the girl, no, I found her in a photograph on deviantArt. I guess her boobs are just firm, because I realized that too and was like "Wow."
Jaícei
February 20th, 2008, 03:18 PM
The nipples don't go all the way up there, it's supposed to be much lower. So I suggest you fix her nipple, and if you want to keep the nudity, then move the girl higher so you can show her nipple, otherwise it's up way too high.
Jesus Christ, you say you're 29 man, and you've never seen firm breasts before?
So you've seen like, what, your mother's and the Tuesday line-up's? I just can't follow- you've never even seen a porn star?
BigK
February 20th, 2008, 04:28 PM
Jesus Christ, you say you're 29 man, and you've never seen firm breasts before?
So you've seen like, what, your mother's and the Tuesday line-up's? I just can't follow- you've never even seen a porn star?
Sorry, I have a girlfriend and don't need porn. And firm or not, do you not see how they sag? They're going lower, they don't stop near the bottom, they keep going, so no that ain't firm, it's her tit sticking down and her nipple on top of that. Or are fucked up tits are just an ordinary thing for you folks?
And one more thing, you think saying retarded bullshit like all I see are my mom's tits and the Tuesday's line-up does anything at all? Or does being a pain in the ass just come with the territory?
Jaícei
February 20th, 2008, 04:51 PM
You're arguing with a woman about breasts? Wow. And you've never looked at nudes over 29 years? Wow. Maybe you're just sexually repressed, I don't know, but a normal man would have and would know that depending on size, age, firmness, genetics, and maintenance women have all different types of busts and the subject Blindy used has a completely normal bosom, and if fact, they are quite nice.
Please, treat yourself to a strip club or at least a Playboy sometime, you deserve it, champ. Bring the old lady along.
BACK ON SUBJECT: Looking good, Blindy. c: Sorry I diverted attention away.
Blinding
February 20th, 2008, 05:00 PM
You're arguing with a woman about breasts? Wow. And you've never looked at nudes over 29 years? Wow. Maybe you're just sexually repressed, I don't know, but a normal man would have and would know that depending on size, age, firmness, genetics, and maintenance women have all different types of busts and the subject Blindy used has a completely normal bosom, and if fact, they are quite nice.
Please, treat yourself to a strip club or at least a Playboy sometime, you deserve it, champ. Bring the old lady along.
BACK ON SUBJECT: Looking good, Blindy. c: Sorry I diverted attention away.
I fucking love you. Honestly. You rock.
BigK
February 20th, 2008, 05:29 PM
You're arguing with a woman about breasts? Wow. And you've never looked at nudes over 29 years? Wow. Maybe you're just sexually repressed, I don't know, but a normal man would have and would know that depending on size, age, firmness, genetics, and maintenance women have all different types of busts and the subject Blindy used has a completely normal bosom, and if fact, they are quite nice.
Please, treat yourself to a strip club or at least a Playboy sometime, you deserve it, champ. Bring the old lady along.
BACK ON SUBJECT: Looking good, Blindy. c: Sorry I diverted attention away.
Sounds like a jolly ol' time..
But on topic, I think your sig is really good honestly, it shows some great detail and graphic art, the breast just looked a bit funny to me is all.
Ziggy
February 21st, 2008, 07:59 PM
Puberty is going to hit you like a shovel.
Yeah, I hit hit a year ago.(puberty)
T3h Rusteh
February 21st, 2008, 08:06 PM
You tried to have sex with puberty?
DO NOT WANT
Ziggy
February 21st, 2008, 08:10 PM
You tried to have sex with puberty?
Good one, but you know what I meant.
(hopefully) :o
Black Knight
February 22nd, 2008, 03:39 AM
Very nice work Blind. I should bug you for a new sig. xD
Metal Overlord Type X
February 22nd, 2008, 09:27 PM
You tried to have sex with puberty?
You sir, you win.
Anyway...
Good sig, but I'm agreeing with everyone else, I fucking thought it was screwed up game controller.
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