My Comic

[Darkness]

http://art.sonicearth.com/uploads/105_Comic.png

This is my Comic.
Hope you like it! ^^

[Antony the Bat]

This little comic scene is really amaizing and it is so awesome I would not mind making a comic scene myself even if some poeple do not agree with it.

[Day]

Panels are way too big, your writing needs work, and so does your spelling.

You changed font halfway through, the sprites are too small compared to the area they're on, and there's a whole mess of space wasted.

And of course, don't use colored text for characters. Use speech bubbles. It looks better.

Go back, plan it out, and try again.

[Darkness]

I agree Minty, next time i'll put speech bubbles.

[DarknessTheDarkHedgehog]

It's good for some reason...

some of your spelling is wrong too:

I've been waiting (or) tails??

Or is it (FOR) tails?

Panels are way too big
Yes, very very BIG!!
You have to go and try again Darkness..:cool:

[Antony the Bat]

I know that this comic scene is incredibly impressive and I would like to do another comic scene with you all to show the honor of being a Sonic fan.