Crimson The Dark Bat

[Crimson The Dark Bat]

I've now edited the info.

Crimsons Biography

Name: Crimson The Dark Bat
Nicknames: The Dark One, Crimson Tide
Age: 14
Species: Bat
Gender: Male
Height: 5.9
Weight: Secret
Wingspan: 0.5 metres
IQ: 113
Marital Status: Single (for now!)
DOB: 24/06
Birth Place: Knothole
Residence: Midgar
Occupation: Assasin
Social Class: Average Teenager
Economic Class: Middle
Alignment: Mostly Evil. Hey, we all have a little evil in us somewhere...
Top Speed: 164mph
Basic Stats (10 being best)
Agility - 7
Speed - 8
Strength - 9
Defense - 6
Evasiveness - 9
Dexterity - 6
Intelligence - 9
Skill - 7
Special Attacks: Flash Inferno
Abilities & Aptitude: Harnessing the power of lightning
Hobbies & Talents: Music, Flying
Weaknesses: Water(Conducts lightning and BOOM!)
Personal facts
Friends: Dr. Grey The Hedgehog, Quantum The Hedgehog, Sonia The Hedgehog
Rivals: Nexxus The Bat
Enemies: Mephiles The Dark, Dr. Eggman, GUN, Black Arms
Known relatives: Aries The Hedgehog, Thunderbolt The Bat
Likes/Favorite activities: Video Games, Fixing Machines
Dislikes/Least favorite activities: Sports, Aeroplanes(ugh...too unreliable. Wings do the trick for me!)

Gourmet of choice: All Chinese Foods, Chicken Enchilladas
Beverages of choice: Cola
Favorite color(s):Red, Crimson, Blood Red...oh, you get the idea!
Personality: Courageous, Insecure at times and a Joker
Physical Appearance
Color: Crimson Red with silver tips at the end of hair and limbs.
Skin Color (i.e. muzzle, arms): Peach
Eye Color: Green
Hair/Quill Style: Messy, Unbrushed
Nose: Round
Ears: Pointed
Tail: Short
Other bodily features: Long Wings
Attire: Blue Gloves and Sneaks.
Items & Weapons: Single Action Army 32 Revolver(SAA)
Vehicles: Why bother when you can just run as fast as one.
Themesong: Breaking Benjamin - Blow Me Away
Back Story: Crimson is a mysterious, young bat from the city of Midgar.
His parents died at the hands of Mephiles The Dark
moments after he was born. His DNA was fused with Mephiles' lightning powers,
thus giving him the power to harness lightning.
After growing up, he encountered Sonia The Hedegehog and formed a strong relationship
with her. But during an attempt to save Midgar, Crimson was captured
by none other than Dr. Eggman. There, Eggman taught Crimson the truth about his
origins and how his parents met their horrible fate. He told Crimson that he was
trying to stop Mephiles also, and they joined forces. But one day Eggman took Sonia
prisoner fueling Crimsons rage. He acted against Eggman, telling him that no matter
if they were fighting the same enemies or not, that Eggman would not have a place in
his life. He now remains in Midgar

[Biohazard]

I dont think this is acceptable. You need more info, like attitude, personality, etc.

[Kursed]

Thats a nice start but whats his history and you need to add more on his appearence, like height and weight also wingspan since he is winged.

[Steel Valor]

Well seeing how it is in work I'll be frank. Make sure to look at the fanchar rules and tips please, they'll help out for the development of your character. And might I suggest making an elaborate fanchar format? That really counts. *shot*

[Crimson The Dark Bat]

Thanks for the info. I'll improve it ASAP.