My First Comic =D!!

[Knuckles_The_Echidna]

Hey Everyone, I'd like you all to see my first comic and see of what do you think of it!

ENJOY ^^!

http://art.sonicearth.com/uploads/195_Sonic%20Comic%201.jpg

And If the image doesn't appear on you PC please click or copy this URL:

http://art.sonicearth.com/uploads/195_Sonic%20Comic%201.jpg


Does It appear now??

[Black Knight]

The image won't show and the link just gives you an error message...

Would love to see it if I could see it. =3

[Kursed]

By the looks of it it says you haven't even uploaded it onto the website. How I know cause it says upload on the link inside of " image.php?id= "

[Knuckles_The_Echidna]

Then what should i do?

[Day]

... upload it?

Use Imageshack or Photobucket, then paste the direct link here.

[Darkness]

Yay I can see it, it's cool, keep up the good work knux!!

[Alex Kaisentrifel]

Eh, I'm not so used to seeing simple comics anymore, but meh, it's alright I guess. Text is hard to read though, try making speech bubbles

[Shackel11]

Doesnt Insonica make fun of these kinds of things, in the first one. XD

[Black Knight]

You need to make speechbubbles, its impossible to see what you've written without getting premanent sight problems...

Don't save it in JPG because it makes everything blurry and makes it look like it's of bad quality...

If the grey and pink hedgehog are yours I'd try to to improve them if I wer eyou cause as of current they're only recolours.

Otherwise it's fine...

[Day]

Kill that big white space, crop the unnecessary parts of each panel (you really don't need all that background, or that big of a space between characters), add some speech bubbles, fix the recolors (only ever, EVER use a recolor to make fun of), save in PNG, and get a script going.

Go on, go back, try again.

[DarknessTheDarkHedgehog]

Knuckles,.........

Hmmmm..... Its Ok I guess

but its very hard to read what you have written and blurry too.

Try making Speechbubbles..

[Oscar!2000]

that's pretty good Knuckles when is the next one coming out

[Shadow]

I need to see more before I can say anything.

[Ziggy]

If you don't want it to blurry, don't save it as a jpg.
save it as a png.

[BigK]

Here, forget imageshack and photobucket, what YOU need is this:

http://www.isarapix.com/

Upload your comic here and see where that goes. It'll be easier to read.