my plain Comics =)

[Ziggy]

Well I'm not that good a pixel comics. This is my first one.
(It's super plain, and Super Gay)
Enjoy
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff207/Ziggy101_bucket/Comic-1.jpg

[Day]

Please don't. Really.

The only correction I'm going to ask you to make, is to remove the panel at the bottom of the comic. You know, the one that says, "To Be Continued." There's no structure, there's no story, fight scenes REALLY don't work in sprite comics...

... I've seen more order in a prison riot. >':

[Ziggy]

Please don't. Really.

The only correction I'm going to ask you to make, is to remove the panel at the bottom of the comic. You know, the one that says, "To Be Continued." There's no structure, there's no story, fight scenes REALLY don't work in sprite comics...

... I've seen more order in a prison riot. >':

I appreciate your compliment......

[Syncro_The_Hedgehog]

You do that. She/He was probably holding back.

Unless you wanna get better, I won't bother giving any pointers either.(I get the impression that you were just being random.)

[Segan]

This is a decent first attempt, but Minty's right, pure action in a comic will not work, in fact it usually doesn't work in anything.
It did get me wondering for a second, if there was a Dark Super Shadow, would he still be dark grey, or jet black, like a real shadow?

[AnnZie]

You do that. She/He was probably holding back.

Unless you wanna get better, I won't bother giving any pointers either.(I get the impression that you were just being random.)

That's kinda harsh isn't it? Not everyone's good at making comics like this first. No one is perfect.

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Ziggy, I think you can improve quite a lot with the sprite comics. It's not always the best to stage a fight in a sprite comic, perhaps you can give the sprite comic a storyline or maybe use your own characters? I personally can't do sprite comics XDDD. But I know that every comic begins with a storyline =3.

keep trying!

~AnnZie

[Syncro_The_Hedgehog]

That's kinda harsh isn't it? Not everyone's good at making comics like this first. No one is perfect.

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Ziggy, I think you can improve quite a lot with the sprite comics. It's not always the best to stage a fight in a sprite comic, perhaps you can give the sprite comic a storyline or maybe use your own characters? I personally can't do sprite comics XDDD. But I know that every comic begins with a storyline =3.

keep trying!

~AnnZie

When I look back at my post, it does seem harsh...sorry, lol. I'm not like that at all.

But it still needs improvement though. I don't even know where to start.

[Kursed]

Its his first comic, you don't expect it to be absolutly perfect

[Syncro_The_Hedgehog]

yea, yea, yea I know. I know, sheesh. I meant I don't know where to start on giving pointers. plus its after 10:00 here. my breain is dead then.(see? look! I can't even spell brane right! >O )

[Legato]

WHERE IS THE CONTEENT?!!? *Gasps for air*

Good idea but I wouldn't try it if I were you.

[Ziggy]

Time 2 up date!
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff207/Ziggy101_bucket/Storycomic-1.jpg

[Legato]

"It's Izzy and I" not "Me and Izzy". Story as original as it is still doesn't draw me in

[Ziggy]

"It's Izzy and I" not "Me and Izzy". Story as original as it is still doesn't draw me in

"Me and Izzy" is not a mistake. "I and Izzy" is. It should be..."Izzy and I"

[Darkness]

I love it, i haven't seen one like that before. That was awsome!:cool:

[Sparky-the-wolf]

There's something im wondering about. Did you rip those sprites yourself or just find them somewhere. You always have to give credit for the person you got those sprites from.

Overall it's a good attempt.

[AnnZie]

"Me and Izzy" is not a mistake. "I and Izzy" is. It should be..."Izzy and I"

oh dear dear me, Ziggy you should never make the common mistake of "Me and Izzy" either. It's "Izzy and me" in english you always talk about your friend then yourself. Also, it's less common to have "Izzy and Me", normally it's "Izzy and I". If you're writing "I and Izzy" or "Me and Izzy" you're writing it the chinese way. XD... the chinese are selfish lolz...

anways... moving on... I enjoyed the comic quite a lot, keep working on it and remember to give credit to where ever or whoever you got those sprites from!

~AnnZie

[Ziggy]

Here is part 2
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff207/Ziggy101_bucket/Storycomicpart2.jpg

[Syncro_The_Hedgehog]

whoa, did you save it as a Jpeg? don't do that anymore. it beats the crap out of the quality. save it as a .png next time, k?

I'm a simple guy, so I can't say anything about the storyline. its interesting to me, but watch as someone more suited for the job comes along ang gives out pointers for that. lol...I dunno. I'm just going by what I've seen dozens of times before.

other than that, good job.

[Ziggy]

Thank you for the tip...I'll do that next time.

[Kursed]

ziggy you did it again, you put Ziggy's speech colour to bright.
other than that nice job.

[Syncro_The_Hedgehog]

Ah yes, that's right. It would really help to use speech bubbles and darker lettering. those colors down there aren't the only ones, ya know...

[Ziggy]

Time too update
http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff207/Ziggy101_bucket/Storycomicpart3-1.png
Wow! Png really does work!

[Sonic The Long Haired Fox]

LOL

Funny, very funny
of course i think anything can be funny, but this is really funny

Whats makes it funnier is the fact that i was listening to PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME while reading it XD

[Syncro_The_Hedgehog]

yea! much better!

now go downlead paint. net, learn it, and practice. I think if you practice, you could make some awesome comics.

[Darkness]

Excellent Ziggy, i liked it very much, and i liked the way shadow slept.

[Ziggy]

Thank you.
I appreciate that you liked it.

[Sparky-the-wolf]

Your comic seems to be coming along great.

[Shackel11]

Cool! Can MBM be in it? XD

[Ziggy]

Cool! Can MBM be in it? XD

If you give me a sprite....I'll then see what I can do.

[Shackel11]

Look at my topic, you may have to shrink him down a bit though XD It's in Fan Art too.

[Ziggy]

Ok Time to update ^^http://i243.photobucket.com/albums/ff207/Ziggy101_bucket/Storycomicpart4.png

[Espio]

yes! Espio's in it! thank you Ziggy!

[Ziggy]

Hehe....I'm guessing you like the comic, just because of that.
^^

[Darkness]

Awsome, i have nothing else to say, or perfect.