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beybladeX
December 27th, 2007, 02:53 AM
WARNING!!!
THIS FIC IS FOR OVER 18's ONLY!!! There is sexual themes, violence and swearing!!!
I will not be held responsible for your actions.

INTRO
ACSESSING MENDAM STATE COVNVICT FILES...
A pair of black military boots stamped the cold stone floor.
CONVICT B-12,
The body wearing the boots was a female's, she was wearing the average orange and white prison convict outfit.
AMY JENNIFER ROSE
The woman was a pink hedgehog with a tan muzzle, short hair with three bangs striking out of her forehead. She also had emerald eyes.
CRIME: MANSLUAGHTER, ACCUSED STEALING AND FIVE ACCOUNTS OF BANK ROBBERY
Her face was emotionless it looked cold and empty as she walked into a bus followed by two prison guards.
TRANSFERRING TO MENDAM STATE PENITENTIARY FROM CAMERON CITY PRISON...
The bus drove off and out of the city.
TIME TO SPEND: FIVE YEARS...
She looked out of the window of the bus and sighed. 'Here we go'

CHAPTER ONE: THE BLACK ARMY


Amy fumbled a necklace she somehow snuck past metal detection. Her mother gave her the necklace when she was dying on her death bed. Amy cried. 'Oh, mother. You'd be so ashamed to see me now.' Amy looked up, outside of her cell a black hedgehog with red eyes that matched his streaks on his black head. Those eyes pierced Amy like razorwire she couldn't help but shivver slighty. This made the ruby eyed hedgehog smirk.
LUNCH HOUR


Amy got a tray and went to the obese old brown hedgehog that stood serving the 'food' to the prisoners when he put the goop on her tray made a smooch with his lips. Amy looked digusted and just walked shivvering in her digust. Someone whistled Amy's ears perked up her emerald eyes reached those famillar ruby eyes. A black hand beckoned her over. Amy walked to the table. The table had only one place left for someone to sit next to the hedgehog. Amy sat next to him looking at the rest of the group. A white bat with big boobs 'Fake, I'm sure' Amy thought. A silver hedgehog snickered. A red echidna looked at the silver hedgehog weirdly.

"What?" The echidna said

"Nothin'" The silver hedgehog said no longer snickering. Then someone caught her eyes, a blue hedgehog with leaf green eyes chuckled at the silver one.

"I guess introductions are in order?" said the ruby eyed one. Amy snapped her head to him.

"Oh, right. I'm Amy." Amy said. The ruby one chuckled

"I'm Shadow, the blue one is my brother, Sonic. The silver one who can read minds (Amy's eyes widened, now she knew what he was chuckling about) is Silver. The bat-girl is Rouge. And the local jester over there is Knuckles." Pointing at the echidna, who glared. Amy giggled abit. "We are the Black Army, since my big bro here formed it." Sonic said Amy thought Sonic had a beautiful voice she watched his silk-like lips curve into a smile after talking. 'What. Am. I. Fucking. Thinking?!'

"Well, you're thinking that Sonic is h--OW!!!" Amy, blushing hard, threw a hard piece of the goop prisoner's are forced to eat and it hit Silver square in the head.

"Nice shot, anyways, what do you think about joining us?" Shadow said.

"Knowing what some men will probably be like it would be best if I had some friends to stand behind my back, protecting me." Amy said.

"Amen to that, sister!" Rouge said.

"Yeah, I'll join." Amy said.

"Okay, Amy. Welcome to the Black Army." Shadow said

Well, there's the beginning.

E-123 Omega
December 27th, 2007, 05:25 PM
Wait a minuite I know this story! It the same story on fanfction.net!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3880371/1/The_Cast_of_Sonic_The_Hedgehog_in_Criminal

beybladeX
December 28th, 2007, 04:19 AM
Yep, that's were you'll find the uncensored Chapter 3. Because I'm pretty sure you can't upload *ahem* 'certain things' on forums.

Just thought I'd put it on here aswell. For non-FF.net users who want to read my story.

E-123 Omega
December 28th, 2007, 10:56 AM
That's understandable.

beybladeX
December 29th, 2007, 01:35 AM
CHAPTER TWO: THE UNSPEAKABLE DEED

It was now time for the prisoner's to go outside. Since the prison didn't allow sexual conduct, any boys and girls seen getting to intimate are split apart for the remandier of the now free day. Amy squinted at the sunlight, silently cursing.

"Hey, pink!" Amy growled at who was calling her, Knuckles.

"Yes." Amy said rudely altough Knuckles didn't realize it.

"Shadow sent me to show you around." Knuckles said.

'Well, I know that when I see Shadow again, I'll have to rip his guts out.' Amy thought angrily. After a few minutes Amy felt like shooting herself 'Don't worry, Amy. He's sure to finish soon'. A grey albatross caught Amy's attention. "Who's the fat pidgeon?" Amy asked then looked at Knuckles worriedly as he looked like he might explode from the amount of rage in his body.

"THAT is Storm. The rapist." Amy knew it, there had to be SOMEONE who had a record with penetrating a woman's innocence.

"Some people say he actually takes women into a darkened part of the back of the prison and rapes them. PLEASE stay away from him, Amy. He's bad news. REALLY bad news."

"Ok, Knuckles. If you say so." "Good."

LATER...
Amy knew lock-up was about an hour away she looked around, no one was around. "Psst...!" came a squawcky voice. Amy looked around then saw a green hawk. "Hey." The hawk whispered. Amy walked over.

"Hey." Amy said. "uhh...listen I need you're help."

"Why what's wrong?" "It's my friend, he's stuck and if the guard's see him out after lockdown...they might."

"Where is he?" "Follow me." The hawk said and Amy followed him into a dark corner.

"We shouldn't be here. That Storm guy might be here..."

"Nah, he goes to his cell early." "Ok, what's your name?"

"Jet. Jet The Hawk." Jet said smiling. Amy smiled back.

Jet gulped. "I'm sorry, Amy."

"For what?"

"This." Jet hit her over the head and she fell unconsious.

When Amy woke up she gasped there was Storm.

"Hey, babe." Storm said Amy jumped away to met a wall.

What was happen next was obvious...

There's goes another one see the UNCENSORED version here. 18's only, REMEMBER THAT!!!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3880371/3/The_Cast_of_Sonic_The_Hedgehog_in_Criminal

See ya next time!

BloodCroc499
July 6th, 2008, 02:50 AM
I got just the song for this fanfic:Criminal by Disturbed.Nice story!Keep going.