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Shadow
December 6th, 2007, 08:03 PM
This story is about the other Shadows that were abandoned in space because they were considered failures. One of them, Luna wasn’t even given chance to wake up… On her journey she finds out there are more of her kind…


I'll start off...

Eggman flying away for sonic in his egg carrier yelling "you'll pay for this Sonic!" Out of no were a meteor hits Eggman… Sonic sketches his head while saying “WOW! I didn’t see that coming…” The meteor hits the ground… Tails runs up to Sonic "SONIC!!!" Tails stops in front of Sonic “Sonic a meteor is headed right for…” Tails look at crater & points to it. “Oh there it is…” A white hedgehog with light blue markings comes out of the crater. “Oh man… my head…”

Name: Luna
Age: Same as Shadow
Abilities: Shape shifting & can run as fast as sonic...
Description: White With light blue markings & a red dog collar around her neck... Almost looks like Shadow...
Relation to Sonic X characters: Shadow's sister

"Damit! What did I hit??? God..." Eggman pops up and yells " Dam you... " Luna gives Eggman an evil look." back off!" Eggman runs Off...

Black Knight
December 6th, 2007, 08:53 PM
Way too little description...I fear that this will turn into a spam rp if you don't add A LOT more description to this and what it's actually about.

Ziggy
December 7th, 2007, 05:26 PM
2 miles away a Green and Black hedgehog saw a comet crash.
I went to investigate.

He saw an Egg shaped man running away, and a white with light blue striped female hedgehog. "Are you ok?..." he asked her...
He pushed Sonic out the way, and also tails.

Shadow
December 8th, 2007, 03:32 PM
Luna looks at the green & black hedgehog & backs away from him. Then Yells “Who the fuck are you! & why do you look like me?” At him.

Ziggy
December 8th, 2007, 03:59 PM
He backs away slowly because of her attitude."I'm Ziggy.....and who the fuck might you be?" He said, mocking her.

Shadow
December 8th, 2007, 04:09 PM
Luna gets ready to attack Ziggy. “That’s none of your concern.”

Ziggy
December 8th, 2007, 05:26 PM
"Hmph....You hink you can defeat me?" Ziggy said as she gets in fighters stance. "Show me what you got."

Sonic
December 8th, 2007, 05:52 PM
Sonic gets in between Luna & Ziggy. “Hold on for a second. You two don’t know each other. Wow, I all most though you two were brother & sister. But still you shouldn’t fight.”

Shadow
December 8th, 2007, 05:58 PM
Luna backs down “Your right.We shouldn’t fight.” Luna looks at Ziggy. “I’m sorry. I over reacted.”

Sparky
December 8th, 2007, 06:08 PM
OoC: Can I join, even though my character isn't Shadow's sister? Or is this just a roleplay alllll about the brother/sisterhood of Shadow's so-called descendants?

Sonic
December 8th, 2007, 06:32 PM
Sonic looks at Luna "Good. Now we can be friends."

Shadow
December 8th, 2007, 06:44 PM
Luna gives Sonic a evil look. "I didn't say we could be friends. I don't know any of you. so how can I trust you?"

Ziggy
December 8th, 2007, 08:17 PM
Ziggy looked at Sonic. "You're one fruity guy. trying to be everybody's friend." Ziggy looked at him evilly.

Sparky
December 9th, 2007, 12:09 AM
A slightly off-appearance android of Shadow was clutching a branch high in a tree, sleeping soundly. She wasn't even a guy android, but a girl. Her spikes were fluffy and wrapped up the back of her head and draped across her face. Her nose was slightly smaller... but was supposed to look exactly like Shadow. She didn't, though, and had managed to dye the red fur on her body purple. A tight grey pair of minishorts enhanced her tail as a bright pink tank top was draped along her shoulders. Suddenly, a large sound called and her eyes creased open.
She fell from the branch and ran in her black jet shoes as she came across a meteor. Sonic, Tails, a green Shadow and a white Shadow were arguing over something...
“Hey, what’s going on here?” she said, then looked over at Ziggy and almost gasped. “A-...are you one of the androids too?

Ziggy
December 9th, 2007, 12:12 AM
"Aww great Another one...."Ziggy didn't answer cause was already annoyed.
"What the hell why do yall look like me...?"

Sparky
December 9th, 2007, 12:42 AM
"That white hedgehog over there by the meteor doesn't look like you at all," she said. "And I only look like you a little bit, because of our black fur... and Sonic and the little fox don't look like you the slightest." Aidane crossed her arms.

OoC: Shadow, can you please post correctly with the speech on a different line from what they're doing? I couldn't understand half of your beginning post.

Shadow
December 9th, 2007, 04:28 PM
Luna looks over her shoulder & sees Eggman running away. “No you don’t fatso. I have a bone to pick with you.” & starts running towards him.

Sonic
December 9th, 2007, 04:35 PM
Sonic sees that Luna was running towards Eggman. & Yells at Luna "Yo showy. Were are you going?" & runs after her.

Black Knight
December 9th, 2007, 06:07 PM
Seriously guys, the only person who actually put some effort into their posts is Sparky.

This is just plain uncreative, unoriginal and just generally suck. There's no plot or story to it at all, just half a second of thought has been put into this.

*Locked*