Parallax

[Kursed]

These are some picture I had drawn for this story

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The story (Steelfists the ferret's Characters :Steelfists, Allister and Rammstien is in this story)

Chapter 1 Face of Death

She crouched deeper into her cage as the feet walked nearer. The scientist kneeled and looked in to the cage. The red kitten curled tighter into a ball.
“Hay little one come on you’re needed in lab 8.” He opened the cage door, the child tensed her muscles and dashed forward but the scientist grabbed her around her waist. She screamed but the scientist knocked her out.
The child opened her pale golden eyes sometime later; she was in some sort of large hall but couldn’t see anything because it was jet black. The pounding steps of a large creature echoed around her, she turned around and let out a blood curdling scream that was soon her last. A large pool of blood formed around the dead child.
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The scientist stood around a giant capsule. Within was a figure surrounded by green liquid.
“Start the Experiment,” Allister Mcgargan yelled as he walked into the room. Dr Rammstein walked next to the control panel. “Didn’t you hear me Ebon, start the experiment!”
Dr Ebon Ikari looked to Rammstein, “You sure this is a good idea, maybe we should’ve left her dead.”
“Allister is in charge not you and he says start the experiment.”
Dr Rammstein walked away and Ebon pressed the button. The machine whirled to life and sparks flew over the capsule, the creature within started changing. Suddenly red lights started flashing around the group.
“What did you do wrong now?” Mcgargan yelled
“Nothing!” Ebon yelled back.
BOOM
Ebon jumped under the counter within a millisecond. Dust filled his mouth and the counter fell on top of him. A smaller boom made him curl tighter. When everything turned dead quiet the golden fox stood up. The old tiger too stood back up. The two scientists turned around and looked to what was the capsule. Allister stood up in a roar.
The creature’s black fur was wetted down from the liquid, large blades raised themselves down the creatures back, arms and tail. The creature raised her head and Ebon let out a gasp. The whole right side of the creature’s face was robotic as well as her right arm and wings which she started folding onto her back. The experiment was meant to make the creature full robotic not halfway between.
The other scientists started standing up from underneath the rubble, they noticed the creature. She let out a deep growl and leapt forward her talons raised. One scientist jumped forward to grab the creature but the talons went through his neck sending blood squirting everywhere. Another scientist this time a female let out a screamed and the creature turned on her. The creature swinged its arms and the female was spilt in half from the blades.
The creature hissed and turned her eyes to Ebon, her gold vacant eyes peering deep into Ebon’s soul. It was the look of death, something that had been taken away from the child, now monster. Soldiers ran into the room and aimed their tranquilizers at the creature. She leapt forward again but the room echoed with the gunshots.
“I’m sorry,” Ebon whispered to the creature as she blacked out. “I’m sorry, Valkyre Ecclesia.”

[Steel Valor]

Awesome, just don't forget to give some credit (Al and Ram are mine). Valkyre Ecclesia, good name it's got a good roll on the tongue. Ebon resembles Dr.Ryuusushi (somewhat). Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!

[Kursed]

Ive got up to the 4th chapter typed up at the moment.

[Kursed]

Double posting to update.
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Chapter 2 Meeting the fire

Valkyre walked quietly back into the large cage that had been her home for the past month. She was tied and hungry; the scientist made her swallow some awful liquid in the morning and refused to give her anything to eat or drink the whole day, which they had put her in maze so many time that she had lost count after 10 possibly 20.
She crashed onto her bed and just laid there trying to get back some of her energy.
Valkyre
Valkyre sat back up in a flash and looked around.
It may be another experiment or I might finally be going mental, She thought to herself. Valkyre lay back down on her bed, instantly going asleep.
When she opened her eyes again, she wasn’t in the laboratory anymore.

Valkyre looked around, she was an eight year old child again before she had been killed then having death taken away from her. She touched her chest and found out that her dress was wet with blood. She had her doll in her hands
Valkyre, the voice said again in her head. She looked around and froze, behind her stood a red and black cat hybrid that looked similar to her. Valkyre turned and ran but the hybrid ran after her and stopped her. "Stop I am Kaitos, I wont hurt you. I want to help you".



Valkyre walked through the corridors of the parallel laboratory, it looked very old and there were many parts that had collapsed and exposed wires or even the frame itself. A broken mirror was ahead on the wall, she stopped. She looked at her reflection. The deep gashes covered the right side of her face, her right arm and her chest; turning her dress, hair and face mostly dark red with blood. Her doll had a streak of blood down its face like it had been crying, crying for all the lost souls.
The hybrid, Kaitos, walked up,"In the Half-world you are a child but in the real world you are the monster."
“Half-world?”
"The places were the lost souls come, unable to past on into the afterlife."
As Kaitos said this Valkyre could hear the screams around her.
"It’s your duty to help those souls since we are both one of them."
Valkyre narrowed her eyes, so she did have a purpose, a power. Blackwater had taken both her life and death of not just her but many others and now it was their time to pay.

[Kursed]

Chapter 3. All soul’s day.
Seven years later

Valkyre raised the spikes on her back as she walked forward. Her eyes narrowed. The guards didn’t suspect a thing. The earth below them faintly rumbled as Valkyre planed her next actions, the screams echoed within her head. They entered a elevator and one of the guards pressed a button. The door closed, but Valkyre’s plan had already started.
The elevator started moving downwards but Valkyre within the Half-world stood behind it, nestled within the pillars. A mysterious wind below through her blood stained hair and dress. She raised her hand with her palm out, the moving, thick wires started glowing black and burst into black coloured fire. The wires broke and the elevator plummeted down into the fire at the bottom of the shaft. In the real world the elevator crashed, exploding into millions of pieces.
“Holy shit!” A Guard at the bottom level yelled.
“What in fucking God’s name happen?” Dr Rammstein ran to the platform opposite to Valkyre. Ebon and Allistar ran up too, shock flashed through his eyes. “Damnit, It was in there.”
Valkyre narrowed her eyes, I’m no IT
She snapped her arms out at Dr Rammstein; he flew back into a wall.
“Come out Valkyre we will not hurt you,” Allister held his arms out.
Valkyre warped the three into the Half- world. She picked up her doll.
“I am now longer your slave,” Valkyre’s vacant eyes looked to the group. “I am now the Kadaicha, the one that will bring your doom.”
Valkyre fell down the shaft and disappeared in a wave of fire.
ROAR!
Kaitos came screaming out of fire. She blasted through both the real world and the half world, burning everything she touched with her darkness powers. The Black fire, under Valkyre's control, followed after.


Valkyre stood on top of a cliff outside the burning base. She was in the real world.
They got out, Faust said into her mind.
Then I’ll find each one and make them pay for their sins.
Valkyre spread her giant wings, and took off. Disappearing into the smoke made from the fire and the clouds from the advancing storm.

[Ziggy]

I like this I can't wait for the next chapter

[Kursed]

I've just got to retype chapter 4 on wards because I lost the file.

[Ziggy]

Damn it....oh well.....

[Kursed]

Okay here it is (steel PM if I've done something wrong with your character)
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Chapter 4

The yells of the soldiers and the many sounds of gun fire echoed through the dark alleyway. The solders skidded to a halt when the alley way entered a empty street. The light flicked from a nearby streetpost.
"RARGH!"
The sudden yell startled the soldiers as a large ferret jumped out from his hiding spot. He punched one soldier in the chest, hearing the faint crack of ribs and the soldier stumbled backwards. The ferret bolted down the street as fast as he could, he didn't stop as a large flying shadow flew over him which was followed by the startled cries of the soldiers.
The ferret slowed down when he approached a river. Under the bridge he leaned against the wall,his eyes closed. The water reflected off his black untamed hair and countless scars. The water ripled and the ferret opened his eyes, one red, the other green; someone or something was coming. Steelfists stood up properly and walked quietly to the edge, the moonlight gared down on him. He cursed himself for dropping his binoculars earlier on when he had gotten ambushed.
Something large but very light landed behind him, Steelfists spun aroundvery fast and the newcomer let out a oof and fell into the river, disappearing beneath the surface. A helmet hit the ground with a clatter, Steelfists picked it up. It was shaped likes a birds head but had horns along the eye ridges.
"No one I know is a bird, unless..." Steelfists whispered to himself, as the figure surfaces. She was a black and red cat with brilliant gold eyes. She pulled herself out of the water and stood up.
"Thanks Steelfists, I really needed that," She squeezed some water out of her hair. The cat looked smaller and more fragile than Steelfists, but he knew she made that up with her unique power.
"Then don't creep up behind me, Valkyre," Steelfists chucked the helmet to Valkyre, which she almost dropped.Her talons made a clicking sound on the metal. "Someone would think you were working for Black Water."
"Thats exactly what I wanted to see you about."
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"So what your saying, is that Black Water is trying to start up again," Steelfists walked through the corridors of a large mothership Valkyre called Hyperion.Steelfists looked to Valkyre.
"I'm not really sure if that was Black Water, since it was really stormy," Valkyre replied. "Ebon said he was going to scan the area to see."
"Well has he?"
Valkyre nodded, Steelfists didn't needed any more explaining for he had already walked the rest of the corridor and into the control room. Ebon, the golden nine tailed fox, looked over his shoulder as Steelfists walked up. Valkyre stayed near the door.
"Valkyre explained everything."
"Are you going to work with us?" Ebon asked.
"Of course."
Ebon looked to Valkyre, "Is Binghi and Rusty still out flying around?"
"That I know of," Valkyre replied.
A small rumbling sound made Steel look down, a small purple and silver dragon looked up at the ferret through light purple eyes. The dragon run over to Valkyre, perching itself on her shoulder.
"Hay Skye," Valkyre patted the dragon. "I'll leave you boys to it then."
She turned to go out of the room when two more nine tailed foxes ran in. The largest, a silver and black one, Steelfists remembered to be Binghi, but the smallest and possibly youngest was purple with gold highlights, minus the face which was white. He had only one tails.
"Rusty," Valkyre said to the purple fox, he turned to her. "Did you got spotted?"
"Don't look at me, I'm the weapons pilot," Rusty pointed to Binghi. "He's the pilot."
"We didn't get spotted, Valley," Binghi informed.
"Good," Valkyre walked out of the room.

[Steel Valor]

You've managed to portray my character quite well, I applaud you! Just one question though exactly when is Parallax taking place. On a side note and not to sound mean but your chapters a little short for my taste but thats just me. Please continue!!!

[Kursed]

there short because when i right the drafts my writing is big but when i type it on the computer it turns out short. Parallax refers to Valkyre's ability to warp between the real world (Earth) and a Half-World where the lost souls go when they cant past on to the after life