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Ronic
October 13th, 2007, 02:47 PM
Hi everyone, I am new here and I am a fan fic writer. I have recently been creating my best fan fic, i hope its the best, Sonic: The Rise of Nazo, based on the light blue hedgehog on the pilot episode of Sonic X, and has most recentl been seen in Chakra-X's flash, Sonic: Nazo Unleased.
I also hope one day some nice, kind flash animator will say they wantto help me make my fan fics into a flash series like Chakra-X's.

Anyway, here's episode 1. I hope you enjoy!





Episode 1: The Birth of Nazo (Part 1)



(6 months after Sonic The Hedgehog on XBOX 360)


Sonic the Hedgehog. The world renowned hero of Earth. He has battled many of Dr Eggman’s creations.

And every single time, Sonic has used the power of the Positive side of the Chaos energy to become Super Sonic.

But Dr Eggman, time and time again has used the Chaos Emeralds Powers to try and destroy Sonic, by using the negative side of the Chaos energy.
His creations have been:


Perfect Chaos




Metal Sonic




Biolizard



After Sonic defeats these creations,
The negative Chaos Energy is stored in a Dark Emerald.

And when the Dark Emerald has stored enough Negative Chaos Energy,
It has too release it.

And when it does, the being known only as Nazo is released.

Although the hero will rise to quell the fight.

He alone will not be enough.

The Power of 3 will defeat the menace.

But will they be able to stop…


THE RISE OF NAZO!



(Theme Song: All Hail Shadow By Crush 40)


The episode begins on a stormy night on Angel Island, hovering over New York Bay. Sonic is running towards the shrine of Chaos, the home of the Master Emerald.


Sonic runs through the Forest of Angel Island as lightning strikes across the sky.
Sonic comes to an opening, looking up, and sees the shrine, which what seems to be Eggman and a White Hedgehog standing next to each other. Suddenly, a light blue gooey substance leaks out of the Master Emerald and starts to spread across the floor.

Shadow appears next to Sonic as the ooze slowing starts to spread round Sonic and Shadow’s feet. The light blue substance soaks Sonic and Shadow’s shadows, absorbing their negative side of their Chaos Energy, which is stored in Sonic and Shadow’s shadows.

On top of the Master Emerald, a figure forms. Suddenly, Sonic and Shadow start to be covered by the ooze. As Sonic struggles to stop the ooze from covering him, he sees the final form of the figure, just in time to hear it speak.

“GOODBYE, SONIC THE HEDGEHOG!” the figure says as Sonic springs up from leaning back on a tree, panting and breathing heavily. But the weird thing is, Sonic never runs out of breath.

Sonic got up and looked out onto the beautiful Wave Ocean from the top of a large cliff.

Sonic: Man! That was one weird dream. But it felt so real

Sonic said as he quenched his fist, as a drop of sweat fell off him and hit the ground.

Tails: SONIC!

A voice cried as Sonic looked up to see his 2 tailed flying friend, Tails the Fox.

Sonic: Tails! What’s up?

Sonic asked his friend as he hovered in the air in front of Sonic.

Tails: It’s Eggman! He’s attacking New York with his robots!

Sonic: Eggman huh? Well, what are we waiting for! Let’s Go!

Sonic shouted as he jumped off from the cliff edge, falling down the side of the cliff. Spinning into his Spin Ball, Sonic became faster and faster as he sped down the cliff. As he approached the water, he came out of his Spin Ball and pushed his legs out, jumping onto a wooden path, and sped off towards New York, with Tails flying behind.

MEANWHILE…ON THE ARC…

TV reporter: We interrupt your morning program to issue a special report. Numerous eye witnesses have seen what appears to be Dr Eggman and his hordes of robots, attacking New York City. What was strange is that as the doctor appeared, his ship emerged from a space time rift. GUN have issued that Doctor Eggman is locked up in a cell and is being watched as I speak, so it could not be him. Other people have seen what appears to be the white Hedgehog, with a Chaos Emerald. No-one has ever seen this type of Hedgehog before. As the doctor still continues his assault, there is still no sign of Sonic The Hedgehog. This is Roma Smith, reporting from the attack in New York. Back to you in the studio.

The TV reporter said as Shadow the Hedgehog, turned off the TV.

Shadow: The doctor and a new Hedgehog? What is going on? I think it is time to get the answers for myself!

Shadow said as he ran off into the base.

In The Future, just before the attack on New York

Silver the Hedgehog and his friend, Blaze the Cat are still protecting the city against the attacks lead by Dr Eggman Nega. Recently, Dr Eggman Nega has been attacking and attacking, leaving the city in ruins; exactly like what happened when Iblis was alive.

Silver: What does Eggman Nega want?

Blaze: I don’t know, but were going to find out!

Blaze said as Silver soared over head, using his Telekinesis to hover, with Blaze, running and jumping over the tops of buildings after him.

Suddenly, 4 of Eggman Nega’s mechs fly in, on both sides of Silver and Blaze. Hovering, Silver pulled back his arms and then pushed them out to the sides, throwing 2 mechs into buildings on either side. Using her flame powers, Blaze jumped and spun in the air, creating a flame cyclone, which pulled the mechs in, roasting them to pieces of scrap.

Eggman Nega: Ah, Silver and Blaze! How nice to finally meet you.

A voice said as a little hovering machine appeared in front of Silver. The cockpit opened to reveal Eggman Nega.

Silver: Nega! You are destroying everything. Why?

Silver yells as 8 mechs appear, with guns aimed at Silver and Blaze.

Eggman Nega: I wish to build a new city, where my robots and the human’s living here already can live in peace. I am fed up with destroying everything. I wish to bring down all these old buildings and create a new empire.

Blaze: Silver, this has got to be a trick. (Whispered)

Eggman Nega: Oh no my dear Blaze. To create my, I mean, our new Empire, I need all the Chaos Emeralds from the past and another Chaos Emerald. A Chaos Emerald known only as the “Dark Emerald”. With this Emerald, I will be able to power my machines that will be able to create the new city and my, I mean, our Empire. I need your Chaos Control powers, Silver, to allow me to go back in time to get the Chaos Emeralds and the “Dark Emerald”.

Blaze: Silver…

Blaze said, as she grabbed his arm, trying to stop Silver from helping Nega.

Silver: Sorry Nega, but I refuse to help. The city was fine till you started attacking it.

Nega: You are a very foolish Hedgehog
Nega said, as he pushed a button on his hovering machine, and 8 mechs appeared which started to circle Silver and Blaze.

Silver: Stay back Blaze! I’ll handle this!

Silver said, pushing Blaze away from his side. All the mechs turned their guns towards Silver and started to open fire. Quickly, Silver used his Psychokenesis to create a force field, which made the bullets from the guns of the mechs to bounce off.

Nega pushed another button, which shot out 4 little red balls, which circled Blaze. Then, one red ball shot out a pole which connected to another ball, and this continued till all the poles were connected. A spark of electricity sparked round on each pole and an electric net was formed around Blaze. The net levitated off the ground.

Silver: BLAZE!

Silver shouted as he charged up his power and released a huge wave of energy, destroying Nega’s mechs, but soon 8 more came in their places. Silver readied himself for another Psychokenesis attack.

Eggman Nega: You attack and the girl goes bye bye

Nega said, pressing another button, which made all the Mechs aim their guns at the net.

Silver: What do you want?

Eggman Nega: You retrieve me all the Chaos Emeralds and the Dark Emerald from the past, and I’ll let your friend free

Blaze: Silver! Don’t do it! Silver!

Blaze shouted, but Silver could not hear her.

Silver: I accept the terms

Silver says and floats up to Nega and they both shake hands.

Nega: Excellent! I will distract everyone on Earth, by attacking them, whilst you look for the Chaos Emeralds and the “Dark Emerald”. Oh and there is one more thing. In the past, there is a Hedgehog quite like you. He is blue and can run very fast and he will try to stop you.

Silver: And what is this Hedgehog’s name?

Silver asked.

Nega: His name is Sonic, Sonic The Hedgehog

Silver: And what should I do if he plans to stop me.

Nega: Destroy him!

End of Part 1

Black Knight
October 13th, 2007, 05:50 PM
It's a really good start, you're no rookie.
But I feel that it's too jumpy, the way you write is quite akward and the general strukture could be better.

I look forward to seeing more...

Ronic
October 14th, 2007, 06:36 AM
thanks Black Night

Shackel11
October 14th, 2007, 10:11 AM
The storyline is alright but as BK said it's too jumpy. Wait, if this is in the future after StH'06 then Silver should know who Sonic is.... Right?

Ronic
October 14th, 2007, 10:49 AM
if you remember, before Silver met Mephiles, he knew nothing about Sonic and when Elise blew out Solaris Flame on the candle, everthin that happened, like Sonic meeting Elise, Sonic meeting Silver and Blaze dying never happened.

Shackel11
October 14th, 2007, 11:15 AM
Wait, Blaze died? I thought Sonic died and came back to life in that cliche crud. XDD I never played the game. I just looked it up and forgot the ending. lawl

Ronic
October 14th, 2007, 12:12 PM
what do you guys mean by jumpy?

and I promise the next one will be better!

Ronic
October 14th, 2007, 12:14 PM
Wait, Blaze died? I thought Sonic died and came back to life in that cliche crud. XDD I never played the game. I just looked it up and forgot the ending. lawl

Yes, Blaze did die but then when Sonic blew out the Solaris Flame, everything that happened, didn't happen and Blaze returned from the dead

Ronic
October 14th, 2007, 02:33 PM
Hey guys! It's Ronic here with part 2 of Episode 1 from my fan fic series, Sonic: Rise of Nazo, which I will be referring to as the abreviatated term, Sonic:RON

I have written it in script form because I hope one day that some nice, good sonic flash animator will see my work and say:

"How about I help you make your fan fic series a success by turning into a flash animation"

(HINT HINT)

Well anyway guys and girls, here Sonic: Rise of Nazo Episode 1 Part 2, enjoy and comment!



Sonic: Rise of Nazo

Episode 1: The Birth of Nazo (Part 2)


Sonic and Tails are running through the city, dodging and hitting Egg mechs, not knowing they actually belong to Eggman Nega, but thinking they belong to the Eggman of their world.

Suddenly, 6 mechs appear in front of Sonic and Tails’s path.

Tails: SONIC!

Tails cried as Sonic spun into his Spin Ball and charged at the mechs, bouncing off each of them, until he defeated them.

Sonic: Where is that Egghead anyway?

Eggman Nega: are my ears burning?

A voice cried as Sonic and Tails turned round and looked up.

Sonic: How’d on, your not Eggman?!

Sonic said as Eggman Nega’s vehicle hovered on top of a building.

Eggman Nega: You’re a very observant Hedgehog aren’t you. No I am not Eggman. I am Dr Eggman Nega, the Eggman of your world is my great, great grandfather. I have come to collect the Dark Emerald, and the miracle gems that are the key to its secret, The Chaos Emeralds! Now, obliterate them!

His mechs aimed and charged their guns to fire


[Theme Song: All Hail Shadow by Crush 40]


Silver: EGGMAN!

Cried a voice as a white Hedgehog jumped off a building, stood in front of Sonic and Tails.

Nega: Did you get the Chaos Emeralds and the Dark Emerald?

Silver: Yes, all apart from 2 Chaos Emeralds

Silver said, as he showed Nega the Chaos Emeralds and the Dark Emerald, together in a sports bag.

Silver: Now, release Blaze as promised.

Nega: All in good time by little rodent friend. First, give the Emeralds to me, then destroy the blue Hedgehog and collect his Chaos Emeralds. Then head to a place called Angel Island. Once there, the guardian of the Master Emerald, Knuckles will try to stop you from taking the Master Emerald. Defeat him and wait for me. Then you will get what you deserve. Now hand them over.

Sonic: Hey! Dude, I wouldn’t do that if I were you

Silver: Sorry to say it, but you’re not me

Silver said, as he threw the sports bag into the air, landing in Eggman Nega’s hover craft

Nega: Good! You have done well. Now, get the Blue Hedgehog’s Emerald and destroy them!

Nega said as he flew off in his vehicle, as Silver turned to face Sonic and Tails.

Tails: Who are you?

Silver: My name is Silver, Silver The Hedgehog. And my mission is to destroy you both.
Silver said as he pulled back his hand, ready to charge for a Telekinesis attack.

Suddenly, a black Hedgehog appeared, holding a green Chaos Emerald.


Shadow:CHAOS…CONTROL!!


The black Hedgehog cried as his Chaos Emerald glowed as time slowed down for everyone else, apart from the black Hedgehog. The black Hedgehog did a spinning kick, which sent Silver flying into a building. The building shook and rubble fell down atop of Silver. The black Hedgehog landed on the ground.

Tails: SHADOW!

Sonic: Took you long enough!

Shadow: Hmph! Incompetent hedgehog!

Suddenly, a rock smashed into the back of Shadow, sending him flying onto the ground.

Shadow got his face out of the ground and looked where the rock was thrown from. Where the rubble once was, now was Silver, levitating in mid air, with several large pieces of rock hovering round him.

Shadow: So you’re the White Hedgehog helping Eggman Nega

Silver: Another Hedgehog?!?! Hmph! Doesn’t matter! Just another tombstone in a graveyard. Now, give me your Chaos Emerald!

Shadow: You want it. Come get it!

Shadow said, as he jumped at Silver

Silver: I will prive it from your crippled hands! AHHHHHHHHHHH!

Silver yelled as he threw all the rocks at Shadow.

Using his Chaos Control, Shadow dodged the rocks and made his way towards Silver.

Shadow: Sonic! You go after the doctor! I will handle Silver!

Shadow yelled as he punched Silver in the stomach, then back kicking him into the ground.

Sonic: Right!
Sonic yelled doing a thumb up sign as he and Tails ran off after Nega’s battleship.

Shadow: Alright! Time to finish this!

Shadow yelled as he ran at Silver. Shadow raised a punch at Silver, but Silver threw up his hand, using his Telekinesis powers to stop Shadow in his tracks.

Silver: No-one is fast enough to stop me!

Silver said as he threw Shadow into a building.


BOOM!


Silver: That should be the end of you. WHAT?!?!

Silver said as Shadow stood on the ground, without a scratch on him.

Silver: HOW?!?! That’s impossible!

Shadow: They don’t call me the Ultimate Life Form for nothing. Now, try and stop this! CHAOS SPEAR!

Shadow cried as he released his Chaos Energy.

Silver used his telekinesis and stopped it, but when he looked back at Shadow, he is gone. Shadow then reappears, behind Silver and spinning kicks him in the head, and then vanishes again.

Shadow: You can’t stop what you can’t see!

Shadow’s voice echoes as Silver looks around. Suddenly, a Chaos Spear, flies out of no-where and hits Silver.

Silver: I have had enough!!!

Silver yelled, sending out a wave of Telekinesis, stopping Shadow and making him visible.

Silver: Now your mine!

Silver yells as he levitates to Shadow, releasing multiple kicks and punches until Shadow falls to the ground.

Shadow: I must…get...up!”

Shadow says as he faints on the floor.

Silver: Ultimate life form? Pathetic!

Silver says as he picks up Shadow’s green Chaos Emerald and uses Chaos Control and warps out.

During the battle, Sonic and Tails are running after Eggman Nega.

Sonic: I wonder what Nega is up to?

Sonic said as Tails flew in closer to Sonic.

Tails: I don’t know, but did you notice the Chaos Emerald that Silver gave to Nega. It was a different colour to the rest of the Chaos Emeralds

Tails said as he flew next to Sonic.

Sonic: Yeah. It looks like an Emerald from my….

Sonic stops speaking as he comes to a stop.

Tails: Sonic? What’s wrong?

Tails asked as he lands on the ground, looking at Sonic puzzled.

Sonic: That Emerald looked exactly like the Emerald in my dream

Sonic says as Tails looks scared.

Tails: What dream?

Sonic: Before you came over, I had this weird dream

Sonic says as he tells Tails about his dream.


(FLASHBACK OF DREAM)


Sonic: I was on Angel Island and I was running towards the shrine of the Master Emerald. I looked up at the shrine, and someone had collected all 7 Chaos Emeralds and that black Emerald. The 7 original Chaos Emeralds were circling the Master Emerald and the black one was on top. Then this figure approached the shrine, which was Eggman Nega and a hedgehog next to him, which has to be Silver. He says something, but I can’t hear him. Suddenly, out of the Chaos Emeralds, loads of black and purple energy shoot out of them and go into the black Emerald. Then the Master Emerald shot a beam of its own black and purple energy into Silver. Then slowly, light blue ooze comes out of the black Emerald and covers the ground. It then takes away Shadow’s and my shadows, again the black Emerald absorbing our Dark Chaos Energy. Slowly, around the black Emerald, a figure forms, which looks to be like a Hedgehog. The light blue ooze starts to cover Shadow and I. I try to break out, but I can’t. Then the Hedgehog says “DIE, SONIC THE HEDGEHOG!” and then I woke up


(FLASHBACK OF DREAM ENDS)



Sonic: So Tails, what do you think?

Tails: I don’t know, but whenever an member of the Eggman family gets there hands on the Chaos Emeralds, you know there is going to be big trouble.

Sonic: We’ve got to warn old Knuckle head that Nega is coming his way

Sonic starts to run off a little down the road.

Sonic: I’ll go after Eggman Nega and try and slow him down! Tails, you go warn Knuckles!

Tails: Alright! But you be careful!

Sonic runs down the street at lightning speed.


(Music: Open Your Heart)


Sonic is running down the street, as Eggman Nega’s ship soars over head. Suddenly, the turrets on Eggman Nega’s battleship turn and aim at Sonic and fire. Being the fastest Hedgehog in the world, Sonic dodges the lasers. Then, Tails and the Tornado show up, flying over head.
Sonic jumps up unto the Tornado as they fly in closer to Nega’s Battleship.

Nega’s battleship turrets turn and fire at the Tornado, but thanks to Tail’s expert piloting, the Tornado dodges the bullets. Sonic transforms into his Spin Ball and rockets through the sky, landing on top of Nega’s battleship. Then Tails flies off to Angel Island.

Suddenly, Silver arrives from Chaos Control onto the ship.

Silver: Now Sonic! Hand over the Chaos Emerald!

Sonic: You want it. Here have it!

Sonic yells throwing the Chaos Emerald. Silver caught the Emerald.

Sonic: Hey Silver! Look up!

Sonic yells as Silver tilts his head up, just in time to see Sonic kick him in the stomach, sending him flying backwards, dropping the Chaos Emerald, but Sonic caught it as he lands back on the ship.

Silver: Ugh! Give me that Emerald!

Sonic: Hey! You’re a Hedgehog, like me. You shouldn’t be helping someone part of the Eggman family. You should be stopping them.

Silver: Blaze. I am doing this for Blaze!

Silver yelled as a tear ran down his face.

Sonic: Whoever this Blaze is, she wouldn’t want you to do this! Silver! Nega is using you to get the Chaos Emeralds for a plan of his! Hey! He did the same thing with Shadow

Silver: No! Once my part of the deal is done, he will release Blaze. But you’re trying to stop me. You don’t want her back. Well Sonic, if you’re going to stop me, then I see no other choice then to destroy you!

Silver yelled as he sent balls of Telekinetic power at Sonic.

Sonic dodged the attacks; then sent a kick into Silver, rebounding off him, doing a backward somersault.
Silver landed on the ground with a bang and then got back up. Sonic and Silver both ran at each other.

Sonic+Silver: CHAOS…CONTROL!!” they both shouted as they both vanished into the air.

Flashes of Sonic and Silver appear as they stop for a split second as they each send out a kick or a punch. Sonic then sends out a punch, but then Silver uses his Telekinesis and stops Sonic, then throwing him down into the ship, right through the roof, then following him. Silver dealt millions of punches into Sonic as they burst through the decks of the ship.

Silver: Why won’t you die?!

Silver said, as he continued his punches as they both came out of the bottom of the ship.

As they were both falling to Earth, out of the hole in the ship, 6 Chaos Emeralds fell out. They begin to glow, as well as the 1 Sonic was holding. Suddenly, a yellow flash lightens the area as Sonic and Silver both become their Super Forms.

Super Silver: I SHOULD HAVE DONE THIS WHEN WE FIRST MET!

Super Silver shouts as he shoots a beam of energy at Sonic.

Super Sonic: SILVER! I AM GOING TO STOP YOU ONCE AND FOR ALL!

Super Sonic yelled as he span into his Spin Ball and headed right for Super Silver. Super Sonic hit the beam, but kept going and going until…


BOOM!


Silver returned to his normal form and started to fall to the ground.

Super Sonic: SILVER! NO!

Sonic returned to his normal form and fell towards Earth as the Chaos Emeralds went into the ship towards Eggman Nega.

Suddenly, a huge turret came out of Nega’s ship fired at Sonic, knocking him unconscious.

Eggman Nega: Finally, the Hedgehogs are dead and I have the Dark Emerald and the 7 Chaos Emeralds! Now, onwards to Angel Island!

Nega yelled as the half destroyed ship entered a time rift.

Sonic and Silver fell to earth. As Sonic kept drifting in and out of consciousness, he kept seeing images flashing before him of a Black hedgehog appearing and out of no-where and grabbing him and Silver. Eventually, Sonic blacked out.

Later, Sonic awoke to find himself in a grassy field outside New York, with Silver lying next to him. Sonic got up and noticed Shadow looking out onto the city.

Sonic: Shadow?

Sonic said as he walked up to the side of Shadow.

Shadow: Finally, you’re awake. How do you feel?

Sonic: Like I just got hit by a laser

Sonic joked as he looked out onto the city.

Sonic: Thanks Shadow. I owe you one

Shadow: I wasn’t saving you. I was trying to save the Chaos Emer…

Then the 2 burst into laughter, as Shadow always uses the excuse that he was saving the Chaos Emeralds, instead of saying he saved Sonic

Shadow: Where are the Chaos Emeralds?

Shadow said, his laughing face wiped clean, with now a more serious face on.

Sonic: Nega has them. And speaking of Eggman Nega, where is our Eggman?

Shadow: GUN has him. We have him under lock and key after the Black Alien attack. So where is Eggman Nega heading?

Sonic: Angel Island. Tails is already heading there to try and tell Knuckles

Shadow: Then that’s where we gotta go there then. We just got to wake up Sil…

Shadow said as he turned to Silver, who was gone.

Sonic: Dam it!! He still thinks Eggman Nega can save “Blaze”

Shadow: He probably heard our convocation. We gotta go to Angel Island!

Shadow said, as he pulled out his Chaos Emerald.

Sonic: But I thought Silver took yours?
Shadow: That one was a fake; you don’t really believe I would let someone beat the crud out of me and take my Emerald now would you?

Sonic: Well, I did that to you several times.

Shadow: You want to go to Angel Island by Chaos Control and save your friends or do you want me to kick you all the way there?!?!?!

Sonic: I choose Chaos Control please

Shadow: Ok, after 3

Sonic: Wait, is that on 3 or after you say 3

Shadow: You annoying Hedgehog!

Shadow said as he grabbed Sonic by the arm

Shadow: CHAOS…CONTROL!!


End of Part 2

Black Knight
October 14th, 2007, 02:44 PM
Please keep all this in one topic...

Ronic
October 14th, 2007, 02:51 PM
lol sorry:D

Black Knight
October 14th, 2007, 04:43 PM
Might sound harsh, but spam one more time and it'll result in an infraction.

Kursed
October 15th, 2007, 12:14 AM
Blaze didn't die she sealed both her and Iblis away in a different dimension, but the way the game was done it looked like she died. I've only watched the clips on Youtube I haven't got the game yet.

Ronic
October 15th, 2007, 05:34 AM
oh........ok. If you ask me she died because the Power of Iblis contained her soul was too much for her. And anyway, if you remember the final story, everything that happened, like with Blaze and that didn't happen, as Sonic blew out the Solaris Flame.

Ronic
October 15th, 2007, 05:44 AM
ok, sorry about the laugh out loud thing

Ziggy
October 15th, 2007, 07:58 AM
dude is this story on Newgrounds, I saw a title just like it.

Black Knight
October 15th, 2007, 10:56 AM
The lol thing doesn't matter at all
What I mean is that you posted this topic twice and if what Ziggy says is true then it means you've stolen two things.
Not just this story, but the pictures in your art topic too.

Ronic
October 15th, 2007, 11:29 AM
number 1: Ok, I used an Sonic Character Designer
Number 2: This story is all written by me, because I also ha a newgrounds account as I was trying to see if anyon wouldn't mind helping me make my fan fic into flash animation

Black Knight
October 15th, 2007, 11:58 AM
I knew about the Sonic Character Designer.
And if what you say is true then it's no worries. Innocent until proved guilty.

Ronic
October 15th, 2007, 12:02 PM
ok...you want proof, my Newgrounds account where I started to publish my stories to see if anyone would help me make a sonic flash, I know the password to it

Black Knight
October 15th, 2007, 12:07 PM
Didn't say I needed or wanted proof, cause honestly I'm not interested.
Innocent until proved guilty, like I said....

Ronic
October 16th, 2007, 04:22 AM
ok, sorry BK

Sparky
October 16th, 2007, 05:31 PM
The story has a pretty good plot.

Negatives:

Shadow
- way too friendly
- wouldn't ask about how you're feeling
- Doesn't! Doesn't! Doesn't laugh!

Silver
- too serious, keep in mind that he's a 14 year old.

Kursed
October 16th, 2007, 11:30 PM
He does laugh its just evil, EVIL. It the only thing i don't like about Shadow.

Black Knight
October 17th, 2007, 11:23 AM
Shadow does chuckle at least.

Look at the ending for Team Dark and he chuckles when he's talking to Rouge.
Thus he COULD laugh and be friendly, when he wants to be.

Got no oppinion on Silver cause I don't know him. =O

Sparky
October 18th, 2007, 10:04 PM
Yes, but he said that Sonic and Shadow laughed together. Not that Sonic fell over laughing and Shadow smirked and gave an exasperated chuckle. *nodnod*

Yes, but that is Rouge, you see. They are battle partners and friends. Sonic... is his rival.

Play Sonic the Hedgehog for XBox and complete Silver's mission. Then you'll know Silver. ^^

Kursed
October 18th, 2007, 10:33 PM
Shadow does chuckle at least.

Look at the ending for Team Dark and he chuckles when he's talking to Rouge.
Thus he COULD laugh and be friendly, when he wants to be.

Got no oppinion on Silver cause I don't know him. =O

Its evil on Shadow The Hedgehog, when you go the neutral mission. It just annoys the heck out of me, I never realised he laughs at the end of Team Dark.

Sparky
October 19th, 2007, 07:36 AM
Wait a second, Team Dark on Sonic Heroes? That's what I meant. But I'll look at the ending of Dark for SAB2 too.
[EDIT]:// I looked. It was just Eggman scratching his butt and laughing. Never mind.


Its evil on Shadow The Hedgehog, when you go the neutral mission. It just annoys the heck out of me, I never realised he laughs at the end of Team Dark.

You can't go full neutral at the end of Shadow the Hedgehog. You go either Hero or Dark at the very end, then that determines what's Shadow's, eh, destiny?
And when he laughs, that's by himself. We're talking about laughing out loud with his rival here.

Black Knight
October 19th, 2007, 10:07 AM
Yes, but he said that Sonic and Shadow laughed together. Not that Sonic fell over laughing and Shadow smirked and gave an exasperated chuckle. *nodnod*

Yes, but that is Rouge, you see. They are battle partners and friends. Sonic... is his rival.

Play Sonic the Hedgehog for XBox and complete Silver's mission. Then you'll know Silver. ^^

In the end of Team Dark's story in Sonic Heroes he doesn't smirk AND chuckles, he actually chuckles without anykind of of evilness to it.

Ugh, Sonic and Shadow being rivals just reminds me of what's happening to Knuckles.
I seriously hate SEGA for that...

Oh, I have neither a copy of Sonic the Hedgehog next gen OR an Xbox 360, neither do I have the money to buy either.


Its evil on Shadow The Hedgehog, when you go the neutral mission. It just annoys the heck out of me, I never realised he laughs at the end of Team Dark.

He does.
Rouge says "All of this for what? Nothing! I might as well go look for that master emerald as that irritaiting echidna is here!"
Shadow replies *chuckles* "Hah, somethings never change....Do they?"



And when he laughs, that's by himself. We're talking about laughing out loud with his rival here.

Even if they are rivals it doesn't mean that they can't laugh.
Besides, I think he's getting a nice balance to Shadow, plus making him less of an emo.(Compared to many Fanfics I've seen.)

In other fanfics I've seen Shadow trying to take over the world, constantly sitting in a corner saying 'Maria', fallen in love with various different fangirl characters.

Seriously, he's doing a good job of this.

Ronic
October 19th, 2007, 02:49 PM
ummmmm, ok............ :confused: thanks BK, I think :confused:

Sparky
October 19th, 2007, 10:46 PM
Ugh, Sonic and Shadow being rivals just reminds me of what's happening to Knuckles.
I seriously hate SEGA for that...

What's happening to Knuckles? What do you mean?

Even if they are rivals it doesn't mean that they can't laugh.
Besides, I think he's getting a nice balance to Shadow, plus making him less of an emo.(Compared to many Fanfics I've seen.)

What I'm saying is that I don't think that Shadow would have a full-out laugh with Sonic just yet. Maybe with Rouge, since they're friends and all, but just not with Sonic.

In other fanfics I've seen Shadow trying to take over the world, constantly sitting in a corner saying 'Maria', fallen in love with various different fangirl characters.

Argh. I hate that. All of the girls are constantly making Shadow fall in love with their fan-characters. Even my sister did that. *sighs and grimaces*
I hate it because its obvious that he's not going to get with anyone anytime soon.

Black Knight
October 20th, 2007, 10:16 AM
What's happening to Knuckles? What do you mean?

What I'm talking about is how Shadow is more and more becoming Sonic's rival while Knuckles is mainly put into the games for comic relife. He's more and more only being turned into a thick and tempratental joke.

What I'm saying is that I don't think that Shadow would have a full-out laugh with Sonic just yet. Maybe with Rouge, since they're friends andall, but just not with Sonic.

Who knows...with the time that have passed and the things they've gone through...Shadow doesn't hate Sonic and Sonic doesn't hate Shadow...Even if they're rivals Shadow actually have ackknowledge Sonic to be the Ultimate Lifeform....I really don't see why they wouldn't be able to laugh together, who knows how long the laughs lasted? A second? Was it very loud or kinda held back? He doesn't describe this....

Argh. I hate that. All of the girls are constantly making Shadow fall in love with their fan-characters. Even my sister did that. *sighs and grimaces*
I hate it because its obvious that he's not going to get with anyone anytime soon.

I did it when I first rped, at which point I was 13, but within a week of seeing all the Shadow fangirls pairing him up with their characters I got sick over competing with them and just went and got my character paired with another dudes character...Which led to other fun stuff, but thats another story. <D

Sparky
October 20th, 2007, 12:02 PM
I did it when I first rped, at which point I was 13, but within a week of seeing all the Shadow fangirls pairing him up with their characters I got sick over competing with them and just went and got my character paired with another dudes character...Which led to other fun stuff, but thats another story. <D

Glad that we agree on something. =P

Who knows...with the time that have passed and the things they've gone through...Shadow doesn't hate Sonic and Sonic doesn't hate Shadow...

Proof please? I'm not denying the fact, I just want some examples.

Even if they're rivals Shadow actually have ackknowledge Sonic to be the Ultimate Lifeform....I really don't see why they wouldn't be able to laugh together, who knows how long the laughs lasted? A second? Was it very loud or kinda held back? He doesn't describe this....

I guess it depends on the way that you look at it. I just don't picture Shadow laughing with Sonic.

Black Knight
October 20th, 2007, 12:23 PM
Proof please? I'm not denying the fact, I just want some examples.


Shadow fights along side Sonic against Final Hazard.
Sonic asks Shadow if he's ok in the battle against Final Hazard.
Shadow tells Sonic that he and the other teams will clear the stage for Sonic, Tails and Knuckles to use their "super powers". Which shows that he trusts Sonic, which he wouldn't do if he hated him.
They're more rivals then that they hate each other.
I guess it depends on the way that you look at it. I just don't picture Shadow laughing with Sonic.

Well, apparently the author of the Fanfic could imagen them laughing together and to put it bluntly, that makes his choice to make, no matter what your personal oppinion is.

Ronic
October 20th, 2007, 01:37 PM
thanks BK.

I would just like to say that when I was writing, I could imagine the scene in my head, for example, the edge of the glade with Sonic and Shadow, looking out onto NY, chatting and "hanging out" about "WTF" just happened.

And I have a friend that kind of reminds me of Shadow, even though he hates SEGA and has never heard of Shadow. Anyway, even though he's a...how can i say this....EMO, were still best friends and we talk and laugh together

Ronic
October 20th, 2007, 02:25 PM
I know you guys love my fan fics, so heres part 3. ENJOY!


Sonic: The Rise of Nazo

Episode 1: The Birth of Nazo (Part 3)

Sonic and Shadow arrived on Angel Island from Chaos Control.

Shadow: Something is wrong. The Chaos Energy from the Master Emerald is being disturbed

Shadow said as he put his hand to the ground and felt the vibrations.

Sonic: We gotta hurry!

Sonic said as both he and Shadow both sped off into the Forest of Angel Island.

Sonic: This is like my dream!

Sonic thought as he ran through the undergrowth. Suddenly, Sonic and Shadow came to a clearing, with the Master Emerald shrine directly in front of them.

Sonic looks at the shrine and low and behold, sees Eggman Nega and Silver.

Eggman Nega: You’re too late to stop me Sonic. Soon, the Chaos Bringer will arise!

Eggman Nega said as he turned towards the Master Emerald, with the 7 Chaos Emeralds and the Dark Emerald on top, hovering over the Master Emerald.

Sonic: Why Nega? Why are you doing this?

Eggman Nega: I am doing this to bring hope and glory back to the Eggman name. After all these years, hedgehogs have been interfering in my ancestor’s plans. Since the first attack on Mobius (Sonic’s home planet!!) to Earth, hedgehogs have been a thorn in my side. And now, with the most powerful being, the Chaos Bringer! I will be able to destroy you once and for all!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Nega laughed. Just as he turned round towards the alter, Nega suddenly stopped, as a light green flow of energy went round his body, he levitated off the ground and turned in mid air towards Silver, who had stopped him.

Silver: Not so fast Eggman! Release Blaze first, like you promised.

Nega: Fine

Nega said, pressing a button on his sleeve, which stopped the cage containing Blaze and gently lowered to the ground. As Blaze stepped out of the cage, Silver released Nega from his grip.

Sonic: Silver! You shouldn’t have let him go!

Silver: I had too to get back Blaze

Nega: Oh, but Silver. Sonic was right. You shouldn’t have let me go because now, I will unleash total Chaos across Time and Space!

Nega said as he began the ritual

Eggman Nega: Chaos Bringer. Master of destruction, the Ultimate Being! Rise from your slumber to your new master! Rise and destroy your ultimate enemy, the Hedgehogs!!!!!

Nega cried with joy as the Dark Emerald shot 7 beams of Dark Chaos Energy into the 7 Chaos Emeralds.
The Chaos Emeralds began to glow a dark purple colour as they shot beams into the Master Emerald. Light blue ooze came out of the Master Emerald and spread onto the floor. Light blue ooze covered the floor, swallowing Sonic and Shadow’s shadows. But then, stray shots of Dark Chaos Energy shot out everywhere as the Master Emerald went out of Control.

Eggman Nega: What is wrong?!?! I have done everything the ritual says!!

Nega cried as he looked at the Tablet of Mystery, the instruction booklet to the ritual.

Eggman Nega: A ha! I need a vessel!

Nega cried as he looked at Silver. One off his robots quickly shot a tranquilizer into Silver, then, Silver fell to the floor.

Blaze: SILVER!!!!!!

Blaze cried as she tried to stop one of the mechs from taking Silver away.

Eggman Nega: Shoot her!

Nega cried as one of Nega’s mechs fired a bullet into Blaze.

Sonic: NO!!!!!!!!!!

Sonic cried, as a tear ran down his face as he struggled to free himself from the ooze. But then, the ooze released the grip on Sonic and Shadow, as it was slowly absorbed back into the Master Emerald.

Silver’s body lifted up off the ground as a beam of Dark Energy shot from the Master Emerald into Silver. Suddenly, there was a huge explosion as Angel Island started to fall to the ground.

Sonic: What’s happening?!?!”

Sonic yelled as the island fell to the ground.

Shadow: The Master Emerald has been destroyed!!

Eggman Nega: MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Nega laughed as the island hit the sea, near New York Bay.

Sonic awoke to find the light blue ooze gone. He stood up and looked at the shrine, with now a figure standing there. Shadow also got up and looked at the shrine.

Sonic: Silver?!?!

Nazo: I am not Silver anymore Sonic. I am the ultimate being! I am Nazo!

Shouted the figure as the smoke cleared, revealing a light blue hedgehog.

Nazo: I am Nazo the Hedgehog. My destiny is to destroy all hedgehogs with the power of Chaos, and to my findings, there are 3 Hedgehogs. The one known as Silver is gone, so that only leaves 2 more

Tails: Sonic!!!

Tails and Knuckles ran out from the trees, running at Sonic and Shadow.

Nazo: Time for you to suffer like I have for the past 5000 years!

Nazo shouts as he powers up a Dark Chaos Energy ball, firing it at Tails and Knuckles.

Sonic: NO!!!

Sonic yells, running at Tails and Knuckles, grabbing them, and running out of the way of the Dark Chaos Energy ball.

Knuckles: My Master Emerald! You destroyed it! Now you’ve made me mad!

Knuckles shouted as he flew at Nazo, pulled back his fist and threw a punch at Nazo. Suddenly, Nazo moved his arm and blocked Knuckles’s punch, squeezing it hard.

Knuckles: AHHHHHH!

Knuckles yelled in pain as he fell to the floor on his knees.

Nazo: Pathetic!

Nazo said as he powered up an energy ball, sending it into Knuckles’s chest, sending him flying through a stone pillar.

Sonic: KNUCKLES!!!
Sonic yelled as he looked at Knuckles’s lifeless body.

Tails: Eat this!

Tails yelled as he pulled out his gun and fired at Nazo. Nazo dodged the bullets in a blur.

Sonic: Was that Chaos Control?!?!

Shadow: No. He is just too fast!

Shadow said as Nazo reappeared behind Tails.

Nazo: Another pathetic being!

Nazo cried as he powered his dark energy and released a powerful beam into Tails’s chest, sending it right through.

Sonic: TAILS!!!!!!!

Sonic yelled as he ran to Tails and grabbed him in his arms.

Tails: Sonic…He’s too powerful…

Tails said, as he struggled to speak.

Sonic: Tails! Hang in there!

Sonic said as he held Tail’s body.

Tails: Sonic…Promise me…Stop Nazo…!

Tails said as his body went limb.

Sonic: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Nazo: MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

As Nazo laughed, Sonic slowly laid Tails down and stood up. He quenched his fist in rage.
Sonic: You think this is funny….

Sonic said, as Nazo turned towards him.

Sonic: YOU THINK THIS IS FUNNY?!?!?

Sonic yelled as his anger began to rise

Sonic: YOU THINK ENDING SOMEONE LIFE IS FUNNY?!?!?!?

Sonic yelled as the Chaos Emeralds and the Dark Emerald and floated and span around Sonic.

Sonic: WELL I HAVE NEWS FOR YOU NAZO!!!!

Sonic said, as the Emeralds began to glow.

Sonic: I DON’T THINK THIS IS FUNNY. BUT THIS IS….AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Sonic cried, as in a flash of black Chaos Energy, Sonic transformed into Dark Super Sonic!


Dark Super Sonic flew at Nazo, throwing a punch and a kick. Nazo blocked the kick, then blocked the punch, doing a reverse kick into the back of Dark Super Sonic, sending him flying into the ground.


BOOM!!

Suddenly, Dark Super Sonic shot out of the smoke, formed after the hit into the ground and kicked Nazo, sending him flying upwards. Nazo span into his Spin Ball and hovered in the air.

Nazo: You are powerful. Very powerful! But now, Goodbye, Sonic The Hedgehog! CHAOS SPHERE!

Nazo cried, charging and releasing a ball of Chaos Energy.

Dark Super Sonic: You haven’t seen anything yet!

Dark Super Sonic yelled as he charged and released a beam of black Chaos Energy into Nazo, sending him flying through the air, over the island and smashing into the sea.

Suddenly, a light blue figure could be seen flying quickly over the sea.

Dark Super Sonic: I'll make you pay Nazo! CHAOS SPHERE!!!

Dark Super Sonic said as he fired millions of Chaos Spheres at Nazo, but Nazo was too quick and dodged all the blasts. Before Dark Super Sonic knew it, Nazo appeared out of no-where and spinning kicked Dark Super Sonic in the face, sending him flying into a rock face. As the smoke cleared from the impact, Dark Super Sonic, fell off the rock wall and onto the ground, then changing back into normal Sonic.

Nazo: I was expecting more of a challenge

Nazo said, turning and walking away from Sonic as he lay on the ground.

Sonic: Hey! I’m not finished with you yet!

A voice cried out, as Nazo turned round to see Sonic slowly stand up.

Sonic: You’ve destroyed too many lives for me to just let you walk away! But on my own, I don’t stand a chance.

Sonic said, looking at Shadow

Shadow: Oh no!

Shadow said as he knew what was coming.

Sonic: Hey Shadow! I’m waiting!

Sonic said, as he crossed his arms and tapped his right foot on the ground and looked at Shadow. (Like in Sonic Underground)

Shadow: Fine!

Nazo: You 2 think you have a chance against me! Then you’re more pathetic then Silver. CHAOS SPHERE!!!!

Nazo said as he released 2 energy balls at Sonic and Shadow.

They dodged them and Sonic kicked one of the energy balls back at Nazo.

Sonic: We might not have a chance, but we will keep fighting and fighting till we take you down. Because were not fighting for us. Were fighting for Tails, Knuckles, Silver and Blaze!

Sonic said as he flew at Nazo and threw a kick at him.

Nazo: I am not Silver. I am Nazo!

Nazo cried as he blocked the kick, then released a beam of energy at Sonic, sending him flying into a rock, making an dent.


SMASH!


Shadow: That’s power? This is power! CHAOS SPEAR!

Shadow cried as he released a huge blast of energy at Nazo.


BOOM!

Nazo: AHHHHHHHH!

Cried Nazo as he flew backwards, smashing into the ground.

Shadow then soared down towards Nazo, with his leg out. Just as Shadow almost hit Nazo with his foot, Nazo used Chaos Control and dodged Shadow’s attack, as Shadow’s foot smashed into the ground. Shadow then flipped round and jumped into the air, as Nazo flew back down towards Shadow.

Shadow + Nazo: CHAOS CONTROL!

Shadow and Nazo cried as they became blurs and then vanished into thin air.

Sounds of punches and kicks echoed in the air as Shadow and Nazo both released punches and kicks at each other. Suddenly, Shadow fell to the earth and slammed into the ground.

Sonic: Alright. Let’s do this!

Sonic said as he pulled back and then released, flinging himself into the air, towards Nazo. Nazo charged his power and then released a beam of energy at Sonic. Sonic soared upwards towards Nazo, then spinning round, missed the blast and then kicked Nazo in the chest, sending him flying, then Sonic span into his Spin Ball and then flew after Nazo.

As Nazo soared into the air, Sonic in his Spin Ball appeared above him and the Spin Ball slammed into him, sending him hurtling into the ground. Moving fast, Sonic appeared under Nazo then doing a uppercut punch, sent Nazo flying into the air. Again, Sonic appeared above Nazo, charged his power and released a beam of energy into Nazo, sending him into the ground.


BOOM!


Nazo’s body lay motionless on the ground. Nazo’s body was covered in bruises and cuts, with small amount of blood coming out of the cuts.

Shadow: Not bad, for a blue hedgehog!

Shadow said as Sonic landed back on the ground.

Sonic: Not too bad. For a moody, black throw pillow!

Sonic laughed as he turned back to Nazo. Nazo’s body was now glowing a strange colour, as slowly, to Sonic and Shadow’s amazement, the bruises and cuts began to heal and disappear from Nazo’s body. Suddenly Nazo’s eyes opened as he floated back to his feet.

Sonic: What do we have to do to defeat this guy?

Shadow: Embrace the power of Positive Chaos!

Shadow said as he and Sonic closed their eyes and focused on Positive Chaos Power.

Suddenly, the Chaos Emeralds all began to glow and Sonic and Shadow began to float off the ground as they began to glow a light yellow colour, and in a flash, Super Sonic and Super Shadow were formed.

Nazo: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Nazo screams as a huge burst of dark Chaos Energy bursts out of Nazo and into the air. All the Chaos Emeralds and the “Dark Emerald” start glowing as Nazo starts to use their power.

Super Sonic: Well, you know what they say, the harder they come, the harder they fall!

Super Sonic said as he vanished in a snap. Super Shadow flew towards Nazo, whilst Super Sonic flew at Nazo from behind. Nazo opened his eyes as he released 2 beams of energy on either side of him, both beams striking into Super Sonic and Super Shadow, sending them both flying into rocks.

Super Shadow: You scum! You’re going down!

Super Shadow shouted as he charged at Nazo. Nazo vanished in a flash and then reappeared behind Super Shadow, kicking him in the back of the head, sending him flying towards Super Sonic. Super Shadow smashed into Super Sonic, sending them both through the huge slab of rock. Super Sonic and Super Shadow both lay on the ground as Nazo flew above them in the air.

Nazo: Like killing 2 birds with one stone!

Nazo said as he charged up a huge ball of Dark Chaos Energy.

Nazo: CHAOS SPHERE!!!!!!!!

Nazo cried, throwing the huge Chaos Sphere at Super Sonic and Super Shadow. Suddenly, Super Sonic’s eye opened and in a flash, he stood up and pushed his hands up, shouting out.


Super Sonic: CHAOS CONTROL!!


The huge ball of Chaos Energy slammed into Super Sonic, but Super Sonic was using Chaos Control like a huge shield, protected him and Super Shadow.

Super Sonic: Too bad it’s all over…For You!

Super Sonic yelled as he pulled back his hands back and charged up, then threw his arms forward, releasing a huge beam of Positive Chaos Energy at Nazo.

Nazo: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Nazo screamed as he flew backwards in the air and slammed into the ground, making a huge chasm.

As Nazo’s body lay in the chasm, Super Sonic and Super Shadow both stood at the edge of the chasm, looking down at Nazo.

Nazo: You can’t stop me! I will just regenerate and I’ll return more powerful then you could ever imagine!

Nazo said as he began to heal himself.

Super Sonic: Silver! Snap out of this! All you’re causing is destruction!

Nazo: I am not Silver. I AM NAZO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nazo cried as he released a huge ball of dark chaos energy at Super Sonic and Super Shadow

Super Sonic + Super Shadow: CHAOS SPHERE!!!

Super Sonic and Super Shadow yelled as they sent a ball of Chaos energy at Nazo. There Chaos Control stopped Nazo’s energy ball, and the Chaos Control ball hurtled straight towards Nazo.

Nazo: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Nazo yelled as in a bright flash of light, he was gone, as well as the Chaos Emeralds and the Dark Emerald. Super Sonic and Super Shadow flew over to Tails and Knuckles. Super Sonic placed his arms on Tail’s chest as he released some Positive Chaos Energy into Tail’s body.

Tails opened his eyes.

Tails: Sonic?!

Tails said, weakly as Super Sonic reverted back to normal Sonic and hugged his best friend. Shadow revived Knuckles and then reverted back to normal Shadow.

Shadow: Looks like I was here to save you after all

Shadow smiled to Sonic as Sonic helped Tails back on his feet.

Sonic: Alright! We beat him!

Tails: Sonic!!

Tails shouted and pointed at the lifeless body of Blaze. They all ran over to Blaze’s side as Sonic knelt down, placing her head on his knees.

Sonic: Blaze?

Sonic said, trying to get a response from her. Slowly, she opened her eyes.

Blaze: Sonic, tell Silver that I…that I….

Blaze said, trying to speak.

Sonic: What Blaze?

Blaze: Tell Silver, that I love him.

Blaze said as slowly her eyes shut and her head turned from face up, to the side.

Knuckles: Here Sonic

Knuckles said, giving him a shard of the Master Emerald.

Sonic: Don’t worry Blaze, I will

Sonic said, as he used his Chaos Power and absorbed all of Blazes energy into the shard, making the body of Blaze disappear.

LATER ON A CLIFF OVER LOOKING THE SEA IN WAVE OCEAN…

Sonic, Shadow, Tails and Knuckles are watching the sun set

Sonic: Well, Eggman Nega and Nazo got away. Where they went is a total Mystery.

Tails: But look on the bright side Sonic, we won.

Tails said, sitting on a tree branch

Knuckles: Yeah, Tails is right! We won, so let’s relax

Shadow: Yeah, but for how long. Sonic, you heard what Nazo said, he’ll be back and he’ll be more powerful then ever before, and today we only just survived

Shadow said as he turned towards Sonic

Sonic: Well, he’ll be back and we’ll be ready!

Sonic said as he looked up into the sun set, which vanished over the New York Sky line.

END OF EPISODE 1

Ok, here, I'll be posting all the Episodes I write in the future!

Episode 1 Parts 1,2 and 3 are done, next onto Episode 2, featuring "The Metal Madness" who is, someone you should know if you have plays Sonic Heroes's ending.

Sparky
October 20th, 2007, 07:56 PM
And I have a friend that kind of reminds me of Shadow, even though he hates SEGA and has never heard of Shadow. Anyway, even though he's a...how can i say this....EMO, were still best friends and we talk and laugh together

~

I wasn't referring to their personalities.

Ziggy
October 20th, 2007, 08:01 PM
Please dude don't double post next time.
I'm just saving you from getting an infraction from Black Knight.

Black Knight
October 20th, 2007, 10:14 PM
I wasn't referring to their personalities.

True, cause you've constantly been refering to your oppinion.


Please dude don't double post next time.
I'm just saving you from getting an infraction from Black Knight.

The only reason for his 'double post' was because I merged two threads that he created, so, it's actually not a double post.

Thanks for the help Ziggy, but when he's needed to be told of I do so personally over MSN.

Ziggy
October 20th, 2007, 10:16 PM
Yeah I told him that, so he wont go through what I went through.
......So doing what he did is allowed?
I didn't know.

Black Knight
October 20th, 2007, 10:40 PM
You're not, I repeat, not allowed to double post, but he didn't double post as the only reason to why those two posts are after each other is because I merged this and another thread.
But to avoid future confusion and missunderstanding I'm gonna merge those two posts too...

I'll also add that the only time double posting is allowed is when a member is updating in his/her work. (Work including art, story, update in a character profile...Or an important message in an rp.)

Ziggy
October 20th, 2007, 10:43 PM
Ok I'm still confused but, I'm going to be smart and not Try it.
That's a non Noob response.

Black Knight
October 20th, 2007, 11:13 PM
You know what merge is, right?
It's when two things merge/come together to form a single object.
Like Metal Sonic merged with a heck of a load of metal and became Metal Overlord.

Ronic
October 21st, 2007, 06:10 AM
ok...thanks BK, anyway, what did you guys think of Part 3?

Ronic
October 21st, 2007, 02:09 PM
Okay guys, here's Episode 2 Part 1 of the Sonic:Rise of Nazo. ENJOY!!



Sonic: The Rise of Nazo

Episode 2: Phoenix from the Ashes (Part 1)


Voice: Sonic…………..Sonic…………Sonic

A voice cried out, as Sonic opens his eyes to find himself standing over a large crater, with an ice bridge hanging above him. As he looked down into the crater, with the lava bubbling and releasing steam, a figure started to emerge from the center of the lava.

Sonic: No! No! No! It can’t be!

Sonic yelled, as the figure walked over the lava, flames all over his body.

Voice: Sonic…..Sonic….Sonic……

The figure cried out, as it walked through a blast of steam, the blue robot stopped and pointed it’s long, metallic finger at Sonic.

Metal Sonic: Sonic…Soon, you will die!

The robot said, revealing himself to be Metal Sonic.


Suddenly, Metal Sonic’s arm flipped round, revealing a huge laser blaster. Metal pointed it at Sonic and charged the weapon. Sonic tried to turn to run, but something was stopping him. Sonic looked at his feet, which were being held by a light, blue ooze. Sonic turned his head round and there was Silver.

Sonic: Silver! Silver! Help me!

Silver: I am not Silver anymore Sonic

Sonic: What?! Silver!

Sonic cried as there was a bright flash. When Sonic turned back to Silver, it was not Silver anymore. Instead, a light blue Hedgehog was standing there, with his back to Sonic

Nazo: I am not Silver anymore, I AM NAZO!

The light blue hedgehog said as he turned round to reveal Nazo. Nazo started to charge up a Chaos Sphere at Sonic. Sonic tried to move but it was no use.

Nazo: CHAOS SPHERE!

Nazo cried firing his Chaos Sphere at Sonic and at the same time, Metal Sonic fired his cannon at Sonic. The 2 blasts flew towards Sonic, and just as they were about to hit, Sonic sat up in shock, underneath a tree.


(Opening Theme: All Hail Shadow by Crush 40)


He panted heavily and placed his hands on his head, wiping the sweat off his fore head.

Sonic: Man! What a nightmare! My 2 worst enemies fighting against me, and I couldn’t do anything to stop them. But there was something about that dream. It was like my dream I had yesterday. It felt so real.

Sonic said, looking at his hand, making it into a fist. He slammed his fists to the ground, bringing his legs back, and then pushing himself into the air, landing on his feet. He started to walk, his hands behind his head, looking down on the ground.

Sonic: But my dream yesterday was showing me what was going to happen in the future, does that mean the dream I just had is a “Vision” and maybe Metal is going to return?
Well, whatever it is, I’m pretty sure it’s nothing. I mean, like Metal is really gunna return. I finished him off for good when I first encountered him. But then again, he did return and became Metal Overlord, as he tried to destroy us all. But me, Tails and Knuckles stopped him using the power of teamwork. But if he does return, were gunna need more then teamwork to take on both Metal and Nazo.

Sonic looked up at the road ahead of him.

Sonic: Man! I gotta get this outa my head. Maybe a good run would calm me down.

Sonic said, as he removed his hands from behind his head to his sides, and started to slowly jog, then run, then sprint off into the distance.

MEANWHILE…

On Eggman Nega’s flying battleship, the doctor was in the Mechanic Floor, where his robots are fixed. The doctor was working on the table, fixing something. Sparks flew everywhere as the doctor welded something onto the machine he was working on. The door to the room slid open, as Nazo walked in.

Nazo: What is that piece of junk?

Nazo said, crossing his arms as he looked at the machine on the table. The doctor took off his goggles and turned off the machine he was using to fix the machine.

Nega: This is not a piece of junk?!?!?! This is a creation by the Eggman of this world that almost killed Sonic The Hedgehog, which is more I can say for you.

Nazo: I could have beaten him, if it wasn’t for that Shadow and those blasted Chaos Emeralds allowing them to become their super forms.

Nega: Yes, it is true that you have not learned the Chaos Power to be able to absorb the power from the Emeralds and become your Super Form.

Nazo: I do not see why I can’t use it. I am the Ultimate Being; there is nothing I can’t do.

Nega: The prophecy says that with every Chaos Emerald we gather, you will learn new Chaos powers, which will eventually help us when Doomsday comes.
And there is something the Ultimate Being cannot do, and that is destroying the Hedgehogs. This is why I am working on this machine. Where you have failed, he will succeed.

Nega said, as he continued working on the robot. Nazo’s fist shook with rage. Suddenly, Nazo charged up a Chaos Sphere, but as he was just about to launch it, Nega pulled out a strange, multi-colored Chaos Emerald, which started to glow and shoot out rays of light. Nazo suddenly stopped his attack and fell to the floor, holding his stomach in pain.
Nazo: AHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHH!

Nazo cried out in pain, as he kneeled on the ground, holding his stomach.

Nega: You may be powerful Nazo, but even powerful beings have weaknesses. Like for example, your weakness is this Light Emerald I found in an ancient ruin in my time period. I knew what I was doing when I decided to awake you. I know your strengths and weaknesses. This is why I carry this Light Emerald, which is made of all the Pure Chaos energy which has been used by the Hedgehogs in the past, for my protection, just in case you decide you have had enough of me.

Nazo: AHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHHHHHH! NO-ONE CAN CONTROL ME! NO-ONE CAN!

Nazo screamed out as the pain grew more intense.

Nega: Yet, you’re being controlled by me using this Light Emerald. How doe’s it feel, Ultimate Being, to be controlled by someone less more of a being than you?

Nazo: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YOU OLD FOOL!

Nazo said, but then, something strange happened to Nazo. Suddenly, parts of his skin started to come off, showing parts of Silver’s body.

Nega: Now who is your master?

Nega said, watching Nazo squirm on the ground.

Nazo: NO-ONE IS MY MASTER! AHHH! NO-ONE! AHHHHHHHHH!

Nazo cried out, as Nega walked towards Nazo, making the pain Nazo was experiencing more painful, which also made more of his skin to come off.

Nega: WHO IS YOUR MASTER?!?!?!

Nazo: YOU ARE MY MASTER! AHHHHHHHH! YOU ARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nazo screamed as Nega walked away and put the Emerald away.

Nega: Good

Nega grinned as he continued to work on the robot. Nazo leaned up against the wall, absorbing back all pieces of goo that had come off him.

Computer Voice: Dr Eggman Nega sir. Chaos Emerald has been detected.

Nega: Where?

Computer: In the North Pole of this world.

Nega: What are you waiting for?! Set a course for the North Pole immediately!

Computer: As you wish sir.

Nega: Soon my friend, we will have our revenge on that Blue Menace once and for all. MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Nega laughed, as the robots eyes began to glow a bright red as Nega’s laugh echoed through the decks of the ship.



END OF PART 1

Black Knight
October 21st, 2007, 04:52 PM
Hmmmm, it's getting quite interesting now actually...You've got me wondering what's gonna happen next! Thats an achivement!

Ronic
October 22nd, 2007, 07:21 AM
LOL All in good time, soon it will be revealed!

Ronic
October 22nd, 2007, 03:17 PM
Ok guys! I know how much you love my fan fics so here's Episode 2 Part 2!

ENJOY!


Sonic: The Rise of Nazo



Episode 2: Phoenix from the Ashes (Part 2)


In a vast, sandy canyon, Sonic stands on a cliff edge, looking out onto the slopes, loops and rocks of the canyon floor.

Sonic: Breathe that fresh air

Sonic said, taking a deep breath in through the nose

Sonic: That’s what I love about being a free Hedgehog. The fresh air, always finding new places I haven’t been. All well, better keep going.

Sonic said, taking a quick running stance, then running with all his might forward, to the edge of the cliff, then at the last moment as his leg is just about to go over the edge, he pushes both legs to the ground and springing up into the air. As Sonic soared upwards and forwards through the air, he quickly started to fall. He suddenly span into his Spin Ball as he touched the side of the rock, and as he traveled down it, he came to a rock which looked like a ramp. Sonic soared back into the air, thanks to his speed in his Spin Ball and the ramp. He then came back down, landing on a rock, bouncing off it, onto another rock, then another, then another, until finally landing back onto the ground and running into a sprint. As Sonic ran over the earth, a huge dust cloud appeared behind him.

Tails: Sonic!

A voice cried out from the air, as Sonic flipped in the air, turning round, landed and ran fast backwards as a plane soared down and flew close to the ground next to him.

Sonic: Tails, what’s up?

Tails: I’ve been looking ages for you! My scanners back at my lab have detected a Chaos Emerald.

Sonic: Where is it?

Tails: It’s in the North Pole.

Sonic: No way!

Sonic said, his eyes widened and looked blankly into the canyon behind him.

Tails: What’s the matter Sonic?

Sonic: It’s just like my dream.

Tails: Another one?

Sonic: Yeah

Tails: Meet me at my lab. We’ll talk there.

Tails said, as he pulled the driving stick up and to the left, making the Tornado do a barrel roll to the left and up into the air. Then pressing a button on the control panel, Tails activated the Sonic Drive engine, making the planes propellers stop for a split second, then fold into the plane, allowing the Sonic Drive Engine to activate, as 2 rocket engines appeared under the plane and powering the plane forward into the air.
Sonic flipped round again, facing forward, pushing himself to go faster as his legs became a blur, then a Sonic boom was made as Sonic rocketed off into the distance, following the Tornado’s smoke trail.

AT TAILS’S LAB...

Tails: So what’s up? You have another dream?

Sonic: Yeah. It was weird, it was like the dream I had yesterday night. It involved Nazo and someone else…
Tails: Who? Nazo and who?

Sonic: Metal Sonic

Tails: No way?!?! But didn’t we defeat him as Metal Overlord?!

Sonic: We did, but he must have survived somehow. Remember, he had absorbed a lot of Chaos Energy to become Metal Overlord, and enough of it could make you invincible.

Tails: So, what happened during your dream?

Sonic: I was standing on the edge of crater in the North Pole, with the Ice Bridge holding the continents together. It was the same place where we first fought Metal Sonic. In the crater, there was Metal, walking from the center of the lava. He changed his arm into a cannon. I tried to run, but I couldn’t. I was being held down by a blue ooze. I turned round and there was Silver, but then it wasn’t Silver, but Nazo. He started to charge up a Chaos Sphere. I tried and tried to run, but it was no use. They both fired, but before they could hit me, I woke up.

Tails: Man there has been a lot for weird stuff going on recently. First, you had that weird dream. Then Silver appeared, then the death of Blaze, then the appearance of Nazo and now this.

Sonic: Tails, I have been thinking. Maybe, my dreams aren’t just dreams. Maybe they are visions about what is going to happen.

Tails: Now that you come to mention it, it might possibly be true. Your first dream before Nazo arrived was a dream about the arrival of Nazo, so that dream was a vision trying to warn you about Nazo. So that must mean…

Tails said, as his tone of voice became less cheerful.

Sonic: Yeah. That must mean Metal is gunna come back too and Nazo will be with him.

Tails: Ahhh man. Were gunna have are work cut out for us today

Sonic: Hey! Cheer up! We beat that bucket of bolts last time, and will beat Nazo. So double the enemy, means double the butt kicking were gunna give them!

Tails: Yeah! I better start up the Tornado and contact Shadow, because were gunna need some help with this one.

Sonic: Yeah, that’s the spirit Tails!

Sonic said, as Tails ran off to the launch bay of the Tornado and to his Computer lab.


LATER…

As Sonic and Tails flew over the Ice Caps of the North Pole, a heavy snow storm picked up, but still flying, Tails and Sonic kept following the radiation from the Emerald.

Sonic: Tails! I hate to be a pain but, ARE WE THERE YET?!

Sonic screamed, standing on the front of the Tornado, snow hitting him in the face, snow on his shoulders and legs with icicles growing on his spines.

Tails: Were almost there, I think…

Tails said, tapping the screen with showed the direction of the radiation from the Emerald.

Sonic: WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU THINK?!?!

Tails: This snow storm is blocking all my sensors, I don’t even know if were above water or a huge glacier!

Sonic: Well, were gunna find out soon enough!

Tails: What do you mean soon enou…AHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Tails screamed, as a huge laser blast took apart the right wing.

Tails: HOLD ON SONIC!

Sonic: WHAT DO YOU THINK I’VE BEEN DOING!!!

Sonic screamed as the Tornado slowly started to spiral out of control down towards the ground.

Sonic and Tails: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

They both screamed as the plane hit the ground.


Sonic slowly started to open his eyes, finding himself face down in the snow. Sonic got up and looked around, with the blizzard still continuing.

Sonic: Tails! Tails!

Sonic shouted, calling out to see if his friend would reply. As Sonic tried to look through the dense blizzard, he soon saw the Tornado, in a huge wreckage, with flames everywhere.

Sonic: TAILS?!?!

Sonic screamed, running over to the wreckage of the Tornado. Jumping over the rings of flames, Sonic looked desperately for Tails among the wreckage.

Sonic: TAILS! TAILS, WHERE ARE YOU!!

Sonic shouted, continuing to look among the debris of the Tornado.

Sonic: TAILS! TA…OOOFF!

Sonic’s shouting was cut short, as a red, metal foot smashed into his face, sending him tumbling back wards into the snow. Sonic pulled his face out of the snow and turned to see who his attacker was.

Sonic: YOU?!

Sonic said, standing up, watching as his attacker walked straight through the flames, revealing himself to be Metal Sonic.
Metal Sonic: This time, you cannot escape Hedgehog!

Metal said, charging up again for another laser blast from his blaster. But as Sonic changed to his fighting position, a Chaos Sphere appeared from nowhere, slamming into the ground just to the side of Sonic, sending him hurtling through the air, slamming into the tail of the Tornado, then Sonic fell onto the ground, with metal falling onto his head. As Sonic lifted his head, through the flames walked Nazo.

Sonic: Where’s Tails?

Nazo: He’s perfectly safe, but your not!

Nazo said, using his powers, to lift Sonic off the ground, and held him against the side of Tornado. Sonic squirmed to break free, but Nazo’s power was too much.

Nazo: If you would do the honors Metal.

Nazo said, as Metal aimed his blaster at Sonic and charged up to fire.

Nazo: Goodbye, Sonic The Hedgehog! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Nazo evilly laughed, as Metal’s gun kept charging and charging.


IS THIS THE END OF SONIC THE HEDGEHOG?



FIND OUT IN THE NEXT PART OF


SONIC: THE RISE OF NAZO



END OF PART 2

Black Knight
October 22nd, 2007, 03:43 PM
I really do wonder how he'll get out of this one....I have a couple of ideas, but I'm not gonna voice them incase one of them is correct. xD

Ronic
November 10th, 2007, 07:21 AM
here it is guys, Episode 2 Part 3 of the Rise of Nazo! Enjoy!


Sonic: Rise of Nazo
Episode 2: Phoenix from the Ashes (Part 3)


Nazo: Goodbye, Sonic The Hedgehog! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Nazo evilly laughed, as Metal’s gun kept charging and charging. Suddenly, as Metal was just about to fire…

Voice: Hold on Sonic!

A voice cried out, as a black Hedgehog flew in out of no-where, doing a flying kick into Metal, making him spin, firing his laser into Nazo, sending Nazo flying through the air and falling, sliding through the snow as he came to a stop. Rebounding off Metal, doing a back flip in mid air, then the black Hedgehog sent Metal flying into the air.

Black Hedgehog: CHAOS SPEAR!

The black Hedgehog cried out, sending a bolt of Chaos energy up at Metal, hitting him, causing an explosion as the black Hedgehog landed back on the ground.

Sonic: Ahhrgh!

Sonic cried out in pain, as Nazo’s grip loosened as Sonic fell to the ground, landing in a kneeling position. Soon the blizzard died down.

Sonic: Shadow!

Sonic said, standing up, next to the Black Hedgehog.

Shadow: Look like I got here just in time

Sonic: You can say that again

Sonic said, as both Nazo and Metal stood back up.
Nazo: Shadow and Sonic! Double the pride, double the fall!

Sonic: So, which one do you want…?

Shadow: I’ll take Nazo, you take Metal

Shadow said, running off towards Nazo.

Sonic: Fine, give me the hard one

Sonic said, looking towards Metal.

Metal: After this, their shall only be one Sonic

Sonic: Yeah, and that will be yours truly!

Sonic said, as Metal started to charge his Sonic Drive Engine. Sonic then span into his Spin Ball, and began to charge up, as a huge smoke cloud formed behind him. Then at the same time, they both sped towards each other. They both went up an ice ramp and flew towards each other, but then as Sonic and Metal were just about to hit, Sonic came out of his Spin Ball, and smashed his feet into Metal, sending him flying backwards. But Metal regained control quickly, and went back towards Sonic, doing a head butt into Sonic, sending him flying through the air, then along the ice. Sonic stood back up, but then, was picked up by Metal at amazing speed as Metal rocketed into Sonic’s chest, picking him, then slamming him into a ice wall. Metal did a loop, flipped his arm round into his machine gun. Metal hovered in the air, and started to fire his machine gun. Sonic was spread out against the ice, as he opened his eyes, he saw Metal’s bullets coming straight at him, he stretched his arms up, rotated his wrists round and grabbed hold of the ice. He pulled himself up, flipped his body round so his feet were against the wall, he then released his grip on the wall and pushed off, flying towards Metal. Sonic flew through the air, pulled his arm back, and punched Metal. Then quickly, Sonic did a punch again and again, then did 2 spinning kicks then a back kick, sending Metal even higher. Sonic then landed, span into his Spin Ball, and rocketed into the air, after Metal.

Meanwhile, Shadow was fighting Nazo. Shadow ran at Nazo, pulling back his fist, and then throwing it forward. But Nazo was too quick and moved to the side, dodging Shadow’s attack, then Nazo did a kick into the back of Shadow, sending him forward.

Nazo: CHAOS TORRENT!

Nazo cried, releasing Chaos Spear after Chaos Spear at Shadow, hitting Shadow in the back.
Shadow: ARRGH!

Shadow cried as the Chaos Spears slammed into his back. Shadow smashed into a wall, creating a huge indent in the ice wall.

Nazo: CHAOS……SPHERE!

Nazo cried, charging up a huge Chaos Sphere and then released it at Shadow.

Shadow: CHAOS….CONTROL!

Shadow said, disappearing in a flash, just before the Chaos Sphere hit. Shadow then reappeared behind Nazo.

Shadow: How do you like getting hit in the back…CHAOS SPEAR!

Shadow, said releasing a close range Chaos Spear into the back of Nazo, causing a small explosion, sending Nazo flying to the floor, and Shadow backwards, doing a backward summersault, landing on the ground. Nazo stood back up and ran towards Shadow, with Shadow running towards Nazo as well.

Shadow + Nazo: CHAOS…CONTROL!!!!

The 2 screamed as they ran at each other, then both vanished. Sounds of kicks and punches could be heard, but both Shadow and Nazo were moving too fast for anyone to see. Suddenly, out of no-where came Shadow, falling to the ground, then going into his Spin Ball, and rocketing back toward Nazo, hitting him in the chest, doing multiple damage as his spines slashed Nazo’s chest, then sending him flying into the air.

Shadow: Sonic, heads up!

Shadow shouted as Sonic still rocketed through the air after Metal. He appeared above Metal, then, putting his fists together, slamming then into Metal, sending him flying down, into the path of Nazo flying up. The 2 hit each other, and both flew down back to the ground, smashing into the ground and creating a huge crater. As the 2 way in the crater, Sonic and Shadow appeared above them.

Sonic: Woo! That was sweet!

Shadow: It was easy, way too easy…..

Sonic: What do you mean Shadow?
Shadow: Like we have just fallen for a tra…

Tails: SONIC!!!

Shadow was cut off, as the voice of Tails screamed out.

Sonic: Tails!

Sonic cried out, as Eggman Nega’s ship became visible as the blizzard disappeared. One of Eggman Nega’s robots was holding Tails by the neck, with Eggman Nega next to the robot.

Sonic: Let him go Nega! He’s nothing to do with this!

Sonic cried up to Nega.

Nega: On the contrary, he is to do with this. As he is the only thing you would stop fighting for.

Shadow: You can make Sonic stop, but not me!

Shadow said, as he charged up a Chaos Spear.

Nega: Ah ah ahhhh!

Nega said, shaking his finger, as the robot’s grip on Tail’s neck tightened.

Tails: AHHHHHHH!

Tails screamed out in pain

Sonic: Shadow stop!

Sonic said, as Shadow powered down the Chaos Spear.

Nazo: Look at the great, Ultimate Life Form now, reduced to listening to his rival to stop hurting his friend.

Nazo said, as both he and Metal walked out the crater, with Nazo holding the Chaos Emerald, which happened to be located under the snow, where Nazo and Metal had crashed.

Nazo: You have the honor, my master, of destroying these 2

Nazo said, bowing to Nega.
Nega: It’s good to know you have found your place Nazo, so you can have the honor of destroying them.

Nazo: Thank you master, it would be my duty to serve you…

Nazo sniggered, as he charged up a Chaos Sphere, aiming at Sonic and Shadow.

Sonic: This isn’t good!

Sonic said, looking back and forth from Nega and Nazo.

Shadow: We could still stop Nazo and Nega, but that would mean losing…

Sonic: No, there has to be another way!

Suddenly, the ground started to shake, as a surge of Chaos Energy started to occur in one place as Chaos energy bolts started to fly everywhere.

Sonic: What’s going on?!

Shadow: Sonic look!!

Shadow pointed up at the surge of energy as a portal appeared, as through the portal, came Angel Island, with Knuckles standing on the edge.

Sonic: Knuckles?!?!?!?!

Knuckles: Super Forms now, ask questions later!

Knuckles said, as both Sonic and Shadow started to concentrate their Chaos powers as the Master Emerald on the shrine started to glow, as both Sonic and Shadow lifted off the ground. In a bright flash, Sonic and Shadow both turned into their Super Forms, Super Sonic and Super Shadow. Suddenly, both Super Sonic and Super Shadow disappeared, as Super Shadow reappeared behind Nazo, kicking him, sending his Chaos Sphere shooting upwards, going through and out the other side of Nega’s ship. Smoke poured out, as the ship started to fall to the earth.

Nega: Curse you Hedgehogs!

Nega said, as Super Sonic reappeared behind the robot holding Tails, and punched it in the back, going right through, the robot’s grip loosened, as Tails fell to the earth, but Super Sonic flew round and caught him.

Nega: CURSE YOU HEDGEHOGS!
Nazo: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Nega cried out, as the front of the ship hit into Nazo and Metal and exploded.

On a hill near by, Super Sonic and Super Shadow reappeared with Tails, and stood, watching the burning wreckage.

Tails: The emerald?!

Tails said, as he looked at Shadow and Sonic, who both returned to their normal forms, with Shadow holding the Chaos Emerald.

Sonic: You okay Tails?

Tails: I am fine, but thanks anyway, Sonic and Shadow.

Sonic: Hey! We wouldn’t be able to save you it weren’t for Knuckles

Knuckles: Speak of the devil!

Tails: Knuckles!

Tails said, as Knuckles flew down and stood to the side of Sonic and Shadow.

Sonic: That was sweet!

Sonic said, as he and Knuckles did a respect with each other.

Sonic: How did you do that?

Knuckles: You and Shadow aren’t the only ones who can use Chaos Powers. Being the guardian, I can use my Chaos Powers only when it’s urgent. One of my powers is that I can use the Master Emerald to zoom in on Chaos Emerald locations, the one I found was where you guys were fighting Nazo and Metal Sonic. Another one of my powers thaist I could use the Master Emerald to activate Chaos Control and teleport the whole island where I wanted it to go

Shadow: Amazing! I never knew the Master Emerald had that much power to teleport a whole island

Sonic: Let’s get out of here anyway; we don’t want to stay around when Nazo wakes up!
Sonic said, as Shadow activated Chaos Control, teleporting them onto Angel Island and Knuckles activated the Island’s Chaos Control and teleported back to New York Bay.

Beneath the rubble, a flash of light radiated from it. Soon, Chaos Energy bolts started to shoot out of the rubble.

Nazo: MUHAHAHAHAHAHA! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Nazo laughed as suddenly, all the rubble from the ship flew into the air, as a burst of light went into the air. As the light disappeared, Nazo was hovering in midair, with little bolts of lightning going round his body. Nazo stood back on the ground, as he helped Nega back to his feet.

Nega: It seems that the appearance of the Master Emerald has allowed you to unlock more of your Chaos Powers

Nazo: I can feel the Master Emerald’s power surge through me, but it is not a strong as I felt it when it appeared through Chaos Control

Nazo said as Nega stood up on his own.

Nega: It seems, that with every day that you’re on this earth, your power is becoming stronger, but you can only unlock more power when you’re in range of the Master Emerald’s Chaos Energy radiation. We will do tests at my lab to see what new power’s you do have but first…

Nega stopped talking as he turned towards the wreckage of Metal Sonic.

Nega: We must start to repair Metal and do a little “breaking in.”


WHAT DOES NEGA MEAN BY “BREAKING IN”?



AND WHAT WILL HE BE BREAKING INTO?



FIND OUT, ONLY ON THE NEXT EPIOSDE OF



SONIC: RISE OF NAZO



END OF EPISODE 2