The Poetry Corner

[Black Knight]

Yersh people, this is where I'll keep my trash!
Like my latest master piece! Inspired by the shout box!


Run away, over the hills
This is a battle of wills
And with a female
And a male
There's no doubt
Who'll fail
Cause we women are awesome
And kick your bums
Sorry, the battle is over
My good chums
Cause we woman are awesome
And beat you in all
Sorry to break it to ya
Now start to crawl! >3

Mwehehehe...yup xD
I'll get some serious stuff onto here later, if I find that theres actually some use in doing so.

[Bazooka the Ferret]

Woman? Awesome. Thats kinda like the Boys vs. Girls thing. What was it called again? I forget.

[AnnZie]

OMG.. we should have a poetry sharing topic XD... I do dark depressing poetry XD...

[Black Knight]

Well, it is my Poetry Corner, for everyone to join <D

[AnnZie]

you serious? You mean I can post my own poetry up as well?

[Black Knight]

Yeah, of course it is! xD
I'd be kinda boring to post all on my own and besides, we need somewhere for the poetry people to gather their creativity. =O

I'm gonna sticky this thread now! <3

[AnnZie]

Okay... XD... I wrote this poem dedicated to one of the rps I did with my bf, where Annie's bf dies saving her. It's kinda from Annie's point of view.
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Flashback

Flashback"Don't worry, I'll protect you."
How can I protect you in return?

"Don't die on me okay?"
Now your voice echos through the cold, cruel air

It was so strange
how you were suddenly there,
always beside me,
protecting me, guarding my life

Yet
It is so painful
without you
there to hold me

"I don't deserve you."
Why wouldn't you? You were everything I wanted.

I miss your voice guiding me
through the darkness.
Your love for me is a heater
warming me in the cold, harsh winter.

Now there is nothing,
but the tree we use to sit by.
Now there is nothing,
but echos of your voice.

Now there is nothing.
Nothing but flashbacks of you...

[Black Knight]

I lift my top hat for that is one touching poem!
Seriously, the flow, the feelings, EVERYTHING....It's just so awesome.
Good job!

[AnnZie]

Thankyou =3 *bows*

[Ronic]

hey! good work BK!

can you do a poem for me, which I can used in my fan fic, Sonic: Rise of Nazo?

That would be awesome!

[Black Knight]

Sure I could give it a shot. You can post here or send a PM to be about the details(if you don't want everyone to see it before it's posted in your fan fic).

[Ronic]

i basically want it to be like Tikals little thing about Chaos in Sonic Adventure, but I want you to say about Nazo

[Black Knight]

Tikal's little thing about Chaos?
But you want it to be about Nazo?

[Ronic]

yh i want it to be about Nazo, which sounds a bit like Tikal's little speech

[Black Knight]

Depends on what little speech you talk about.

[Ronic]

you know:

"Chaos is Power" "The Controller of Chaos is the one that Unifies the Chaos"

like that

[AnnZie]

okay... here's another one of mine. This one is based on one of my rps as well. It involves Shackel's character Darkfire. Where Annie has an affair with Darkfire, but Annie didn't mean for that to happen. Annie's got this thing about catnip and it makes her all hyper and you can even force her to do things you want her to do for the sake of getting the catnip. That's what happened there. Well her boyfriend found out and in despair he turned evil. and Annie remembered her vow to herself. If she cheated on her boyfriend, she will kill herself, that's what she actually did, where she stabbed herself with her own sword and pinned herself at the bottom of a lake.

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Final Wish

I’ve always thought that love was for eternity,
But as I stood here bleeding, dying,
I’ve realized that you may be lying.
And all I can feel is the pain that’s rising.

The tears that resulted from my crying
Spoke many lies and betrayals we’ve been facing.
I then think back of the things we did.
Was everything necessary?

That night, I didn’t know what I was thinking
And now as I lie at the bottom of the lake.
Memories come shooting back at me,
The good and the bad times I miss them all.

Everyone has a wish
Everyone has a final wish
And as I lie at the bottom of this endless dark pit,
I realized that my final wish
Was for you to:

FORGIVE ME.
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[Kursed]

awh, Annzie thats awsome. You do great poems.

[Ziggy]

Now this is a topic I can relate to.

[AnnZie]

awh, Annzie thats awsome. You do great poems.

Thanks ^^-

[Ronic]

woo! Annzie, that was beautiful - tear runs out of eye -

[Black Knight]

Absolutely beautiful Ann, it's a feast for the mind to read your poetry...Very emotional...

Edit: Oh yeah, will post some poems later...it's gonna be something of an onslaught of them, so, be prepared XD

I'm bored so the cavalry has now arrived!!!



A Man

Verse 1

Once upon a time we were
Best friends, side by side
Nothing could stop us
Not even times flowing tide

Or so I thought, back then
You didn't think the same
One whim and you stopped
You had nothing more to gain

Bridge

You saw my tears flowing, yet you walked away
To later come back and hoping you could stay

Chorus

A man chooses, a slave obeys
You walked away where a best friend stays
A man chooses, a coward flees
If she didnt't like it you were on your knees

Verse 2

Did I matter anymore?
You never told me that
Said I was your best friend
Yet here I am sat

When you were upset again
You'd come back to me
I'd sit and listen to you
I curse that I couldn't see

Bridge

You saw my tears flowing, yet you walked away
To later come back and hoping you could stay

Chorus

A man chooses, a slave obeys
You walked away where a best friend stays
A man chooses, a coward flees
If she didnt't like it you were on your knees

Stick

Why didn't I see it before?
I was always dropping everything for you
Thinking I could do more
Why did you turn away?
I don't need an answer, I don't wanna know
Because you didn't stay

Cause no matter what happens one fact stands true
And that fact is that you! You!

Bridge

YOU! saw my tears flowing, yet you walked away
To later come back and hope you could stay

Chorus

But a man chooses and a slave obeys
You walked away where a best friend stays
Its a man that chooses and a coward that flees
But if she didnt't like it you were on your knees

Ending

You were on your knees!
You walked away!
You're the coward that flees!
And the slave that obeys!
You are! You were! You are! You were!
NOT A MAN!

Wished He Was Blind...

Intro:

Stop now and listen
Cause I got a word or two
Shut up and listen
Cause I gotta tell you

Thou shalt not kill
Thou shalt not slay
To take someones life
Is never okay
Thou shalt not rob
Thou shalt not steal
Have it done to you
See how it feel
Thou shalt not hurt
Thou shalt not taunt
It'll come back
It's you it'll haunt

Verse 1:

Religion and atheist
They all walk our green earth
We're all given a choice
It's given by birth

Don't force religion
Let the children run free
They wanna be young
They shouldn't have to see

Bridge 1:

They shouldn't have to see
Our holy wars made of fake
They shouldn't have to see
All the lives that we take

Chorus:

There is no such thing as holy wars
It's not holy to slay mankind
If there is a God beyond the stars
I bet he wished he was blind

Verse 2:

So many different religions
Worship one God different ways
Using that as an excuse
When they start to slay

Don't hurt, don't kill
Religion preaches love
I don't think God wants to see
Looking down from above

Bridge 2:

He shouldn't have to see
Our holy wars made of fake
He shouldn't have to see
All the lives that we take

Chorus:

There is no such thing as holy wars
It's not holy to slay mankind
If there is a God beyond the stars
I bet he wished he was blind

Ending:

Wished he was blind
Wished we were kind
Wished we would find
Love again, find love again
Watching us lie
Watching us cry
Watching us die
Watching us fight without gain
I bet he wished he was blind...


A character of mine called Lucifer who's a General of the Dark Angels in Heaven falls in love with a mortal woman and as the believer in romance that he is he writes her a poem, which goes like this...


Why not be traditional as I start
In this little poem where I give my heart
To the most beautiful maid there is
To who's lips I long to kiss
Your eyes are like stars
And your smile like the sun
My heart is yerning
For you, who are the one
But your beauty can't compare
To that of your laughters tone
It's the single most wonderful thing
Which I think of it when I'm alone
I think of the warmth you carry
And all the men that always stare
And know that I smile
When I know your heart lies here
With this foolish General
When you could get a King
And with you I realise
That love's a funny thing
You're no Godess, Princess
Lady and or a Queen
But to me you are
The most glorious thing I've seen
To me you are holy
And I am now a rich man
I want to be your crying shoulder
And the one who holds your hand
Let me lead you through tough times
And be your steady light
For everytime I cross blade
It's for you I fight
I love you so much my darling
My heart it over heats
Please rest against my chest
And fall asleep to it's beats....



Verse 1

When you walk past that single bench in the park
Do you see me? Dressed black and stark...
When you walk past that lonely corner in school
Do you notice me? Geeky and uncool...

Chorus

Or am I the shadow you walk past?
Never know the answer, always finish last
Am I just the loser? The one no one picks?
Nothing compared to the jocks and the pricks?

Verse 2

When you walk past the dark back door
Do you spot me lying on the floor?
When you walk past the selcuded room
Can you hear me wishing the world doom?

Chorus

Or am I the shadow you walk past?
Never know the answer, always finish last
Am I just the loser? The one no one picks?
Nothing compared to the jocks and the pricks?

Stick

When you walk past all those dark places
And see them standing above me, way high
Don't you ever see me lying there?
Don't you ever see how I cry?

Am I really just a shadow?
That no one sees except they?
The ones that hurt me do bad...
Or will I finally hear you say...
'Back off and leave him alone!'
And have me stare at you in awe
For you'll really be my hero
When it's me you save...

Verse 3

Or will you when you pass these lonely places
Not notice that I'm not among the faces
Would you realise I'm no longer around?
When I'm six feet below the ground...


I've been together with my fiance for 3 years now and through out this time a poem or two have popped up...One of these poems is this one...

I may not always show it
But you mean so much to me
If only words could explain
Or a picture could make you see

You’ve always been there
been my cliff in the stormy night
When darkness surrounds me
You come again with the light

How can you always stand?
Always so strong, brave and tall
How do you do it, my love?
Cause you never ever fall.

You’re the steadiest rock
That I could ever hope to meet
You pulled me up from the floor
And onto my feet

When something bad happens
You stand in the way
You make me feel safe
If I’m a boat you’re my bay

So please, its not much
But I wrote this for you
So I can tell with heart and rhyme
That I love you too…

[AnnZie]

woo! Annzie, that was beautiful - tear runs out of eye -

awww... thanks so much

Absolutely beautiful Ann, it's a feast for the mind to read your poetry...Very emotional...


^^ ; thanks... I tend to write poems better when I'm sad. XD I really like those ones you posted up there =3. They were all written very well. The one about the friend is really good.

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I wrote this for my Boyfriend, he liked it a lot.

What is love?

What is love?
Is it something precious?
Is it a present?
Can you wish for it?
No.
Love is something valuable,
Love can only be once,
Love last for a lifetime.

Sometimes you just don’t realize,
How important someone is to you
Until it’s too late.
Love is mysterious, Love is strange,
Love is stressful.
Love is everything.


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The next poem, I wrote three years back. I had to write a poem in my english lesson... so... I came up with something like that...
~From someone else’s point of view~

Have you ever wondered what it is like watching someone being murdered?

well here’s your answer,

it is torture,

it is pain,

it will never go away,

you will remember everything,

but cannot forget it,

Trust me it will never go away.

I remember everything,

watching her bleed,

hearing her scream,

why didn’t I try and stop him?

why do I feel it’s my fault she’s dead?

I can’t help it,

that’s the way things are,

I feel useless,

I wish I did something,

I was simply too scared to,

Why do I feel sorry for someone I don’t know?

This pain will never go away.

[Black Knight]

The first one is very beautiful Ann...
And the second one is very deep, I really like how you made it...it's hard to put my finger on what I like, but I think it's how you manage to get the feelings of guilt and how the image is burned into his/her mind...

[Ronic]

well done guys! You guys are brilliant at poems. All I can do is limerics:

There was a young man from Shorne
Who liked to moe the lawn
He would get out his mower and cut the grass lower
Till of the grass was gone

:D

[Shotgun da ferret]

Beautiful poems are created by those with insane minds. Or that's what Zooks thinks. I think they are made from people who see the world through a different view. I suck with poems so I can't judge them. BUT I CAN GIVE MY OPINION: KEEP EM COMING!!!!

[AnnZie]

Beautiful poems are created by those with insane minds. Or that's what Zooks thinks. I think they are made from people who see the world through a different view. I suck with poems so I can't judge them. BUT I CAN GIVE MY OPINION: KEEP EM COMING!!!!

*Sighs* Oh Shotgun I wish it were that easy to write poems, but right now I need some inspiration! All my poems are so cruel XD... I need some happy ones... XD

[kakashi24]

i wanted to know if anyone can help me im new

[Ziggy]

Black Knight your poems.........They brought tears to my Eyes.....*wipes away a tear*

[Black Knight]

Awww, thank you Ziggy. That's so sweet. ^^

[Steel Valor]

You know whenever I see poems they're mostly a bunch of crap. But these, these ain't crap these are masterpieces. I wish I could say hurry up but I know it isn't that easy. The only thing I'm good at in poetry are haikus. But they don't make sense!

[Black Knight]

I've seen so many times, how 'feel the love' and things like that gets mocked.
And I begin to wonder, how long has those people's feelings been locked?
As there is nothing quite as wonderful as love and care
And seeing how people mock emotions and love just ain't fair.
You get beaten, you get laughed you get told you live in a dream.
But thats because you're the miserable ones, everything ain't want it seem. You're the ones that crying, its not really me.
As I dare to show my emotions I am free..

This is a random poem I wrote on the spot in an MSN conversation ones...I kinda like it...

[Sparky]

A lot of these poems apply to me. I love the ones that define love, too. This one, by AnnZie of course, I particularly liked:

What is love?
Is it something precious?
Is it a present?
Can you wish for it?
No.
Love is something valuable,
Love can only be once,
Love last for a lifetime.

Sometimes you just don’t realize,
How important someone is to you
Until it’s too late.
Love is mysterious, Love is strange,
Love is stressful.
Love is everything.

I think the only good poem I ever wrote was when I was a little kid and it was about a giant cinnamon bun.... o.o;;

[Day]

It needs poetry. Hate dead topics that are in plain sight.



I remember the day I met you.

We were children, sat next to eachother.
You were the first person to say hello.
I spoke to you, but I was very quiet.
My heart was still closed then.

I remember when we played together.

We sat on a hill, making daisy chains.
You tied one around my wrist,
You called it a friendship bracelet.
I tied one around your neck,
I called it a friendship necklace.
Then you hugged me.
It was brief, but something I'll never forget.

I remember when you left.

You were moving away.
You cried as I held you.
We were still only kids,
But we'd grown so much.
Though I wanted to cry, I couldn't.
Because I knew it wasn't over.
I told you that.
Said, "We'll see eachother again."
"Promise?"
Then I simled and kissed your cheek.
You told me you'd never forget that moment...

I remember when I finally saw you again.

You changed so much,
I didn't recognize you.
Then you kissed my cheek.
I held you so close, I didn't ever want to let go.
We were inseperable.
Where you went, I was there.
Where I roamed, you were beside me.
When you were sad, I was there to comfort you.
When I was feeling down, you were the one who made me smile.
I'll never forget that feeling...

I remember when you told me.

We were under the shade of an oak tree.
It was raining, but we were safe.
You were shivering.
I took off my coat, and wrapped it round your shoulders.
You were still shaking,
So I moved closer and held you.
It was then that you looked at me.
Something about you, I couldn't place it.

You kissed me.

I didn't know what to do.
My cheeks flushed red,
My heartbeat quickened.
I tried to think of a reason why you did it.
Then I looked at you.
I noticed something.
You weren't my friend anymore.

You were so much more.

I did the only thing I could do.
I kissed you back.
It wasn't anything special.
I held my lips softly to yours.
I didn't know how to respond.
When you pulled away, you looked up at me.
For a second, I felt fear.
But you climbed into my lap, and rested your head on my chest.
Then you spoke, whispered to me.
"I'll never forget this..."

I remember when you left again.

You were moving again.
And once again, you were crying.
Still I held you, through your tears.
It was raining again, and we were soaked through.
You raised your head, a tear rolling down.
I brushed it away with my thumb, and smiled.
The look you gave me was dubious.
"How can you still be smiling?"
I gave you a simple answer.
"Because you're my friend.
We're meant to be together again."

I don't think I'll ever forget that look on your face.

You cried harder than ever.
You begged not to go.
Beating your fist against my chest,
Because of what I said.
That we'd be together.
Then I did something.
I raised your head, and I kissed you.
You were so beautiful, I couldn't help it.
I don't know if you knew what I felt then.
But at least I gave you the hint.

I watched as you got in the car.
I almost forgot to give you something.
I rushed to the door, opening it and climbing inside.
Though I was soaked, the smile on your face said it all.
I reached into my pocket, and pulled out something.
Pulling out a small box, I handed it to you.
Feverishly, you opened it.

I'll never forget how you smiled.

You took out the locket I'd bought for you.
Reaching over, I opened it, and showed you the inscription...

"No matter what, we'll be Friends Forever."

It was a corny sentiment,
But you didn't care.
You told me it was the most wonderful thing in the world.
I placed the locket around your neck and fastened it.
You looked down at the locket, lost in thought.
I saw you look up again, then look around.
You were saying something, but the car had started.
I couldn't hear you.

Then you saw me.

Stood not ten feet away.
I was shivering.
I'd left the coat I'd worn the day we were under tree.
I placed it beside you as I got out.
The car started to move,
Your tears came back once more.
It was hard to make out,
But the way your eyes were shining,
It wasn't hard to see.

I watched as you left my life once more.
But I didn't cry.
Nor did I mourn.
Because I knew we'd meet again.
It's fate.
Then I remembered what I told you.

"Because you're my friend.
We're meant to be together again."

I don't know if you'd figured it out,
But I loved you.
I never told anyone, but it was plain to see.
And even if you didn't feel the same,
I was happy.
The locket's words had been engraved elsewhere...

"No matter what, we'll be Friend's Forever."

That tree is still one of my favourite places to go.
Just because of you.
My friend.
My world.
My love.

And it all started with one word.

"Hello..."



Wrote it ages ago. I miss her.

[Black Knight]

THAT is just beautiful Day...*wipes away a couple of tears* It's touching...

[Black Knight]

I felt like writing some poetry again, as Day's poem inspired me. =D
So I took part of an rp that I'm currently in and rewrote the whole event into a shortened poem version...

Walking up the staircase to see her there
Seeing the moonlight shine upon her hair
The ruby red colour, even so clear now
Even in the dark black room, I wonder how
Her deep brown eyes gaze through the glass
Seeing a star fall, calmly watching it pass

She sits on the windowsil, watching the night sky
Her arms around her legs and her gaze up high
She looks so perfect, sitting just that way
And I wish that's how she'll always stay

He walks up to the staircase then stands alone
I wonder if he wants company, or be on his own?
He's gazing out the window, with that serious face
That troubled look as if he doesn't know his place
That long white hair and pale moon skin
Piercing turquoise eyes and cloths as black as sin

He stands by the window, his hands behind his back
He gazes on the moon and follows it's track
He looks so perfect standing within my sight
And if he ever moved it just wouldn't feel right

We look out our seperate windows, look at the sky
Until he turns around and casually says 'Hi'
I look down from the stars and look at him instead
Smiling I reply and politely bow my head
He asks ”After a mission so well done..
Aren't you gonna party til the rise of the sun?”
My reply comes soft ”I'm not a fan of that
I enjoy the night more right where I'm sat”
”Thought I was the only one, so inresting reply
Cause I also like gazing at the night sky”
I smile in reply and I think he does too
I yawn, knowing what I have to do
I put my foot onto the floor and go to bed
Laying down I smile as I rest my head
”Sleep well” he says softly, still standing there
I fall asleep seeing the wind billow his hair

[Steel Valor]

Bravo Day! Bravo BK! You guys can so own Edgar Allen Poe.

EDIT: Ok maybe not own but him at least stay in his level.

[Black Knight]

Thank you Steel! *hugs* =3

[Sparky]

Bravo Day! Bravo BK! You guys can so own Edgar Allen Poe.

EDIT: Ok maybe not own but him at least stay in his level.

Agreed. ^^
Was it difficult to rhyme the words like that? Rhyming is always a trouble for me when I attempt.

[Black Knight]

It isn't any big problem for me
I've been writing since I was a kid, you see
I get the rhymes natrually, don't know how
As you can see I'm rhyming right now
Just practice really hard, everyday
I'm sure you're be able to rhyme this way
It's really nothing special, I really think
At least I know my poems doesn't stink
Sorry if I seem arrogant, I'm really not
But now I'll stop before I get shot ^^;

[Day]

Rhyming. Eh.

Seven days are in a week,
That's six degrees of separation.
Doesn't help when you're acting meek,
Won't rectify this situation.
We're stuck in a moment we can't reverse,
Continuing forward into disaster,
We've muddled by, but it's made things worse,
though we'd have done more damage by going faster.
So take my hand, I'll light your path,
together we'll take it on a chance, a bet,
Surviving through this aftermath,
we don't what's in store... not yet.

Fuck off, it's four thirty am. Rhyming is piss easy. If talentless rappers can make up words just so they can make money, you can string real ones together.

God. It's not a fucking talent, it doesn't make you special, and you're not gifted because you can put two like-sounding words together. Go write something that beats the living shit out of someone's psyche, that changes their life in such a profound way that you've irrevocably altered their path forever.

There's a fucking talent.

[Black Knight]

I'm pretty sure those talentless rappers actually get those 'songs' written for them....I can make up a gangster rap lyric. xD

I walk in through the door and fuck my ho
She moans so loud it sounds through the floo'
I pick up my gun, and shoot you in the head
Then go back to fuck my ho in my bed
I snort some crack, then smoke some weed
Then fill my fucking ho with my seed!


Niggah! Niggah! Niggah! Fucking ho!
Just watch her! Watch her go!

And I'm just gonna stop here before I hate myself more then I already do <3

[AnnZie]

nice poem there Black Knight. And now I bring a twisted poem that doesn't rhyme. This poem describes Flora.

Child from Hell

Have you heard of the child from Hell?
Her mother was a demon
And her father was a mortal.

Have you heard of the child from Hell?
Abandoned by her mother
Killed her father.

Have you heard of the child from Hell?
Prophesied to overpower her mother one day
Prophesied to be a powerful ruler one day

Have you heard of the child from Hell?
The half demon child
Who went to school everyday

Have you ever heard of the child from Hell?
There was a massacre at school
No one would believe THAT A CHILD

So SWEET – so CUTE.
Was the culprit to the whole scheme.
But – she got away with MURDER.

Have you heard of the child from Hell?
Her cat plush is her treasure
Her companion – a present from her aunt.

Was sweet – was cute
But dangerous if you anger her
Bares the mark that the prophecies prophesied

Have ever heard of the child from Hell?
You better watch what you say
Her next victim could be YOU.

[Black Knight]

I sure wouldn't mind trying to make that into a song one day...Very good poem. =o

[Black Knight]

Whiskey Lullabies

I don't want to be a liar
Or someone who fakes a smile
Just wanna get higher
And feel important for a while


So I drink myself drunk on compliments
Not caring if they're lies
And once again I fall asleep
To Whiskey lullabies.


I know I shouldn't take in
The things I know ain't true
See that smile I'm fakin'
To keep that smile on you


So I drink myself drunk on wishes
Not caring about my cries
And once again I fall asleep
To Whiskey Lullabies


I want to see you happy
Never seeing you cry
I don't care how
I'd even tell you a lie
Say I'm smiling when I'm sad
I'm good when I'm bad
I just don't want to be
Less important, less great
I have problems to leave
Even when the hour's late


So I drink myself drunk on denial
Not caring if my inside dies
Cause once again I fall asleep
To Whiskey Lullabies

[Metal Overlord Type X]

Oh god, don't mind the, err, "Emo-ness" of these, it's the only kind of poetry I'm capable of writing.

If you want rhyming.... Meh, I'll write you some later that rhyme...

Dust in my hands,
Falls slowly to the dead plant.
And with these hands,
I tear my heart out for you.
The last light in my world.
The last hope that I live for.
The last thing that I see.
The last dream that I reach for.

Forsake me not my love.
Abandon me not in this cold world.
Don't leave me alone to die.
Forgotten in my own shadow.
So cold in my own ashes.
So dark in my own blood.
Don't leave me...
I need you, to keep my heart beating.

Please don't let go.
Please stay with me for all time.
I need you so...
I'll tear my soul out for you.
The one who makes these lungs breathe.
The one who makes this blood flow.
The one who makes these eyes see.
The one who makes these hands feel.

Lost, in the void of darkness.
Lost, before I see the light.
Lost, the gods forsake me.
Lost, alone I die.


Well, you wanted more BK, here it is.

Do you see me here?
I'm right in front of you...
Do you see me here?
I'm trying to catch your attention...
Can you hear me?
I'm shouting out your name...
Can you hear me?
I'm calling for you to save me...
Can you feel me?
I'm here touching your face...
Can you feel me?
I'm clinging to you for my life...
Do you see me bleed?
It's all for you...
Do you hear me cry?
It's all for you...
Do you feel my die?
It was all for you...



And another....

The world is hopeless...
My dreams are the nightmares of others.
My nightmares are beyond their wildest dreams.
I seek solstice in death.
I seek peace in my demise.
This planet is doomed.
Forsaken by the gods.
Forsaken by man.
This planet, is hell itself.
Planet Death.
Planet Suffering.
Planet Earth...
By our hands it has been cursed.
By our hands it dies.
By our hands it suffers.
By our hands it breaks.
By our hands it falls.
By our lives it crumbles.

[Black Knight]

'Fuck Off' is the Phrase I Lack


That smile...
The smile on my face
Am I faking it?
Doesn't it seem out of place?

That soft tone
The soft tone in my voice
Am I sincere?
Or ain't I doing it by choice?

Cause you turned your back on me
But now you crawl back
Now you understand and see
Yet 'fuck off' is the phrase I lack

That problem
That problem I'm listening to
Do I want to hear?
About when it happens to you?

Your friend
Your friend left, like mine did
Can you guess?
What it is that I have hid?

Cause your friend turned away
That's when you turn back
But I don't know if you'll stay
Yet 'Fuck off' is the phrase I lack...

[Metal Overlord Type X]

Okay, another, this was one of my first attempts at a song, so bear with me here.

In the shadow of the twilight,
As we watch our world fly by.
While we sink into the dark of night.
We let lose one last sigh.
As a sign to those we leave behind,
As a sign to those we've lost,
As a sign to those who remember, that night.

[Chorus]
That cruel, cruel night. That stained our lives.
In blood red strife, and crimson lies.
And left us broken, as we cried out.
For the world to save us, to hear us shout.
Alas no one came to aid us in our time of need.
So now we tell you, that you won't have to,
hear our cries in the night again.
Not ever, again.
[Chorus]

I wave away to the world,
I take my last look at your face.
You're still as beautiful
As I remember.
But goodbye to all those moments we shared.
Goodbye to all the life.
Goodbye to those who remember, that night.

[Chrous]

We say goodbye,
To the night,
To the strife,
Inside our lives,
The night we cried,
The night of lies.
And so now,
Tonight we die.

[Chrous]

Oh hateful life, oh hateful strife.
Our darkened hearts, that cursed mark.
It left us broken, it left us dead.
It left us crying, and then they said.
That they won't aid us in our time of need.
Oh happy dagger, bring us peace.
And let the world never speak of that night.
Not ever, again...

[Rudeboy Krazy]

I love your poems BK. I think I'll attempt taking a try at it. The poem may not make sense, and its pretty disorderly how its structured.

And here is when a revelation begins,
When you finally realize, Your fated demise,
Just when you die, You look to the skies,
And think of how ungrateful you were in life.

Buried in soil, Giving away your spoils,
Maybe this wasn't the way you should have lived.
It is as tragic as it is wonderful,
Is it wonderful to ones you didn't please?

Stop striving for perfection,
Stop singing songs of your sorrows,
Live life to its boldest,
And hail the day to its fullest,

For when the day come of your revelation,
Nirvana will sweep over you,
Your death will be at peace,
Rot with strength in your heart,
And you'll leave no spiritual piece.

[Black Knight]

Awesome work Metal! I sure wouldn't mind hearing a melody to those lyrics...It could be a VERY good song. =3

Very good Krazy! Your style is quite nice to read...And it makes sense in a deep way, it leaves room for interpretation. ^^

[I_Luv_Tails]

My Chains No More

I used to be bound,
Made to be the status quo,
A clone, no individuality of my own.

My mind would scream,
But my mouth stayed shut,
Talking was not allowed.

I wanted to be cool,
To be popular,
To be happy, but I wasn’t

I broke my chains one day,
My mouth free to form MY words,
Not theirs.

I have a style of my own,
My own thoughts, feelings,
And I am now free to show them to the world.

You can call me weird, or freaky, or a geek,
But I am happy just being me,
Now that my chains are no more.

[Black Knight]

The Train Staion...

It was a long time ago, I feel
That we both were on MSN
Talking about everything we'd do
And what it would be like when...

I stand on the train station, shouting your name
Our subjects would be bullshit, our jokes would be lame
But it would be just you and me, like we said
And those images wouldn't stay in my head

It was a long time ago, I think
That neither of us knew we'd sink
We made promises meant to be kept
But suddenly we spoke about anything except...

How I'd stand on the train station, shouting your name
About our subejcts that are bullshits and jokes that are lame
About how would it be you or me, like we'd said
And how those images wouldn't stay in my head

And it was along time ago, I know
That you were my friend that'd never go
You said things that were lies, walking away
You left at moments where you'd normally stay...

So please tell me cause I'm lost
You'd make me smile at all cost
But suddenly talking to me or such
Just cost you way too much
But you never explained, or told me why
You just kept walking me by

So I'll never stand on the train station, never shout your name
Our subjects really are bullshit, and our jokes weren't even lame
And it'll never be just you and me, not like the two friends said
Cause we're not friends and those images stay forever in my head

[Metal Overlord Type X]

One of my shorter poems. I don't really like it though :|

Your soul is mine as well
I felt your last breath slip away,
And I released my hold on you.
I heard you last words come forth,
And I wept with eternal sorrow.
I saw your eyes as you slept forever,
And I burned my soul for yours.
I witnessed your death,
And I witnessed my at once.

[Black Knight]

Felt like writing some poetry/lyrics....

I'm sorry
I don't want to bother you with this
I just really, really miss....

Now you're around me
Until the moment she is free
I don't want your full attention
Or want you to be mine
I just wish you'd call now and then
And ask if I'm fine
You know like you used to?
Those small things you'd do
Like give me a hug, or kiss
Those small things I miss
Giving me coffe in my favourite cup
Coming by mine to ask "'Sup?"
I lost all that when she came
Things'll never be the same

I just miss you...


Now it's her you always call
And you always catch her fall
I'm left, silent like my phone
Sitting in my house, alone
It's her favourite cup you bring
For her you'll really do everything
I don't want her gone from you
After all it is you two...
I just want my best friend again
Who's coat I'd borrow in the rain

I just miss you...

I'm sorry
I don't want to bother you with this
I just really, really miss
I just miss you...

[Antony the Bat]

Those poems are way past cool but Mintys poem needs to sound cool without the grief involving me plus I know that she is a good person inside.

[Day]

What the fuck are you talking about, you retard?

Just, shut up. Get out.

Go on. Leave.

[Black Knight]

Random thing I threw together...I can't even make any sense out of it cause I just wrote and wrote...I don't even know what I wrote....


In my dream, I see to much
Never any sorrow, or such
I forget life and what it is
And I can't say it's a life I miss
Do you know what its like?
To be left in utter doubt?
Not knowing if it's all a nightmare,
Or how to just get out?
Thinking you're losing
what means everything to you?
A disagreement
and you don't know what to do.
Would you stand your ground?
Or cower in fear of fate?
Would you let go of yourself
Just to realise it's too late?
It's part of life's fast flow
Things do happen, everyday
People stay when they should go People go when they should stay...
We'll never know the answers
to wrong and right
Cause everyone is different,
like day and night
Just follow your own heart
Cause at least that's a start
To maybe a better tomorrow
In my dream, it's a world without sorrow

[Claw the perv]

So many times I try, just to forget
So I lie, that don't mean shit
compared to all the bullshit you said,
Fuckin up my head. Now I'm bleedin' on the inside wishing I was dead,

Shit, why do I want this bitch, It don't make sense
I wanna love her, (love 'er dead)
I wanna hug her, (her fukin' neck)
I'm so confused don't know what to do.
I wanna fucking shoot you, and love you too.

What should I do? What should I say?
I want it to be over (In my head)
Take the bullet from it's chamber. (and put it in her head)
Confusion, (takes over me)
Polution, (in my face so I can not see)

I love this, (hate this bitch)
I can't control my conscience, (Shiiit)

[Metal Overlord Type X]

http://forum.sonicearth.com/%5BIMG%5Dhttp://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa87/deathforunow/Untitled-5.jpg%5B/IMG%5DSo you have come to me,
But for what reason...
Are you my lover?
Or are you my rival?
Are you my savior?
Or are you my demise?
Are you my soul?
Or are you my reaper?

Please, tell me if you will...
Will you save me from this hell...
Will you return my soul to the world...
Will you allow me to repent my sins....

Or is this all a lie...
A joke, a fraud.
Are you here to condemn me?
Are you here to forsake me?
Are you here to deny me?
Are you here to destroy me?

I should not have asked,
For I've already known...
You have forgotten our love...
You have forgotten our smiles...
You have forgotten our memories...
You have forgotten everything we once had...
You have forgotten me...

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa87/deathforunow/Untitled-5.jpg
http://forum.sonicearth.com/%5BIMG%5Dhttp://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa87/deathforunow/Untitled-5.jpg%5B/IMG%5D

[Orange]

"Soul" by Deep Green ( Me)

I stared out the window, into the distaster-scene abyss.
It seemed as though all the people and cars had gone amiss.
The rain kept falling, there's just no hope... anymore.
The bowl kep filling, and yet it was spilling, can't take anymore,
But when the grey in the sky,
turns to turquois, and we see that nothing died.
It just seems to me; That We're almost free...

At the hour of our final night's fight on sin
Will we march to the end of the world or burn dim?,
When the world's not your oyster; you fall to your pain
We must revive our souls and keep walking through flames.


The villagers gathered; outside the window of the store.
There was no answer; just an old note on the door,
"I have left you; I have gone to somewhere else,"
The cryptic reply, made them ask why; they wanted more...
Bridge: But when the white-sanded bay,
Brings its flooded waters back to where it came.
It would seem to me; That we're almost free...


At the hour of our final night's fight on sin
Will we march to the end of the world or burn dim?,
When the world's not your oyster; you fall to your pain
We must revive our souls and keep walking through flames.

Keep that soul, and keep that life, and keep that soul and keep that light 'cuz everyone around you wants your soul, and everyone around you wants your soul, and everyone around you lost their soul...

[Shackel11]

Hey look! A retarded spammer has posted on a SUPER MOD'S page! Isn't that smart?

Nice poetry, it is awesome, by ze way.

[Antony the Bat]

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
That I would dare to go tweet
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Your the one I would love to meet.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
I will battle the fearsome heat
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Only Eggman knows how to cheat.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
A chilli dog is as good as sausage meat.
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
my love to you is no repeat.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Shadow and I will never retreat
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
my muscles is equally helpful as my feet.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
I will defeat the Eggman Empires battle fleet.
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
my heart is healthy as my lunch is made out of wheat.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Anti Sonic is the evil I will beat.
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
our treasure is one way past cool treat.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
my love poem to you is so neat
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Our future together is on this treasure map sheet.

[Day]

I just threw up in my mouth a little.

[Black Knight]

....That was by God one of the most awful things I've read...Don't repeat one line every other line FOURTEEN TIMES!

[Shackel11]

I think my stomach has died a little inside.

[MadMoose]

I think my stomach has died a little inside.
Yes, and the sad thing is that I think that he could probably write better poetry than me. :(

[Orange]

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
That I would dare to go tweet
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Your the one I would love to meet.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
I will battle the fearsome heat
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Only Eggman knows how to cheat.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
A chilli dog is as good as sausage meat.
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
my love to you is no repeat.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Shadow and I will never retreat
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
my muscles is equally helpful as my feet.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
I will defeat the Eggman Empires battle fleet.
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
my heart is healthy as my lunch is made out of wheat.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Anti Sonic is the evil I will beat.
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
our treasure is one way past cool treat.

Rouge the Bat your so sweet
my love poem to you is so neat
Rouge the Bat your so sweet
Our future together is on this treasure map sheet.

Mabye you should try to get a social life.

[Metal Overlord Type X]

I really should shoot myself for even reading through that whole thing.

[Infinity]

Lolol Shackel11 wants to be Day so bad.

Calm yourselves, children. I'm 60% sure he is fully aware of how ridiculous that was.

I'm 60% sure he is mocking every one of us.

[Black Knight]

Irony, that poem has gotten more attention then any other in this thread.