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duality0
June 17th, 2007, 09:15 PM
The Fan Fiction starting off. If you want part of information, Please check Duality's BIO.

Chapter 1 - Farewell of you

" I don't know why this happens to me. " Duality whispered in his room. In silent, with his lights off, sitting in the dark around Midnight. Sitting there on his bed. Thinking why everything in his life is a bad thing. Looking at his hands, " Why must this happens to me.. " When he was about to close his eyes, the Aura in Alaska woke him. " damn it.. " Looking outside and seeing a shadow on one of the buildings. Looking closer, he saw a red shine. In shock, getting out of his room and started to chaser that person. The shadow was running and jumping from roof to roof until the shadow tripped and fell. Duality grabbing on of the Ladders and climbing fast. He got up with and with a glare, he stopped. The shadow got up and the aura shined on the shadow. Revealing Lunar the Echidna. Looking at each other with a glare in both eyes. Lunar got up and kept on running. Duality ran after her to finish her once and for all. Lunar was throwing Bombs at duality, but duality dodged and kept on running. And once again, Lunar tripped and this time she fell in the trash can. Duality laughing at her. Lunar looked up and with embarrassment, she threw another bomb at the ledge of where duality was. He fell in the floor. Lunar looking still embarrassed, she ran away. Duality got up and chased her once more. Lunar ran out of bombs and dropping trash cans on the side walk to bide some time. She jump high in the sky and landed on the roof. She turned left and continued. Duality heading to a dead end, but still not stopping, jumped from wall to wall to get up to the roof and he spotted her. He ran once more and this time, Duality caught up and grabbed her hair and pound her to the floor. " Let me go you perverted hedgehog! " She screamed. " Not until you tell me what the hell your doing here! " Duality replied very angrily. Lunar kept on resisting and moved harder to be free from duality. " I said LET ME GO! " She screamed even louder. Duality looking at her with a more dark glare.
Lunar still tried to break free and she did, but her shirt ripped, but she continued on to make sure duality didn't see. Duality chasing her once more. Lunar running with embarrassment again and this time finishing off the chase by jumping off and down the ledge. But she jumped in a window that was open and a banned. Hiding there until duality left. After a 5 minute look, He left him in a freeze now. Lunar looking at him in the window with a big glare. " I will be sure your mission will be a down fault Duality! " whispered Lunar with anger.

Duality coughing a lot after the night chase, taking the medicine and packing up. His brother looking at him..with a tear down his cheek. Duality looking at him. Saying " sorry " to Faint, which is his brother. Duality left and continued his search of the two items. Knife of Shadows - to cure Duality's curse of the Eighth Son. And the Destiny Orb - to back away demons of hell away from his brother. Looking at the damage of last night, he knew this wouldn't be easy for him. But, he wasn't alone, Watching from a far distance, Deltoria was watching him with a Orb of Eye. Deltoria was a Wolf of Utah but moving to Hati Mexico to find the Voodoo Magic Orb to do some terrible things. Duality, Lunar, and Deltoria. All on a mission, trying to kill each other. Who will win..

BloodCroc499
July 6th, 2008, 03:25 AM
Yep,i can definately tell you're a Slipknot fan.Can't wait for their new album.

specopsangheili
July 14th, 2008, 06:04 AM
In all honesty it needs more paragraphs. I keep getting "lost" in that large chunk of text.
But either way keep writing just work on paragraphing it a bit more.