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InuYasha.
September 4th, 2007, 08:11 PM
The new girl named Valerie





(( I put valerie's mothers wording in blue so ya don't get confused =^~^= ))

CHAPTER 1
The move

A moving truck pulled into the driveway as a female cat by the name Valerie moved her way to the window climbing over boxes packed with hers and her mother's belongings as she was quite upset. " But mooooom do we have to move. You never even asked me if I liked this place"! She shouted at her mother watching the moving men open the back of the truck and come to the door. They knocked on the door and Valerie's mother called out to her " Oh valerie dear just get the door and you know we can't afford to live here anymore" her mother answered as Valerie rolled her eyes and opened the door. The movers greeted themselves and Valerie grinned while one was writing down the information they needed as she took a deep breath and screeched. The movers both jumped and turned to look at her and she grinned. Her mother then came storming out " Valerie Josie Lockerheart!!! What have I told you about screeching"!? Her mother asked irritated. Valerie looked at her an laughed at the moving men " Man did you see how high they jumped it was awsome mom"! She laughed and her mother sighed angrily. " Just get ready to go" Her mother said and walked out the door while the movers began moving everything. Valerie got into a car that was bright red and could carry six passengers if one of the passengers was small enough to fit in the middle seat of the front. Valerie and her mother waited till the movers were done and pulled out first so they could follow.

Valerie had become bored and litened to her WALKMAN when she looked at a sign as it read. Willowstream 198. She gasped and looked at her mother. " Moooomm "!? She whined. Her mother sighed " Valerie if your asking when we'll be there the answer is late afternoon tomorrow because we have to stop to rest for the night seeing as we got a late start due to your stubborness". She replied. Valerie moaned and looked out the window. " Wake me if i don't die of boredom." She whined. her mother grumbled and ignored her as they drove on.

Kursed
September 4th, 2007, 11:12 PM
Valerie - Valkyre
thats really close in the name part, but I've been writting Valkyre's name without the i. Check it in the dictionary and you'll know what I mean

InuYasha.
September 4th, 2007, 11:15 PM
yea well okay i should have the next chapter up soon. But Valerie is actually brought up from a stuffed cat I had

Kursed
September 4th, 2007, 11:27 PM
Oh good, I just have a thing about people copying my char

InuYasha.
September 5th, 2007, 01:37 AM
I never copied your character I didn't know you had a character by that name. Valerie has been my fan char since grade 12. She was originally a healer for Inuyasha but noone seems to like healing cat demons. Please don't start.

Alex Kaisentrifel
September 5th, 2007, 09:42 PM
Ey, Dark Pheonix, before you make any assumptions, don't go just accusing someone of stealing your fan character, Valerie seems nothing close to Valkyre. It might have been a coincidence, but there two different names

On another hand, the fan fic looks pretty good

Steel Valor
September 5th, 2007, 09:55 PM
I don't know if you ask me its too short of a chapter. But you know how to portray what's going on I'll give that. And Phoenix I don't think Inu stole Valkyre. But the names are REALLY similar, they just both have different stories.

Kursed
September 5th, 2007, 10:49 PM
I know, im just saying.

sorry

InuYasha.
September 19th, 2007, 04:52 PM
Chapter 2
The hotel


Valerie groaned while looking out the car window about two hours later as her stomach growled. " Mom I'm really hungry" she said while yawning. Her mother looked over at her and she looked around spotting a drivethrough restaraunt and pulled in there. " What would you like Valerie?" she asked her looking at the menue. Valerie thought for a while then decided. " I would like a double burger " she said yawning. Her mother nodded and drove to the speaker box and placed the order. All they had to do now was wait. Soon enough they got to the takeout window and her mother payed handing valerie her meal. " Thank you mom" she said openning her meal as she pulled out her mother able to wait till they got to the hotel.

As valerie finished her meal she fell back asleep completly exhausted still. Her mother watched her as they continued to drive taking the 99 exit turnoff into pearlsville. Her mother slowed to the given speed limit at 35 seeing as it was a resort town and looked for the hotel by the name pearl harbour inn. She finally spots the hotel and pulls in waking Valerie gently. Valerie yawns and sits up looking at her. " We there now mom?" She asked and her mother nodded and they both get out of the car locking it as the moving truck pulls off to the side of the road at the truck stop area.

Valerie and her mom make their way to their hotel room and go in. Valerie gets ready for bed and goes to sleep as her mother watches some tv. Soon she falls asleep too.