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supersonicfan101
August 10th, 2008, 11:42 PM
He's a story I created.
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Clyde the Hedgehog:
The Beginning
Part 1: The Dawn of the Depression

NOTICE:This story contains Some Language and Violence.

In the year 2030, the planet of Mobius was engulfed by a period of depression. The citizens got it the worst. Many became too sick and weak to work at they're jobs. Then, those jobs had to shut down, because they had no more workers. As the depression continued, all the crops began to die off because no one was taking care of them. It seemed like Mobius was done for.

The Freedom Fighters, keepers of the peace, quickly assembled all of they're recruits for a meeting on the matter. Chrome the Hedgehog, Sonics' distant cousin, was taking his position as Leader for the time being. Tails, second in command, suggested they try growing food within a greenhouse of some sort."It's a great idea Tails", Chrome began, "But by the time the structure is finished, it might be too late." "Well, we've got to try something, people are dying out there!", Tails argued. Chrome sat down and begin to stare out the window, at the lifeless sky. "What do you want us to do Mobius?", Chrome asked, scared and confused.

Chrome closed the meeting and told everyone to go home and sleep on it. As Chrome walked into his home, his wife, Crystal, was beginning to cook dinner. They still had some food left, even before the depression hit. Clyde, his son, was doing some doodles of his parents together. Clyde was home schooled, he just turned thirteen last month. Chrome grabbed one of Clyde's drawings and observed it. "I like this one", he said to Clyde, "The way you drew your mother's eyes." Clyde smiled. Chrome smiled back. Crystal walked over and sat down next to them. "Clyde? Could you go tell your sister to get down here for dinner?", she asked. "Sure thing mom", Clyde said.

Clyde made his way his way up the stairs to his sister's room. He knocks on her door. "Come in!", she yelled. "Hey sis, time for dinner", Clyde told her. "Okay", she replied. Necross was two years older than Clyde, and is also home schooled. "Oh, hey, I want to show you my gloves, I just made!" She slipped one of them on. "They control the energy that's within the soil", she began, "Of course they can only work when your in open areas." "Cool", he began, "Now let's go!" Necross took off the glove and put it back under the bed and began to make way for the stairs.

Meanwhile, things were brewing within the underbelly of the Eggman Empire. Dr. Ivo Robotnik began to stroll the factory portion of the empire, just to see where the processing was going. He looked confused, as if this wasn't what he was expecting. "Since, when did we start making these kind of robot designs again?", he asked. "Since I took control!", a voice said from the dark. Eggman began to walk forward. "Metal?", he asked. "In the flesh, we'll technically I have no flesh, but still you get the point." "What do you mean, you have control?", Eggman wondered. "Oh you didn't here?", Metal Sonic began, "I thought you weren't doing a good enough job making Mobius miserable, so I'm taking control!" "I have to stop you!", he began, "You're out of control!" Eggman began to run, but Metal swept his feet from under him and he fell to the ground. Metal grabbed his jacket and dragged him to highest point of the building. He climbed with Eggman to the very roof. He held Eggman over the edge. "Please Metal you don't want to do this!", Eggman begged. "I have to make sure you don't return and steal my empire from me, Doctor", he said with a smile. "Please, I'm a sick old man who just wants to make a living", he plead. "Well your right about one thing", Metal began, "You are a sick man, and you deserve to die!" "Welcome to hell Dr.Robotnik!" Metal Sonic tossed Eggman into the abyss below. Eggman begin to scream as he fell to the very dirt which he walked on.

"Let the dawn of a new age, arise from the ashes of this burned establishment!", he yelled as he raised his arms. "Mobius!", Metal Sonic shouted, "Your mine you son of a bitch!!!" He began laugh as the rain began to fall from the black sky. "Let the rise of the Metal Mechanic Corp. BEGIN!!!"

To be Continued...

Stay Tuned for Part 2: The Fighting Chance! Hope you people enjoyed this!

supersonicfan101
August 11th, 2008, 02:01 AM
Clyde the Hedgehog:
The Beginning
Part 2:The Fighting Chance

NOTICE:this story contains Language and Violence.

The Next Morning, Metal Sonic began switching back on the very factory that has brought fear to Mobius in many different ways, all terrifying. "Computer, bring all systems back online!", Metal commanded, "I'm going to tare this entire planet apart, piece by piece!" As Metal placed himself within the middle of the plant, he began to hook himself into the main stream of energy flowing from the main tower. "Now, let there be light!"

Chrome awoke to the sound of knocking at his door. "Coming", he said as he walked down the stairs. He opened the door to find Tails sitting with scared look on his face. "Tails, what's wrong?", he asked. "I just got back from doing some snooping around Robotnik's place." "And?", Chrome asked. "I found Robotnik's body", he began, "He's dead." "Oh my god", Chrome said with shock, "Do you know what happened?" "No, we don't know anything at this point."

All of the Sudden, a loud boom came from the center of Mobius Square. "What the hell is that?!", Tails asked. "I don't know,Tails", Chrome wondered, "Call the guys, tell them to hurry down here." "What are we doing?", he asked. "Helping these people, now go!", he commanded.

As the Freedom Fighters began to assemble, people began running away from the Town Center. "What's got these people so worked up?", Mighty asked. An Army of Mechanical Menaces begin to walk over the hill, torching everything in they're path. "Well Freedom Fighters you have two choices", Metal Sonic said as he approached the Freedom Fighters, "Either run away like cowards or die here, with your honor still intact." "Well stay here Metal and bring you down like we have countless times before!", Chrome said as he emerged from the crowd. "Very well", Metal said with a smirk. Metal revealed his pistol and shot Chrome right in the chest. Mighty grabbed Metal's arm and began struggling to get the gun. Chrome fell to the ground, breathing his last breaths. All of the sudden, one of the Machines standing on the hill went up in flames. Metal stared in amazement. "What the fuck?", Metal said confused. Clyde and Necross walked out of the smoke with grins on they're faces. They were holding devices that triggered the generators within each indivitual machine. "With these, we can blow your city sky high", Clyde began, "We put these triggers all over the plant." "What's the matter Metal?",Necross asked, "Can't face the fact that you were beaten by kids?" Metal began to smile. "Alright, you kids win!", Metal raised his hands. All of the Sudden, Metal pulled out a army knife and threw it at the device Clyde was holding. "Go out with a BANG!", Metal laughed as he jumped into the river. "Clyde dropped the device and ran to his father's side. "Dad?", he called, "Dad, wake up." "Come on Clyde", Mighty said, "We have to get him to a doctor. As the crowd carried him away, Clyde and Necross stayed behind.

"Mark my words, Necross", Clyde began, "I'm going to do whatever it takes, to do what my father has failed to do. "From now on, it's war!"

THE END

Kursed
August 11th, 2008, 03:17 AM
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Nice story line.

You need to spread it out more by making a new line for every time some one is speaking. It hard to follow who is talking at the moment.

Next time can you keep it in one topic not a topic for a chapter.