Sonic: the Awakening of Darkness

[Xanadu the Fox]

WARNING, READ THIS FIRST!


This story has TEEN content. Including: Mild violence, mild language, MAYBE death. Enjoy!

[Deano]

WARNING, READ THIS FIRST!


This story has NO content. Including:

[Xanadu the Fox]

Sonic, Tails, and Knuckles were exploring the forest for chaos emeralds. Then, Sonic saw a Black and purple chaos emerald on the ground. He said,"Hey! a new chaos emerald!" He picked it up. He felt a painful surge of energy go through his hand. He dropped it. Then, it started cracking. It shattered into pieces. There was a floating ball of shadow. It shapeshifted into a standing shadow. It looked like Shadow the hedgehog, but pitch black. Then, its eyes appeared. They were pure red and didn't had no pupils. "Yes! Just as the stone tablets predicted!" said the shadow. "What?" asked Sonic. "When I was alive, I studied the dark stone tablets." replied the shadow, "Then,I used the dark tablets' power to nearly destroy he world! Then, a white hedgehog by the name of Shigami used the power of the light tablets to first turn me into a shadow, next, he created an eigth chaos emerald around me. i was sealed in there until the prophacy was fulfilled!" "What prophacy?" asked Knuckles. "It's none of your cocern!" replied the shadow. He attacked Knuckles. "Hey!" exclaimed Sonic, "Why are you doing this?". "You'll figure out soon enough." said the shadow as he shot a laser at Sonic's head. He felt nothing. Then, the shadow warped away."What was that about?" asked Sonic. "What the hell is his problem?" wondered Knuckles as he got up. "Well, whatever it is," replied Tails, "we have to get the chaos emeralds before him." "Yeah." replied Sonic, "Also, it's not a bad idea to keep these shards just in case we can seal him back inside this emerald." said Sonic as he picked up the shards of the dark emerald. "Hey guys," said Tails, "we should go to my workshop to study these pieces first." "Okay!" replied Sonic. "Actually," said Knuckles, "I have some unfinished buisness." -Knuckles left- Sonic and Tails brought the pieces of the dark emerald back to Tails' workshop. To be continued...

[Biohazard]

Who the hell started a story with "One day...." -OH WAIT

YOU do.

Terrible way to started a story kid, it looks like you're telling eveyrone a fairtale.

Also, there's no structure, and its far too short. Formatting helps kid. Make it longer, use some more big-boy words, add detail, and break it down into paragraphs.