Sonic Fan Characters

[Xanadu the Fox]

Sorry about my last topic. I got a little carried away. Also, I'm new here. This time, I won't get carried away. Anyway, this time it's ONLY for telling about your characters. :D:);):P:(

[Day]

... you missed the point again.

People aren't going to post their characters in here, because they can make their own topic about their character/s specifically. You're supposed to be doing the same.

In this section, you post up your fan character's bio. Height, weight, appearance, powers, backstory, friends, enemies, the whole shebang.

Try it with your character Xanadu. Write out what he's like, and make sure to put in LOTS of detail. We like detail.

[Xanadu the Fox]

Name: Xanadu the fox--- Age: 7--- Appearance: Green-furred fox with 9 tails and blue eyes.--- Powers: Telekinesis, wind.--- Strength: Strong agenst wind, ice, and water.--- Weakness: Weak agenst earth, fire, and lava.--- Friends: Zakodo the hedgehog, Aero the fox.--- Known relatives: Aero the fox (Brother), Zibaza the fox (Father) Shibaniko the fox (mother).--- Interests: Hanging out with Zakodo and Aero, defeating Darkness the wolf, and playing video games.--- Personality: Carefree.--- Rival(s): Duxana(Du-za-na) the fox.--- Enemy: Darkness the wolf.--- Short story: Xanadu was peacefully playing at the park. It was perfect, cloudless, sunny weather. Then, as he was on the swings, it got dark. He looked up. There was a storm! A level 10 hurricane! Then, all the grass turned brown and dry! Darkness the wolf came out of nowhere! "Who are you?" asked Xanadu. "I am Darkness the wolf! He jumped at Xanadu! Right before he slashed him, Zakodo jumped in the way! Zakodo and Darkness fought! Darkness escaped. Zakodo knew he would return, so he decided to stay with Xanadu.

[Kursed]

It needs more detail (Alot more detail) Try again.

[Biohazard]

Name: Xanadu the fox--- Age: 7--- Appearance: Green-furred fox with 9 tails and blue eyes.--- Powers: Telekinesis, wind.--- Strength: Strong agenst wind, ice, and water.--- Weakness: Weak agenst earth, fire, and lava.--- Friends: Zakodo the hedgehog, Aero the fox.--- Known relatives: Aero the fox (Brother), Zibaza the fox (Father) Shibaniko the fox (mother).--- Interests: Hanging out with Zakodo and Aero, defeating Darkness the wolf, and playing video games.--- Personality: Carefree.--- Rival(s): Duxana(Du-za-na) the fox.--- Enemy: Darkness the wolf.--- Short story: Xanadu was peacefully playing at the park. It was perfect, cloudless, sunny weather. Then, as he was on the swings, it got dark. He looked up. There was a storm! A level 10 hurricane! Then, all the grass turned brown and dry! Darkness the wolf came out of nowhere! "Who are you?" asked Xanadu. "I am Darkness the wolf! He jumped at Xanadu! Right before he slashed him, Zakodo jumped in the way! Zakodo and Darkness fought! Darkness escaped. Zakodo knew he would return, so he decided to stay with Xanadu.


Uhm...


That is the sloppiest excuse for a character bio I've ever seen. No one is gonna sit there and try to sort through it to find out what you're trying to tell them.

Also, seriously lacks detail. And you're "short story" isnt even considered a story. A paragraph isnt a freaking story kid, hate to tell you. And that has got to be the most cliché 'story' i've ever seen.

[Metal Overlord Type X]

Name: Xanadu the fox
--- Age: 7
--- Appearance: Green-furred fox with 9 tails and blue eyes.
--- Powers: Telekinesis, wind.
--- Strength: Strong agenst wind, ice, and water.
--- Weakness: Weak agenst earth, fire, and lava.
--- Friends: Zakodo the hedgehog, Aero the fox.
--- Known relatives:
Aero the fox (Brother)
Zibaza the fox (Father)
Shibaniko the fox (mother)
--- Interests: Hanging out with Zakodo and Aero, defeating Darkness the wolf, and playing video games.
--- Personality: Carefree.
--- Rival(s): Duxana(Du-za-na) the fox.
--- Enemy: Darkness the wolf.
--- Short story: Xanadu was peacefully playing at the park. It was perfect, cloudless, sunny weather. Then, as he was on the swings, it got dark. He looked up. There was a storm! A level 10 hurricane! Then, all the grass turned brown and dry! Darkness the wolf came out of nowhere! "Who are you?" asked Xanadu. "I am Darkness the wolf! He jumped at Xanadu! Right before he slashed him, Zakodo jumped in the way! Zakodo and Darkness fought! Darkness escaped. Zakodo knew he would return, so he decided to stay with Xanadu.

Eh... I sorted it out, and they're all right, it's really short. There's a good template for one... somewhere in this board... I'll find it later..

[xXx Psycho Shade xXx]

Also, I'm new here.:D:);):P:(

You can still be new here and know where to post things. All you have to do is read which topics go where, a newbie to the internet would know what to do.

[BloodCroc499]

Spike the Porcupine(made him up since 2003)
Age:23
Weapon:Chaos Sword of Light
Eye color:Red
Fur color: Darkness black
Personality:Silent,dependant,samurai,strong minded,concentrated,willing
Likes:Sleep,food,peace and quiet,beating the crap out of Eggman Nega
Dislikes:Interruptions,spoiled foods,people ruining his meditation routine
Powers:Chaos Warp,Chaos tornado,Chaos storm,Chaos Wrath,Dragon flame
Gender:Male
Weakness:fake emeralds and lightning(very,very scared of lightning)
Siblings:Speed the Porcupine,David the Porcupine,Sarge the Porcupine,Drake the Porcupine
Mother:Trinity the Porcupine
Father:Eruptro the Porcupine
Hobbies:Training,testing his strength,hanging out at the mountains
Greatest Enemy:Eggman Nega
Rival:Matryx the Hedgehog
Theme song: Operation:Ground and Pound by DragonForce

Matryx the Hedgehog
Gender:Male
Age:22
Weapons:Gravity Sword
Eye color:Yellow
Fur color:Lime green and forest green
Personality:Taunting,evil,serial killer,insane,challenging
Powers:Control time and space,black holes,control the elements
Likes:Evil,darkness,killing people,sweet taste of revenge,world conquest
Dislikes:Heroes,bright lights,Spike the porcupine,world salvation,defeat
Mother: Pamela the Hedgehog
Father:Wayne the Hedgehog
Sisters:Rena the hedgehog and Brook the hedgehog
Brother:Justin the Hedgehog
Wife:Sharyn the Fox
Greatest Enemy:Mephiles the Dark
Rival:Spike the Porcupine
Weakness:Raw power,ripped atmosphere
Theme song:Shadow Zone by Static-X

I have a lot more characters to show off,so i'll show you one more

David the Porcupine
Age:13
Gender:Male(no dip,Sherlock!)
Weapon:60,000 bolt electrical whip
Eye color: Purple
Fur color:Lime green
Personality:Smart,computer genius,in love,sensitive,inventive,confident
Powers:Rage of the Phoenix and other phoenix powers
Likes:Girls,adventure,builiding things,food,hacking,goofing off
Dislikes:Emo girls,when his inventions go wrong,Eggman Nega and Sonic
Mother:Trinity
Father:Erupto
Brothers:Speed,Drake,Sarge,Spike
Weakness:Ice,poison
Crush:Amy Rose(love interest)
Theme song:The End of Heartache by KillSwitch Engage
Dating song:Gotham City by R-Kelly(that is if he gets a date with Amy)
Rival:Sid the Rabbit
I.Q:500(he studies 24/7)
Greatest Enemy:Eggman Nega

[Claw the perv]

I lol'd... so hard. XD

[Orange]

I.Q:500(he studies 24/7)


|.Q. 500? Studying 24/7 would get you up to a 200 maybe.

[Ziggy]

|.Q. 500? Studying 24/7 would get you up to a 200 maybe.
Lawl.
That was a pwn