GMOD Sonic Comics

[Chaomaster]

Hello Sonic Earth. I Have Made Some Special Comics For You Guys. You Can Check Em Out If You Wish, This Is The First One



Panel1 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic1.png)
Panel2 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic2.png)
Panel3 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic3.png)
Panel4 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic4.png)
Panel5 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic5.png)
Panel6 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic6.png)
Panel7 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic7.png)
Panel8 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic8.png)
Panel9 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic9.png)
Panel10 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic10.png)
Panel11 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic11.png)
Panel12 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic12.png)
Panel13 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic13.png)
Panel14 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic14.png)
Panel15 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic15.png)
Panel16 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic16.png)
Panel17 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic17.png)
Panel18 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic18.png)
Panel19 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic19.png)
Panel20 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic20.png)
Panel21 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic21.png)
Panel22 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic22.png)
Panel23 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic23.png)
Panel24 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic24.png)
Panel25 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic25.png)
Panel26 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic26.png)
Panel27 (http://i180.photobucket.com/albums/x235/chaomasterxl/Gmodcomic27.png)

[Deano]

Good in itself, just doesn't look too good. You need a better GFX card.

[Chaomaster]

I'm Getting A New One Soon. This One Is Garbage

[Day]

It'd look even better if you resized the images and cut out all the unnecessary wasted space.

I got sick after the second panel.

[Chaomaster]

But If I Resize Them, Yo Won't Be Able To Enjoy The Backdrops, And Notice The Hidden Items In Them. And Why Cut Them?

[Day]

But If I Resize Them, Yo Won't Be Able To Enjoy The Backdrops, And Notice The Hidden Items In Them. And Why Cut Them?

Because the backgrounds are standard Half-Life 2 shit, and throwing in the companion cube doesn't constitute a half-assed excuse.

A story flows better when it's well presented. You waste a LOT of space in each panel, most of it's unneeded. Crop the image so that the main focus of the panel is there, then resize it, THEN add the text.

http://hlcomic.com/ did it well. Go look, then learn from it.

[Chaomaster]

Okay Fine, No Need To Get So Touchy About It. I Am Still A Noob At GMOD Comic Making...

[Day]

Okay Fine, No Need To Get So Touchy About It. I Am Still A Noob At GMOD Comic Making...

That's not touchy kiddo, that's being constructive.

I didn't openly say you were shit. You've got a lot of potential.

Realise it.

[Chaomaster]

Okay, But Just For The Record. Do You Expect Me To Be As Dedicated As That Guy, Who Happened To Be Making Those Comics At The Age Of 30, And Probably Lives In His Mothers Basement? Not Being An Ass Or Anything, Just Asking?

[Day]

No, but there are 12 year olds who have been making comics that follow the basic concept of structure better than you do.

Stop being defensive. It's called constructive criticism. Learn from it.