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carlsonthehedgehog
June 21st, 2008, 06:42 PM
Full name: Carlson Mia Mai Hedgehog
Age:14
Birth:April 10th
Species:Hedgehog, of course
Realationship with:Draiko
Hobbies:Tortureing Sonic and Tails, that's why they hate her, Makeing fun of Cheese when Cream put bows in her hair, and writing. She writes about her many adventures with her friends and how Eggman always tries to capture her because he wants to know where sonic is but the Megahypx Team saves her.
Friends:Jordana the enchinda, Amy the hedgehog, Cream the rabbit, Justie the fox, Brad the rabbit, MeiMei the hedgehog, Nikolas the enchinda, and Marlien the hedgehog.
Likes:Polka dots, Bows, and spending time with her boyfriend, Draiko
Dislikes: People who pick on her for wanting to be different, People who think they're better than everyone else, and liers
Abilities:Turning into Meganhypx Carlson(It's where she turns all purple and develops into a giant, destorying everything in her path), She knows Tyke wan doe also. She has been learning it ever since she was three and could kick.,She can also scream so loud that it starts an earthquake, but lastly, she can sing to her enemies and they will fall into a deep sleep(please note that it only works on enemies,ONLY)
Weaknesses:She is terrified of Shadow even though Shadow has a crush on her but she is just scared at his appearance, fire, she can't stand to be in a room with her friend Justie when he gets angry because he bursts into flames, LITERALLY
Favorite Quote:"You gotta love me!"
Battle quote:"Have your cake and eat it too"
Random quote:It would start to get quiet in a room and she can't stand for it to be quiet so she yells"Shut Up, you guys. Godd you talk too much"
Theme song:She's a rebel By GREEN DAY
Battle theme song: We Are The Champions By Queen
In love theme song:Hot by Avril Lavigne
Favorite dance song:Everytime we touch By casadana
Blood type:0
Height:'5 Exactly
Weight:she's too embarassed to say
A cool fact about Carlson:I'm writing this bio. about myself(think about it for a few secs m'kay)
Other things about her: On Saturdays she is a major couch potato, She secretly sorta has a crush on Sonic but won't tell anyone, When she was born she was soppused to be a boy, Has a scar on her face from when she was born she was cursed with it in a good way(it was soppused to bring her good luck and to her it did), Her style is kinda weird to other people but she love it, she doesn't have her right arm anymore because Eggman cut it off a long time ago trying to mutate her
Parents: Adrieanna and Ed hedgehog(still alive)

The pic of my avvie is Carlson.


Biography: When she was five she discovered that she had a twin somewhere and ever since then she has been trying to find her but no hope for her yet. She started Tyke Wan Doe when she was three and she enjoys it much but she could naturally fight at birth, amazing huh! She used to be a really nice girl but now she feels like their is a part of her missing and she feels as if she will never find her sis. Now she is abnioxus and rude to everyone but she doesn't mean to be that way she just feels empty inside. She lays at night crying her eyes out because she can't stand to know she has never seen her sis and she really wants to meet her with hopes that she is still alive. She has a hidden black heart on her forehead that symbolizes how alone she feels.She does have a 12 year old brother though that she loves dearly even though to her he can be annoying at times.

Steel Valor
June 21st, 2008, 06:54 PM
Well I've seen a couple of your bios before, good to see that you're still trying. But space it out a little more so the bio may be easier to read. And don't affiliate your characters with the official characters of Sega. There's no originality in that.

Here's 2 links to take a look at:
http://www.sonicearth.com/showthread.php?t=716
http://www.sonicearth.com/showthread.php?t=192

carlsonthehedgehog
June 21st, 2008, 07:15 PM
Well I've seen a couple of your bios before, good to see that you're still trying. But space it out a little more so the bio may be easier to read. And don't affiliate your characters with the official characters of Sega. There's no originality in that.

Here's 2 links to take a look at:
http://www.sonicearth.com/showthread.php?t=716
http://www.sonicearth.com/showthread.php?t=192

Gee thanks,dude....like the new look of Carlson?

Ziggy
June 21st, 2008, 07:16 PM
I like the discriptions, but the Bio is still coming up short.
Your skills are Improving much but your Bio needs more story to it, ok?
You're doing good. Keep it up.

Sparky
June 21st, 2008, 11:17 PM
If I see another character that involves love with Shadow, I will HURL CHUNKS.

Tyke Wan Doe... no. It's Tae Kwon Do.

Space it out, make us able to read it. Use lots of s p a c e s and remember you can put spaces after you use the : symbol.

Blood types do not include the number 0. It is called O, and it is a positive or negative.

Deano
June 22nd, 2008, 12:05 PM
It's completely unreadable. The lack of spacing between lines just makes the whole thing look like a mess of TL;DR.

Seriously, use the damn template that CarnalCandy made, check your older topic which you should have edited, and actually COPY the template, that's what it's for.

carlsonthehedgehog
June 22nd, 2008, 12:13 PM
If I see another character that involves love with Shadow, I will HURL CHUNKS.

Tyke Wan Doe... no. It's Tae Kwon Do.

Space it out, make us able to read it. Use lots of s p a c e s and remember you can put spaces after you use the : symbol.

Blood types do not include the number 0. It is called O, and it is a positive or negative.

I will make sure I get it right next time!Thanx Sparky!