next gen of speeders

[SonicTheHedgehogXx]

spark and sonic were walking around spark is a yellow hedgehog with a green bandana around his neck and a black amrband with a red 's' on it he also has the power to control lightning and he has blue and red shoes ,spark is sonic's long lost twin brother his spikes are faced downwards like sonic's.
little did they know they had another brother

sonic looked at spark and smirked "can't catch me!"he said running his fastest spark ran at the same speed as sonic "yes i can" he grabbed sonic's arm "got'cha!" said spark skidding to a hault "damn you're fast"said sonic smiling .sonic got out his extreme gear and jumped on he hovered all the way home

spark got his out and jumped on while he was riding he laid down and stared at the sky he was hovering calmly suddenly one of eggman's robots appeared it looked like Spark.
spark jolted off his extreme gear and put his palms together and made a lightning ball it hit metal Spark and caused it to self-destruct

Snipe the hedgehog was running when he saw the attack . he was carrying a picture of Spark and Sonic and him with there mother.
he stopped next to Spark "hey there..brother" said Snipe

[Kursed]

Good idea, but it needs more detail. (I'm not trying to discourage you) Okay?

[Ziggy]

Seriously, it's not a bad idea, but you have give more detail and try not to run all of your sentences together. I would join if this RP had a better intro.

[Triple S3]

spark and sonic were walking around spark is a yellow hedgehog with a green bandana around his neck and a black amrband with a red 's' on it he also has the power to control lightning and he has blue and red shoes ,spark is sonic's long lost twin brother his spikes are faced downwards like sonic's.
little did they know they had another brother

sonic looked at spark and smirked "can't catch me!"he said running his fastest spark ran at the same speed as sonic "yes i can" he grabbed sonic's arm "got'cha!" said spark skidding to a hault "damn you're fast"said sonic smiling .sonic got out his extreme gear and jumped on he hovered all the way home

spark got his out and jumped on while he was riding he laid down and stared at the sky he was hovering calmly suddenly one of eggman's robots appeared it looked like Spark.
spark jolted off his extreme gear and put his palms together and made a lightning ball it hit metal Spark and caused it to self-destruct

Snipe the hedgehog was running when he saw the attack . he was carrying a picture of Spark and Sonic and him with there mother.
he stopped next to Spark "hey there..brother" said Snipe

can i help carry on?