Carlson the hedgehog

[carlsonthehedgehog]

Full name:Carlson Mia Mai Hedgehog!!!!! Likes:being one of the guys, drawing, and archeology!!!! Dislikes:guys who see girls as playmates!!!!! Age:14!!!!! Theme song:She's a Rebel by Green Day!!!!! Abilities:Tyke Wan Doe, and starting an earthquake when she screams, she can also turn into megahypx Carlson(it is where she turns purple and develops into a giant)!!!!! Weaknesses:fire!!!!! Parents: Arieanna and Ed Hedgehog (still alive)!!!!!! Siblings:brother named Flashy!!!!! Group:Megahypx

[Sparky]

What the hell is with the exclamation points? We don't need those. It just makes it look crappier than it already is.

There's something called s p a c e s . Use them.

You need a hell of a lot more information, including a history. Deano should come around here some time with a link to a template you can and should use.

This needs to be WAY neater.

It's not Tyke Wan Doe. It's spelled Tae Kwon Do.

[carlsonthehedgehog]

Go cry in your corner little emo...I kno dat life sucks but meh god already get over it yo noob.

[Ziggy]

Go cry in your corner little emo...I kno dat life sucks but meh god already get over it yo noob.


First of all, Sparky is a moderator.
Second, How could you call a someone a noob if your grammar sucks ass and you pick a fight with someone 4 years older than you?
Third: Your Bio is crap. It needs way more then what you have now.



(OMG I'm so getting an infraction):mad:

[Jaícei]

You, Carlson, are the coolest motherfucker I have ever met.

May I gay marry you?

[Rudeboy Krazy]

Go cry in your corner little emo...I kno dat life sucks but meh god already get over it yo noob.

Uncalled for. Sparky was giving adivce, not flaming you.

Show some respect, and while you're at it, I'll link you to the template myself - Click Here (http://www.sonicearth.com/showthread.php?t=716).

[Deano]

Go cry in your corner little emo...I kno dat life sucks but meh god already get over it yo noob.

Your attitude needs work, especially towards moderators.

Show some respect, and while you're at it, I'll link you to the template myself - Click Here (http://www.sonicearth.com/showthread.php?t=716).

Use that template, it's well designed, so much so that there is little to none detail missed to tell about a character.

Work on the attitude, or you'll be outta here.