Alex Kaisentrifel
September 1st, 2007, 04:24 PM
This is my fan fiction, it can be seen here
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3729797/1/Sonics_Advanced_Adventure
I'll get to posting more of the parts later on, because I don't really feel like bolding everything or posting stuff here right now
Espio
September 1st, 2007, 07:37 PM
Y'know.... The plot sounds somewhat like the opposite of the plot from Pokemon the Movie 2000....
Alex Kaisentrifel
September 1st, 2007, 07:43 PM
Y'know.... The plot sounds somewhat like the opposite of the plot from Pokemon the Movie 2000....
Really? I don't even remember what happened in that movie
Steel Valor
September 2nd, 2007, 09:36 AM
Nice going Ginks I like it so far!
Alex Kaisentrifel
September 2nd, 2007, 12:55 PM
Update
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3729797/3/Sonics_Advanced_Adventure
Scene 3: A way to remember names
Ginkgo felt devastated that he couldn’t tell Sonic what Eggman was up to. If only he could remember the names of Sonic’s enemies, and his life would be slightly easier. But for some reason, he always tended to forget names over and then.
Ginkgo had to remember the name in order to get Sonic to believe his story. It wasn’t a story to begin with. It was what he heard from Eggman, and the only thing stopping the message from getting through, is remember a simple name.
“Why won’t anyone believe me?” whined Ginkgo “It seems everyone is against me, I gotta try harder. . .” Ginkgo stayed silent for a while, as the wind blew gently on his forehead quills.
Ginkgo closed his eyes, as he focused on the sounds within the area. He listened to the wings of the Flickies that flew in the forest, he heard some squirrels scurrying from place to place. Ginkgo’s eyes flashed open and he looked in the air. He thought to himself, “Maybe Shadow can help me get the message to Sonic. Even if we’re enemies, he has helped us sometimes, and he did save the world along with Sonic.” Ginkgo soon found a few more downsides to this idea “But I do torture him a lot by being a pester and banging him with my pole, and I hate him! It’d be odd to ask someone you hate to help you” Ginkgo shook his fur and tried to be more serious with the situation. “It doesn’t matter! I’ll try to tell Shadow anyways, and maybe he’ll help me, maybe he won’t. Only time will tell!” he whispered to himself.
Ginkgo thought for a while where he could find Shadow, and his best guess was either in the meadows, or a lair in the desert. Ginkgo first tried out the desert, and found him in the farthest room from the entrance. Ginkgo immediately ran through the long hallway, passing through traps and false paths quickly, and ran into the room Shadow was in.
Shadow flinched when he saw the long eared kid enter the room. Shadow recovered instantly and asked him why he was here.
“Shadow! It’s awful!” cried Ginkgo “This guy is trying to take over the world, and in order to do it, he’s going to take the light away from us! I don’t want to live in the darkness.” Ginkgo wailed, as his voice started to crack, and tears of worry started dropping from his eyes “You gotta help me get the message to Sonic! I can’t remember the name of his enemy, so I can’t get the message through”
“You should really consider finding a way on how to remember. My guess would be the one he hates the most: Eggman! Can you remember that name?” asked Shadow
“No, I can’t remembered” whispered Ginkgo in an almost muted way
“Then just tell Sonic that it’s his enemy planning it, and you can’t remember the name, describe him a bit. Maybe he’ll believe it then” suggested Shadow
“Okay, thanks for your help Shadow” Ginkgo said smiling with joy. Shadow was a bit confused, for he hasn’t seen Ginkgo smile to him in a nice way for a long time. He didn’t know what to say back to Ginkgo, but he just made a quick response of:
“You’re welcome, nature boy” said Shadow softly as he watched him flee the lair quickly. Shadow sighed and smiled back at Ginkgo, even if he had already left “Good luck to you, Ginkgo!”.
Back in the street that Sonic lived on, he saw that Ginkgo had posted that Eggman was going to attempt taking over the world again. Sonic was a bit confused at this moment.
“How did Ginkgo remember my enemy’s name? Doesn’t he usually forget?” he thought to himself “I guess not. . . but then he seemed to have been trying to tell me something earlier. . . perhaps”-
“Sonic!” interrupted Tails “Eggman is on again! Actually, he hacked into my transmission device and he’s delivering a message.”
“Well, Sonic! Perhaps I should just go on into telling the plan to you right now, seeing if you can’t do much to stop it!” he started “There are these things called the dark orbs. There are three of them, which I have two right here” he said as he showed 2 dark orbs in his hands to Sonic
“No way!” screamed Sonic as he observed the dark energy fields around the orbs.
“You see, I only need to find the last one now, and then the islands will rise! The darkness barrier will be reflected from each island as they float higher into the air. Once that is done, everything below it will be engulfed in darkness. However, before this happens. You can give up, and get the residents to surrender to my reign. And you’ll all be spared”
“I will NEVER give up, Eggman! Not even if the world will be pretty much darkened to the max. We will still have the light shining in us to guide the way!” Sonic spoke with confidence.
“You’re rather confident, but do whatever you want! In the end, you’ll regret your choice anyways” said Eggman as he disconnected the call on Tails’ transmission device
“Now what do we do?” asked Tails with the fear shining in his eyes
“Don’t worry, Tails! We’ll find a way” answered Sonic with confidence. Just then, Ginkgo landed next to Sonic’s house, and rushed to Sonic.
“Sonic! It’s one of your enemies who are planning all of this. What I told you earlier” started Ginkgo, but before he said more, Tails had told them that they already knew, and they should set out and find the last dark orb before Eggman did. Ginkgo nodded, and flew in another direction.
"Alright then!" said Ginkgo "Let's go, before that weirdo brings darkness to the world" he said glaring and raging up again. "Let's go!" he repeated.
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