Shift the Echidna

[E-123 Omega]

My second attempt at a fan character. Hope you enjoy!

Name: Tray Gordon

Nicknames: Shift

Species: Human (most of the time Echidna)

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Occupation:bank robber

Powers: a shapeshifter who can take the shape of any body he touches and can alter that form any way he pleases by changing colors, shapes, and can even add past absorbed DNA to the copy

General size: 6' as human 4' as Mobian

Physical appearance/attire: As a human Tray is 6' tall with a football player build and track runner like legs. As a mobian it varies because of his shapeshifting powers

IQ: Depends who's DNA he absorbs

Known Relatives: Parents (both deceased)

History: Lived with his parents when he was a boy but after a fire in his home his parents died. Refusing to live in a foster home, Tray ran away until he learned of his natural shapeshifting powers and took the form of a Echidna after he ran in with Knuckles.

Goals: Main goal in life is to be better than anybody in the world, no matter how many people he had to copy

Likes: To find worthy people to copy so he can become stronger

Dislikes: Technology

Fears: Robots

Life/Death
Self: Me? Die? Please?

Others: As long as they don't have anything useful to duplicate they're worthless

Attitudes toward;

Money: Banks are always full of money, why not just take some!

Power: Always looking for more.

work: What can I say, I love what I do

Fighting: Shows me peoples full capacity of power

Anger/Forgiveness: Only if someone just won't die/ They always end up dead

Mental Condition(s): Some might call him crazy because of his constant search for better people to absorb

Alignment: Dark

Strengths: Vary on who he has absorbed

Weaknesses: If hit hard enough or exhausted enough he will lose DNA absorb and become weaker

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Well that's it. Please post opinions so I can work on him. Thanks.

[Day]

I looked at the topic title and thought it said "Shit the Echidna."

... that's my only thought on this.

[Crimson The Dark Bat]

I looked at the topic title and thought it said "Shit the Echidna."

... that's my only thought on this.

Agreed. Human/animal morphs are way too cliched.

[Black Knight]

Nothing wrong with the morphing, but the character is boring and have no personality what so ever. It's based on a 'I'M EVIL AND SNEAKY! LOLOLOL!' stereotype used to make your character seem cool, but they end up boring and, like I said, cliche stereotypes.

[Deano]

The whole DNA absorption stuff sounds like you don't actually have ANY originality, so say you were to use this character in an RP, you'd just take ideas from other characters.

Sorry, but it really needs work, this is disappointing.

[E-123 Omega]

I'm still working on the whole originality thing. It's harder than I thought. Thanx for the honest post though. Does anybody have any sugestions so I may improve the character?

[puratrix]

mix things up make twists sit and think for a week and come back with what you have thought of