Shockwave and his bio

[brikk1]

I. Basic Profile

A. Name: Shockwave X

B. Nicknames:The Ground-Shaker

C. Species:?????

D. Gender:male

E. Age:???

F. General size:About as tall as an average kid

G. Physical appearance/attire: Picture -attire http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/9488/shockwaveuy3no2.png

H. IQ:110

I. Dominant Hand:Left

J. Allergies:Sulfur

K. Known Relatives:none

L. Birth-date:unknown

M. Birth-place:unknown

N. History:none is on record

O. Items of note:Thinks he was once a human

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II. Personality

A. Goal[s]:To find out various things about himself

B. Likes:Sherbert, cold, water, air, open, easy movement

C. Dislikes:cramped, heat, headaches, migranes,

D. Fears:bees, blood (faints with the blood)

E. Attitude Towards Life/Death:
~1. Self:Save self no matter
~2. Others:save them if I can still live

F. Attitude Towards People:
~1. Family: kind, calm
~2. Friends:calm, chatty
~3. Rivals: eerie silence, suspense
~4. Enemies: leave
~5. Strangers:nervous depending on feeling

G. Attitude Toward Money/Power: pieces of paper that has caused many wars

H. Attitude Toward Work:I'll do it. Might not like it though

I. Attitude Toward Danger: Come on lets do this

J. Attitude Toward Fighting:No blood please

K. Attitude Toward Anger/Forgiveness:I'll accept it

F. Mental Condition[s]: SPD

G. Quotes:none

H. Theme Song.none

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III. Current Status

A. Current Residence:Green Hill Zone

B. Occupation:Odd jobs that appear

C. Social Class:Medium

D. Economic Class:Medium

E. Alignment: Drifts from side to side

F. Reputation: bad and good

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IV. Skills and Ineptitudes

A. Powers: Shake the Earth after a fall (higher I am the bigger it is)

B. Combat abilities:Electric burst

C. Ultimate attacks:Chaos Kill (it may kill foe and will destroy objects), Earthquakes from high up

D. Basic Fighting Style: Distanced

E. Talents:abilitie to spin without dizziness

F. Strengths:
~1. Mental: smart
~2. Psychological:able to confuse
~3. Emotional:strong will
~4. Physical: strong
~5. Supernatural:friends with the spirits
~6. Miscellaneous:

G. Weaknesses:
~1. Mental:tired often
~2. Psychological:
~3. Emotional:
~4. Physical:weak at times
~5. Supernatural:
~6. Miscellaneous:

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V. Relationships

A. Spouse/Divorcees:none

B. Friends:Varies

C. Rivals:Chaos (from Sonic Adventure DX)

D. Enemies:Varies


This is shockwave

[Rudeboy Krazy]

Eh, good try but I think you need to add more to the character. A lot of the stuff I see on the profile need some explanation, and a well-written backstory would be nice.

Plus, there are enough characters in general with amnesia, try being original and think of a something unique (I'm sort of a hypocrite for pointing that out though, since one of my own characters is an amnesiac too).

Hmm, let's see, if I were you, I'd also explain in-depth what his powers/abilities do, especially Chaos Kill (It sounds like a god-mod power). Could you also explain his weaknesses better? For Supernatural Weakness you put 'spirit hurts'. I'm not entirely sure what that means, could you explain it, give a short description in the profile perhaps?

Lastly; his IQ is 66? That score represents the character having some sort of mental deficiency. The average IQ is 90 to 106. Research some stuff before implementing it.

EDIT: One more thing I forgot to add. I saw that you put his rival as 'Chaos'. Do you mean the Sonic character Chaos or some other fan-character? It's not very recommended to tie your fan-characters in with official ones.